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Old 05-13-04, 01:21 AM   #1
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first drop on open mic..."fukk da industry" freestyle!

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jea..my first post on dis shit...lets get it goin

dudes dont know shit about packin toastahz,so im get at dez rappin doljahs-
ima just send 2 of my doggs from ny da houston in matchin rovahs-
"u gotta feel me" im starvin ima run up on "lil flip" and snatch his clover's-
i keep gats in holstahs,, so da actin's ova it a be no problem clappin "hova"-

and dem punk ass "rocafella" niggas talk about dez arms they buck-
we a leave dis bitch on a "queens-bridge" after me & "nas" tie "beyonce" up-

i rep royal sickness niggaz who could tame dis gang,i'll re a range a lame-
like "50 cent" he talk a whole lot but dat nigga aint "change" da game-

u not fuckin with i plus im foul,when they found i rap all my sluts got proud-
if its beef u betta have a gun 4 "ja-da-kiss" or ima kill u datz just my "style"-

my set ride with weapons,so we dont talk just press guy's with wesson's-
u dont want it i get brand new "mac-10's" from my "west side connection"-

i could give a fukk about makin a grand,or chillin with a model naked in sand-
fukk "dip set" 2 my niggaz a beat "juelz" and ima just tape it on "cam"-

aight datz enuff...i aint expectin much feedback but if u wanna holla..just holla
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Old 05-13-04, 02:18 AM   #2
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not feelin the clappn Hova line...

but your rhyming was nice

flow was pretty good

pick a topic and write about it creatively w/imagery

this was good for a first spit though


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Old 05-13-04, 03:01 AM   #3
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...Adding Some Lines...

:v verse::

...respect some shit, but that shit still deserves a diss..
like "slim shady" wouldn’t be shit, cuz I started eating "M&M’s" when I was like 6..
I’ll leave “Bone” alone, cuz they’re busy, “boning thugs in harmony”..
Alarming b..C'mon Even X cant harm Me...

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Old 05-13-04, 06:37 PM   #4
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^^^lol okay...uppin dis bitch
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Old 05-13-04, 09:49 PM   #5
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Hahah^^Dophe aint it.

UppUN for this piece.
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Old 05-13-04, 10:55 PM   #6
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my nikka marv held it down should have gat at me for a collab on this


nice shit i liked it
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Old 05-13-04, 11:29 PM   #7
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Have ya'll ever hurred of bigsty h mad a song like dis its called i got a problem i think not sure... but its tight underground shit
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Old 05-14-04, 06:26 AM   #8
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Flwo Was Nice Some Of Them Lines Was Sick.........
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Old 05-15-04, 12:46 PM   #9
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that was some hot shit
keep rhymin, and dont ever be scared of any bitch!!!!
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Old 05-16-04, 12:50 PM   #10
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Have ya'll ever hurred of bigsty h mad a song like dis its called i got a problem i think not sure... but its tight underground shit


yeah i heard about dat song and i heard he got killed 2 i know if its true
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Old 05-16-04, 03:05 PM   #11
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nice^
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Old 05-16-04, 03:06 PM   #12
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ur pretty good girl..we should hook up sometime and collab
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Old 05-16-04, 03:35 PM   #13
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dat was sum sik rhymin u got flo like dem lines
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Old 05-16-04, 07:17 PM   #14
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line quality was good.
cut the " " then u might get respect
only new kids need that shit cuz
they cant comphrehend a punch from a pussy.
....just straight lines, are better.
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Old 05-17-04, 12:53 PM   #15
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ur pretty good girl..we should hook up sometime and collab


lol umm no mah im not a girl ima dude so eazy with dat..but goodlookin on da feed back...GON
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