DaCROZofHB vs Beyond Logic
 

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first to 5 votes wins
thats basically it

aight im checkin in

yea me too check in

its showtime


I write my flows original, you just findin lyrics that r fuckin stolen/
tryin to rap like fifty, but bitin other peoples shit like Michael Bolton/spittin so much fire got you walkin wit a black colon//
Call up DRE, but the doc cant help ya/
my blows fucked up ya system got ya lookin like Helta Skelta/
Logic, u wanna bang wit da best then y you flashin a nigga at rest(icon)/
i put ya to sleep 6 feet deep, cuz ur shit just cant hack it/
put ur dead body right on top of puns cuz i kno how u like it u Fuckin Faggot/
Get da Fuck off my website and hit up backdoe dot com/
take a picture of yoself bendin over and post it next to Lil John/
rappin dis text shit, cuz u dont got da ballz to get in my face and beef/
I spread ya legs like a pussy bitch, lookin like Dave Chapelles teef/

AMAZIN-MEN, You Couldn't Write A Hot Verse If You Were Holdin BLAZIN-PENS/ 1
PHASIN-CROZ, Like Preachers Out Drinkin I Got Ya PRAISIN-MY-BARS/ 2
Bullets GRAZIN This LAME Leavin Ya SCARED/ 3
You Couldn't Take Ya GAME To Another Level If Ya Spelled Ya NAME-IN-THE-STARS/ 4

You're Tongue Couldn't Tear Shit Up If You SPOUT-CLAWS/ 5
I RE-ROUTE-JAWS, I'd Rap Like You But I Ain't ABOUT-FLAWS/ 6
Come MEET-YA-GOD And I'll BEAT-YA-SQUAD/ 7
If Ya Raps Were Sugar Coated They Still Wouldn't Be SWEET-TO-JAWS/ 8
Leave Ya Neck Wrapped In SHEETS-WITH-SAWS Maybe That's The Reason Ya Can't FREE-WITH-OUT-THE-PAUSE/ 9
Attemptin To 'Suck Up This Beef' Is Like Tryin To Drink MEAT-THROUGH-STRAWS/ 10

*CoRpsMaN VoTiNg*
 

If Ya Raps Were Sugar Coated They Still Wouldn't Be SWEET-TO-JAWS/ 8
Leave Ya Neck Wrapped In SHEETS-WITH-SAWS Maybe That's The Reason Ya Can't FREE-WITH-OUT-THE-PAUSE/ 9
Attemptin To 'Suck Up This Beef' Is Like Tryin To Drink MEAT-THROUGH-STRAWS/ 10

Hot battle without A Question! Both emcees brought flames to the table but Beyond cameoff the hardest! The battle could have went anyway but "Beyond" took this battle!

Vote:Beyond

yo this was a very good battle.

DaCROZofHB structure: 8/10
rhymes: 7/10
creativeness: 7/10

Beyond Logic structure: 7/10
rhymes: 7/10
creativness: 7/10
DaCROZofHB takes this one by a hair

please vote on my shit http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125321
help me finish this bitch off.. yo man Jacket

Bth of ya shit was tight ass hell, but i have to go with my man dacrozofhb.

rappin dis text shit, cuz u dont got da ballz to get in my face and beef/
I spread ya legs like a pussy bitch, lookin like Dave Chapelles teef/

Thats the bar that set it off!!!!

this is why i set the post limit up cause of the newbs, still 1-0 uppin

thats fuckin gay dawg, i beat ur shit u didnt hit hard enough im up 2-1

uppin.......


get ur posts up and vote since logics a lil bitch

shut the fuck up you know you're bat. look at the cats who voted. you had no multis, no word play nothin

Aight. DaCroz Had A Better Flow, But Logic Came Wit Mad Punches And Some Nice Multi's.

Best Line:

PHASIN-CROZ, Like Preachers Out Drinkin I Got Ya PRAISIN-MY-BARS/


Overall, I Felt Like Logic's Verse Hit Harder.

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DAAAAAAAMN this was a close battle....

heres the breakdown

croz-i love dis niggas punches, but u stretched a couple lines a little too far, and ur structure was just alright....

logic-crazy ass metaphors, got me thinkin, your flow was tight

this was a fuckin close battle yall, both came hard as fuck, but im gonna have to go with......

vote-logic

man both of yall garbage!!! but i go with beyond.

Both of those are staright ass with no chase. I aint even gonna vote

i just read your battle with spokenbluntly and your verse was weak as fuck, what are you talkin about...you got murked

Damn, no contest... Logice took this in every single category from punches to flow, multis, everythang. No contest... Bounce backk and keep pushin CROZ!

VOTE=LOGIC

yo it was close but i sthink beyond hit harder without question

it was an alright battle, it was close in all aspects, but logic had better shit. dacroz had no multies or wordplay..kinda boring

uppin need 2 more votes

uppin

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I write my flows original, you just findin lyrics that r fuckin stolen/
tryin to rap like fifty, but bitin other peoples shit like Michael Bolton/
spittin so much fire got you walkin wit a black colon//
Call up DRE, but the doc cant help ya/
my blows fucked up ya system got ya lookin like Helta Skelta/

This is Croz's best part I think... Decent punches nice flow...the way the structure showed up looks fucked up but it looks worse than it really is.. all in all not too bad.

You're Tongue Couldn't Tear Shit Up If You SPOUT-CLAWS/ 5
I RE-ROUTE-JAWS, I'd Rap Like You But I Ain't ABOUT-FLAWS/ 6
Come MEET-YA-GOD And I'll BEAT-YA-SQUAD/ 7-
This was when I was sayin oh no, Beyond Logic bout rip this kid in 3 pieces and scatter him across my monitor...but then You used Jaws again in the next punchline...And the next bar flowed nicely but the punch didn't make sense to me, "Sheets with Saws" and "Free without a Pause"- Dont connect any wordplay for me, I dont see the punch or the meta if its there and I dont see it, Im sorry.. The last line though was a nice punch...All in all decent verse... Ima vote for BeyondLogic on this one, because I think you took it by a hair and a half....tight battle...1

uppin for votes

uppin come on finish this thing off

If Ya Raps Were Sugar Coated They Still Wouldn't Be SWEET-TO-JAWS/ 8
Leave Ya Neck Wrapped In SHEETS-WITH-SAWS Maybe That's The Reason Ya Can't FREE-WITH-OUT-THE-PAUSE/ 9
Attemptin To 'Suck Up This Beef' Is Like Tryin To Drink MEAT-THROUGH-STRAWS/

Nice Logic Had Better Punches Multis

Dacroz Had Better Structrue But has To Improve On Punches

Vote=Logic

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