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lets do this mc murder

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free~2~rhyme, i'll make you eat~my~rhymes, and their "hot" so get ready to kneel~to~mine//
do you feel~the~vibes? you couldn't win~wit~bribes, you've been~described, as dope but after you never gon' be seen~alive//
this guy gets bullied and gets locked~in~lockers, my rhymes shock~wit~shockers, you facin me, it ain't a simple game of cops~n~robbers//
i'll leave you dead without a trace~of~evidence, i put the "evil" in place~wit~resident, you know how i get this good?, they say~its~irrelevant//
you rap like you've been awake~your~whole~life, take a rest dog or i'll take~your~whole~life and rape~your~housewife// NOW THATS RELEVENT
QUICKHIT SUN UVE BEEN BET BECAUSE MURDER IS ALWAYS A FUCKIN VET


SUN PLAY WITH FIRE U GET BURNED

u swallow so much dick they call u sperm creek bitch ya rythmes is so fuckin weak maybe o no wait im sure its another career if what u should seek man u need to purple pill to get ur dick to stand up right its so small aint no girl wanna bite atleast thats wat ur mom told me when i was fuckin her last night man y u talkin about fuckin animals and stupid shit like that man the only woman u gettin is my female cat ull never be up on my level hoe man ur done u aint rappin no mo ur done with this thing now just go in the corner and sit while i go over here and fuck ur girl's clit

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MC MURDER YOU TOOKT THIS BATTLE B/C THE OTHER GUY WAS WACK. YOUR PUNCHES WERE GOOD NOT GREAT. RETURN THE FAVOR:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123395

VOTE= MC MURDER

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mc murder you won
it's cause i liked the flow better then that other guy
other than that you were the same

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Quick ya need to develop ya verse. You need to switch to a bar structure to enhance your flow do that and your punches will hit harder. Mc murder you take this cause your pucnehs were consistent throughout and they were a little bit easier to understand.

yo mc nice flow nice punches
quick u need to work a lil more

but dont get me wrong quick u got potential so dont quit

o yea 1 more thing check out me v. don and see wat u think

i kno he won but tell me wat i need to work on so i can get it down right

murda had it down

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MC Murder = 33/50
Flow 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 7/10

QuikHit = 30/50
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 6/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 6/10

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mc go this one do doubt. his lyrics where crazier then the other guys and he rhymed more and his closure was better to so my vote goes to mc. check out this battle 2 plz
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127480

mc killed this motha fuka, in all regards, this is no shocker, better flow, harder punches, and it was funny. regards, keep elivate'n

sorry for the freepost but this is the 20th so I an poll it.