lets do this mc murder

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free~2~rhyme, i'll make you eat~my~rhymes, and their "hot" so get ready to kneel~to~mine//
do you feel~the~vibes? you couldn't win~wit~bribes, you've been~described, as dope but after you never gon' be seen~alive//
this guy gets bullied and gets locked~in~lockers, my rhymes shock~wit~shockers, you facin me, it ain't a simple game of cops~n~robbers//
i'll leave you dead without a trace~of~evidence, i put the "evil" in place~wit~resident, you know how i get this good?, they say~its~irrelevant//
you rap like you've been awake~your~whole~life, take a rest dog or i'll take~your~whole~life and rape~your~housewife// NOW THATS RELEVENT
QUICKHIT SUN UVE BEEN BET BECAUSE MURDER IS ALWAYS A FUCKIN VET


SUN PLAY WITH FIRE U GET BURNED

u swallow so much dick they call u sperm creek bitch ya rythmes is so fuckin weak maybe o no wait im sure its another career if what u should seek man u need to purple pill to get ur dick to stand up right its so small aint no girl wanna bite atleast thats wat ur mom told me when i was fuckin her last night man y u talkin about fuckin animals and stupid shit like that man the only woman u gettin is my female cat ull never be up on my level hoe man ur done u aint rappin no mo ur done with this thing now just go in the corner and sit while i go over here and fuck ur girl's clit

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MC MURDER YOU TOOKT THIS BATTLE B/C THE OTHER GUY WAS WACK. YOUR PUNCHES WERE GOOD NOT GREAT. RETURN THE FAVOR:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=123395

VOTE= MC MURDER

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

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mc murder you won
it's cause i liked the flow better then that other guy
other than that you were the same

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Quick ya need to develop ya verse. You need to switch to a bar structure to enhance your flow do that and your punches will hit harder. Mc murder you take this cause your pucnehs were consistent throughout and they were a little bit easier to understand.

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yo mc nice flow nice punches
quick u need to work a lil more

but dont get me wrong quick u got potential so dont quit