first drop on open mic..."fukk da industry" freestyle!
 

jea..my first post on dis shit...lets get it goin

dudes dont know shit about packin toastahz,so im get at dez rappin doljahs-
ima just send 2 of my doggs from ny da houston in matchin rovahs-
"u gotta feel me" im starvin ima run up on "lil flip" and snatch his clover's-
i keep gats in holstahs,, so da actin's ova it a be no problem clappin "hova"-

and dem punk ass "rocafella" niggas talk about dez arms they buck-
we a leave dis bitch on a "queens-bridge" after me & "nas" tie "beyonce" up-

i rep royal sickness niggaz who could tame dis gang,i'll re a range a lame-
like "50 cent" he talk a whole lot but dat nigga aint "change" da game-

u not fuckin with i plus im foul,when they found i rap all my sluts got proud-
if its beef u betta have a gun 4 "ja-da-kiss" or ima kill u datz just my "style"-

my set ride with weapons,so we dont talk just press guy's with wesson's-
u dont want it i get brand new "mac-10's" from my "west side connection"-

i could give a fukk about makin a grand,or chillin with a model naked in sand-
fukk "dip set" 2 my niggaz a beat "juelz" and ima just tape it on "cam"-

aight datz enuff...i aint expectin much feedback but if u wanna holla..just holla

not feelin the clappn Hova line...

but your rhyming was nice

flow was pretty good

pick a topic and write about it creatively w/imagery

this was good for a first spit though


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...Adding Some Lines...

::Dv verse::

...respect some shit, but that shit still deserves a diss..
like "slim shady" wouldn’t be shit, cuz I started eating "M&M’s" when I was like 6..
I’ll leave “Bone” alone, cuz they’re busy, “boning thugs in harmony”..
Alarming b..C'mon Even X cant harm Me...

-Added by DV :thumbup:

^^^lol okay...uppin dis bitch

Hahah^^Dophe aint it.

UppUN for this piece.

my nikka marv held it down should have gat at me for a collab on this


nice shit i liked it

Have ya'll ever hurred of bigsty h mad a song like dis its called i got a problem i think not sure... but its tight underground shit

Flwo Was Nice Some Of Them Lines Was Sick.........

that was some hot shit
keep rhymin, and dont ever be scared of any bitch!!!!

yeah i heard about dat song and i heard he got killed 2 i know if its true

nice^

ur pretty good girl..we should hook up sometime and collab

dat was sum sik rhymin u got flo like dem lines

line quality was good.
cut the " " then u might get respect
only new kids need that shit cuz
they cant comphrehend a punch from a pussy.
....just straight lines, are better.

lol umm no mah im not a girl ima dude so eazy with dat..but goodlookin on da feed back...GON

4 sho dunn goodlookin...GON

thats shyt was pretty phat but some of the lines were 2 drawn out and i didnt like the clappin hova line but hot spit yo especially for ur first time..............

aight dunn goodlookin....and fukk hova

uppin dis bitch

it was ok man :thumbup: :thumbup:

^^^jea goodlookin