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Black Thief vs. Plus Two
aiight minimum 10 bars....no max
No d/r,no crew,hate, or UNEXPLAINED VOTES!THEY WILL BE DELETED! No recycled or feeding!Absolutely not! Good Luck fam... |
Aiyo this this battle is already finished//
Aint no chance of losing win you battlin tha British// Nigga from tha U.K.// You gay//I slay// Think ya hot?whatever you say// I hate to ruin ya day// But if this was a job....you'd be suspended without pay// Dude a coward like Ja Rule...boasts like 50 cent// Put it together...I rule...Im winnin more than 50 percent// the only thing you can do is hope I fall// Shoot a couple of slugs at ya man Pope John Paul// Anytime anywhere we can take it there// Kill you in front of the P.M. Tony Blair// Im deadly wit either hand...my punchlines bust too// Hit ya wit tha left or tha southpaw..you get plustwo// Aint no chacne you gonna beat me and come out tha hero// Ill leave ya lookin like you walked right outta Ground Zero// |
boy this is british battlin british, but ive already won//
boy you think your the best, you are my son// the only thing black about you is your name// this kid is nothin to me, this is only a game// im sittin here smokin a reef, fuck wit me i will break your teeth// put me in front of tony blair he'd shoot you first// a vampire wouldn't drink your blood to quench his thrist// cos your blood in infected with HIV which you got from your mother// your messing with somebody like no other, im tha lyrical mc, i will shoot your brother// lol i seen your first line i saw u stutter// this white boy is gonna beat your ass down// you wonder y ppl laughin at you, boy get outta town// your an embarrisment to this site// comein to me thinkin your good, your rhymes are shyte// yo plustwo is from manchester// fuck with me ill kick you all the way to west chester// (america) |
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yea plustwo dont know why but u had this feel whihc made me laugh in a good way well dun and blacktheif did some ncie punches, but dis time i fink plustwo suased it
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uppin for votes... quit sleepin peepz n vote i will repay the favour...
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Black thief as you went on your verse started to get better but not as consistent as plustwo.
Plustwo punchez were more direct and hit harder all the way through. yall both could work on multiez betta mettaz and punchlinez too.. vote plustwo http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124829 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122740 ^^^ Could you return the favor {por Favor} |
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i'm goin with black thief, he had better punches and personals throughout,
plus two, your punches were almost always half filler or half stupid or somethin, work on comin up with a solid punch not just comin up with something and adding something elswe that rhymes to the end |
black thief u had this one because u came wit hard punches. some of ur lines didnt match up which made it a lil harder to read but it was all good.
plus two-some stuff didnt rhyme and ur punches were weak. im not one to talk but i think u could improve a lot jus keep practicin return the favor vote on my battles wit lil'cube and eric89 i need a couple more votes for the win, thanks v/ black thief |
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Na im doin it again Plus had this, it looked to me his verse had more effort on it and Thief some of ur verses were WAY too short e.g:
Nigga from tha U.K.// You gay//I slay// You need more depth and both need the wordplay V/Plustwo |
mad dog u aint voted its still 2-2 it should be 3-2 to me......
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vote= plus two
his flow sounded more presentable. he had nice punches. return da fava yall http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125740 |
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opener: Both-you both had the same style of openers so can't give it to one or the other.
Flow: Both-you had the same tpye of flow too. punches: Black Thief-nicee personals:Black Thief-even niceer closer:Plustwo- just better than his |
yo black thief ur punches were better and harder, but short lines in places, plustwo not all rhymed but ur flow was constant. both could do better, lol peace
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v=black thief
dis was close it was a good batle |
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Aight~ let me break it down~
Multis:none Flow:plustwo Wordplay:none Personals: Black thief Punches:Black thief Overall~:::::::::::::::::::::::::::::;Black thief Came harder in my opinion... alright battle i guess.. keep em comming~~ |
Man...quit sleepin yall
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Aiight uppin this bitch....vote yall ! I vote on yall shit...so yall can at least do tha same...fuck!
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a yo ma vote goes to black b/c he lead in flow, rhymes structture n punches good battle niggaz plus two u good but u need to elevate much respek to both of ya iight yo b ez
vote-black thief |
dey both was hot
black theif flowed more i like his rythm like i said dey both was hot |
um the punches in this just were not what they should be man thats it period
plus- your sturcher sux man work on that period man you really need to do something about that man, punches were iight i mean overall you need some work black- flow and one punch was better thats it you bearly scraped by this battle all depends on perseption and see that you got this by a mear word man v/black return the favor links in the sig |
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