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SPuL vs L.I.
Yeah...this will be a hot one....
RULES 10 Lines No feeding No biting No hate votes No crew votes No dickriding Due Friday Aight goodluck... |
i am checkin in......will have this verse dropped later in the week......got lots of shit goin on........goodluck SPuL........
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checkin' in. Good luck to you too, fool. lol :thumbup: Also, it's 12 lines, not 10. 10 makes the verse weird to me. I
ll post in 30, maybe |
aiight, here it is:
You always come soft, in the midst of everything that you do Yo, I’ve wiped my ass… wit toilet paper that’s harder than you Wanna end my losin’ streak, lol, you make me wanna laugh You said it so correctly wit yo quote, “I’m such a dumbass” ^(AIM Conversation) “Fashos” you are my bitch… I even got you makin’ beats for me After this battle is concluded, “weerd”, I’ll have you kissin’ my feet, you see? ^(His AIM lingo lol) You probably have a lot of Deadly Visionz, cuz you’re affected by a curse The only think Murderous about your Methodz, is how you kill your OWN verse Man, we used to be cool, but I'ma betray you... jus like Treason Cuz you deliver shitty ass verses. Now THAT's 'The Reason' Hmm… L.I.… there really WASN’T a good meanin’ for that But after this battle is through… it’ll be acknowledged as the Loser Impact aiight, there's my spit. |
My Verse
Okay SPuL....i know we cool...but this is business....
Shit i aint gonna lie, ya got skills, yeah compared to fuckin herbs... People know ya wack, ya couldnt take action if ya name was a verb... u Battle people who slacked off, barely beat em, but walk round all cocky… Look your wack, Our skill level gap is larger than kids smiles who play hockey… SPuL7988: yo, I got a fuckin' loss. WTF?
I guess you cant take losing, quit quickly, this is the same outcome...SPuL7988: hol on. I'm pissed off right now. lol Tar UNC Heelz: lol SPuL7988: there goes the streak lol Tar UNC Heelz: lol whod u lose to Tar UNC Heelz: the tag team? SPuL7988: yea lmfao SPuL7988: opened for 7th time Tar UNC Heelz: lol SPuL7988: gotta get it reopened hopefully SPuL tells me what he's gonna spit, how can he be that dumb?!...(look below to understand) SPuL7988: I'm gonna use that dumbass
Weak and weary fall first, permanantly remember how i knocked ya...Tar UNC Heelz: use what SPuL7988: line in our battle lol Tar UNC Heelz: whut line SPuL7988: that "I'm a dumbass" line in our battle And have this bitch beggin for life more than Frankenstein's docta... C this herb is my bitch, i have him crawling and beggin at my feet... Keep ya tongue in ya mouth, cause your the one who's buyin my beat... So quit runnin ya mouth and realize that your win streak was a fluke... Killed by ya own weapon, look down the left, same as u did to yung duke... |
uppin' for votes.
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ok break down
spul your opener was pretty nice good set up line helped out the punch good opener your closer wass a nice personal but better things for l.i though lol good wording in it to and the rest of your verse had a bunch of personals the aim lingo was pretty soft punch the treason line was sick lmao damn overall i was fealin about half your verse brah tight verse the aim shit is what was your downfall l.i your opener was nice good wordplay and punch and a concept not used much your closer was nice to good way to point that out that he uses that style way to much and the rest of your verse was nicely worded not so much used concepts and good personals good job of putti nthe convo part in it instead of just sayin the verse nobody would have got it tight verse as well but you get my vote for being more consitent with your personals and punchs i felt tight battle sons this is why people should battle on there own level shit is actually worth readin and keeps attention vote l.i no hate either even after i read that aim convo lol Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. No Crew Votes |
thanks for the feedback upp
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ok, whatever. uppin'
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yo this battle was cool i liked both verses but both could of did better
as for spul You always come soft, in the midst of everything that you do Yo, I’ve wiped my ass… wit toilet paper that’s harder than you (it was a decent open i seen better the opening could of hit harder 7/10) Wanna end my losin’ streak, lol, you make me wanna laugh You said it so correctly wit yo quote, “I’m such a dumbass” ^(AIM Conversation)(ok but why did u tell L.I u were gon' use it what ever 5/10) “Fashos” you are my bitch… I even got you makin’ beats for me After this battle is concluded, “weerd”, I’ll have you kissin’ my feet, you see? ^(His AIM lingo lol)(didnt like it but it was average could been better 6/10) You probably have a lot of Deadly Visionz, cuz you’re affected by a curse The only think Murderous about your Methodz, is how you kill your OWN verse (hahaha this line was funny 8/10) Man, we used to be cool, but I'ma betray you... jus like Treason Cuz you deliver shitty ass verses. Now THAT's 'The Reason' (this line was a'ight jus could of been better 7/10) Hmm… L.I.… there really WASN’T a good meanin’ for that But after this battle is through… it’ll be acknowledged as the Loser Impact (decent ending 7/10) |
Shit i aint gonna lie, ya got skills, yeah compared to fuckin herbs...
People know ya wack, ya couldnt take action if ya name was a verb...(i liked the opening 8/10 u Battle people who slacked off, barely beat em, but walk round all cocky… Look your wack, Our skill level gap is larger than kids smiles who play hockey…(ha like that one 9/10 I guess you cant take losing, quit quickly, this is the same outcome... SPuL tells me what he's gonna spit, how can he be that dumb?!...(it was ok not great 6/10 Weak and weary fall first, permanantly remember how i knocked ya... And have this bitch beggin for life more than Frankenstein's docta...(ha much better than the last line 7/10 C this herb is my bitch, i have him crawling and beggin at my feet... Keep ya tongue in ya mouth, cause your the one who's buyin my beat...(liked that one 9/10) So quit runnin ya mouth and realize that your win streak was a fluke... Killed by ya own weapon, look down the left, same as u did to yung duke...(it was decent 7/10 overall i think L.I took this one but in the rules it said no feedin so imma have to vote for spul no beef |
Ok, to tell the truth the AIM stuff really isn't doing it for me.. seems like just stretched for personals... I mean people say stupid shit on AIM all the time.. not impressive. Also, the murderous methods = kill your own verse... everyone uses that personal. LI I like the way you flipped that down the left line thing... but I didn't really like it when Spul did it and it's not much better now, only cuz you flipped it.
Basically, this battle came down to the openers, and a couple other lines. Spul takes the opener I think because it was kinda funny, but LI takes it overall because wtf Spul.. how can you call him your bitch when you're paying him. That's whack. v/ LI hit up this battle: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122976 |
^LMFAO I never even paid him. lol :laugh2:Uppin' for votes.
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This was a pretty good battle....
Spul came with some pretty good punches but they weren't the best. Some could have been better. Flow was OK but nothing that special........LI had personals coming from every angle. I liked how he flipped the words down the left on him. I don't like it as a punch but since he was flipping it on him, it worked out well. Flow wasn't bad either.... Vote - LI Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. No Crew Votes |
thanks for all the feedback.......upping................
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Close battle y'all....Spul you had a good opener it was the highlight of ya verse, your closer was tight too, you had some filler shit in there though, your vocab was alrite, you had a few solid multies in there, wordplay could use some work, metas were ok, could have been a better drop, but not bad.
L.I. this could have been a good batt;le for you, but you had to do that corny AIM shit, that killed your whole verse in my opinion, you took wack to another level wit that shit, an this ain't no hate its just that you should have thought about that one, I mean you had some solid punches especially your closer but that bullshit killed any chance you had of winning this shit Vote: Spul |
ok nice drops by both emcees yall did it real tight
LI-nice punches and using the beginig of every sentence but u said no feeding and it looked like u fed in yo verse but on and off bestline-Shit i aint gonna lie, ya got skills, yeah compared to fuckin herbs... People know ya wack, ya couldnt take action if ya name was a verb... hott as start worsteline-C this herb is my bitch, i have him crawling and beggin at my feet... Keep ya tongue in ya mouth, cause your the one who's buyin my beat... ^^^ not a bad verse but it looked liek u fed from his verse maybe iss juss me but iuno dass yall problem spul-nice drop flow was sick added wit punches homie bestline-You always come soft, in the midst of everything that you do Yo, I’ve wiped my ass… wit toilet paper that’s harder than you niceee worsteline-none but vocab wasnt a factor in yo verse but usin you and dat type ish at da end was cool wit yo flow cuz it was titez LI open-9.7/10 punches-9.5/10 flow-9.2/10 structure-10/10 consitant verse-9.6/10 vocab-9.3/10 creattivity-9/10 close-8.7/10 overall-9.3/10 spul- open-9.7/10 punches-9.4/10 flow-9.4/10 structure-10/10 consitant verse-9.5/10 vocab-8.7/10 creattivity-9.1/10 close-9/10 overall-9.4/10 winner-spul |
aiight, 3-3 uppin' for votes.
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lol i didnt fuckin feed.......i had my concept all written down before he dropped......i'd admit it if i did....but i didnt......up.........
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ok hot drops by both guys...
Ok i'm not gonna breakdown for each i'm gonna give an overall thing for both of you... ok L.I. takes flows in this one...his multies where bad ass... but punches where takin by spul... even though spul did hit with his punches L.I.'s punches where mad personasl Including the AIM convorsation... Battles are judged on by creativty... L.I. had spelled out Spul is Wack and te aim convo and makin fun of it is pretty damn creative Spul 8/10 L.I. 9/10 vote L.I. hit up my battle gaisnt phat mic ... link in sig Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. No Crew Votes |
^um, yea, thanks for the feedback, but crew votes aren't allowed. Yea, I guess I gotta PM strobe now.
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Damn, good battle, I dunno who won yet, Ima take these catergories honestly, and then we'll all find out.
Flow: Damn, Ima give that a tie, Spul was good, L.I.'s was sick, usin' Spul's shit and all, but the aim conversation fucked it up a bit. Punches: L.I. his shit's was HARD, liked the hockey line Multis: L.I. had 1 or2 Personals: Spul Closer killed it Vocab: Even Opener: L.I. Fuckin' sick Closer: Spul ^^^^^ Fav Bars: Spul Hmm… L.I.… there really WASN’T a good meanin’ for that But after this battle is through… it’ll be acknowledged as the Loser Impact L.I. u Battle people who slacked off, barely beat em, but walk round all cocky… Look your wack, Our skill level gap is larger than kids smiles who play hockey… Y'all both came madd hard, that's the kinda battle I expected. L.I. barely takes this one with one more category than Spul, nice job both of y'all. ~CJ~ |
Ok here. You guys knoe me, I dont do really long explanations, but anyways.
SpuL- nice verse, Funny opener...Chuckled a lil. You're punches were nice, but the MM thing... Eww, cmon man.You're closer was, alright... A different look at his name. The aim stuff isn't really a good way to get punches because like someone said earlier, people say a lot of weird shit on aim... Overall, nice punches and a good opener.... I hope he jumps you for that 5 bucks ;)... hah j/p LI- A nice structure and good creativity, though SpuL has done this before. You had some good wordplay and punches. The aim thing is wack, but you used it better then he did. I cant beleive he TOLD you one of his lines... haha. But anyways, Overall... Good punches, creativity and your opener was nice too. Aim... WaCKKK! Alright, this was close, and i liked the battle. This was down to punches, because the opener we both pretty nice. I think LI came harder with the punches. It was a really fair match up here. Good battle guys. V/LI |
upping...........
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never mind, uppin'
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yo, uppin' this ish.
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what the fuck spul he is`nt in our crew get the vote back? |
damn this was a good battle..too bad i couldn't vote cuz we crew ..aight..i gotta give this one to Spul...his shyt was tite...even u L.I....jst i felt that spul had hella better punches...ummm.....i'm to lazy to type other stuff...jst uppin this shyt...lolz
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You always come soft, in the midst of everything that you do
Yo, I’ve wiped my ass… wit toilet paper that’s harder than you 7/10 funny shit. solid punch with humour Wanna end my losin’ streak, lol, you make me wanna laugh You said it so correctly wit yo quote, “I’m such a dumbass” ^(AIM Conversation) 7/10 good personal, didnt hit all that hard tho “Fashos” you are my bitch… I even got you makin’ beats for me After this battle is concluded, “weerd”, I’ll have you kissin’ my feet, you see? ^(His AIM lingo lol) 7/10 another good personal, hit fairly hard You probably have a lot of Deadly Visionz, cuz you’re affected by a curse The only think Murderous about your Methodz, is how you kill your OWN verse 9.5/10 hot shit Man, we used to be cool, but I'ma betray you... jus like Treason Cuz you deliver shitty ass verses. Now THAT's 'The Reason' 5/10 hmmmm not feeling it Hmm… L.I.… there really WASN’T a good meanin’ for that But after this battle is through… it’ll be acknowledged as the Loser Impact 6/10 iight closer Shit i aint gonna lie, ya got skills, yeah compared to fuckin herbs... People know ya wack, ya couldnt take action if ya name was a verb... iight 6/10 u Battle people who slacked off, barely beat em, but walk round all cocky… Look your wack, Our skill level gap is larger than kids smiles who play hockey… 6/10 hmmm wasent feeling it Weak and weary fall first, permanantly remember how i knocked ya... And have this bitch beggin for life more than Frankenstein's docta... 8/10 hit hard C this herb is my bitch, i have him crawling and beggin at my feet... Keep ya tongue in ya mouth, cause your the one who's buyin my beat... 6.5/10 ok personal So quit runnin ya mouth and realize that your win streak was a fluke... Killed by ya own weapon, look down the left, same as u did to yung duke... iight closer 6.5/10 vote spul, overall better verse L.I. i liked the input of the AIM convo, dope idea |
aiight, thanks for votin'. Uppin' for one more vote
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ok nice drops by both emcees yall did it real tight
LI-you came good in the begining and then you feed off his verse...that is a no no. You have good punches and structure bestline-original Shit i aint gonna lie, ya got skills, yeah compared to fuckin herbs... People know ya wack, ya couldnt take action if ya name was a verb... good start off worsteline-you feed C this herb is my bitch, i have him crawling and beggin at my feet... Keep ya tongue in ya mouth, cause your the one who's buyin my beat... --------------------------------------------------------- spul-Punches flow average personals overall good perfomance bestline- You always come soft, in the midst of everything that you do Yo, I’ve wiped my ass… wit toilet paper that’s harder than you i think i herd it befor but maybe im trippin...but good punch worsteline- I had no love for the second line about the aim conversation it was stupid...and im too lazy to go to the first page and get it... LI open-9 punches-8 flow-7 structure-9 consitant verse-8 vocab-9 creattivity-9 close-7 overall-8 ------------------------------------------------ spul- open-7 punches-9 flow-9. structure-9 consitant verse-8 vocab-9 creattivity-9 close-9 overall-9 vote~spul no hate |
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