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Mixxed MC 24 vs L.I.
Battle Rulez
No Crew Votes No Hate Votes No Dick Rideing Votes Check in Then Verse Due By 12:45 If u dont Spit By Verse Due Dq'ed Check in then we Both Keyin at da Same Time |
yo verses due 20 minutes after check in....aint no hour to write 10 lines.......
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Aiight So 10 is max rite w/e Checkin in By da way 1
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yeah 10 lines max 10 lines min....checked in....verses due in 20 min....g'luck...
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Yo u should watch yo self cause im comein behind yo back...
U juss a Weak Vet thatz knows he's acctually Wack... My rhymes Flyin off da top like crazy... ya linez is stretched thick like Jay-z... his lips Thick realli big yo im gonna kill this fake ass Trick... when ma rhyme in-flick u wit aids then u'll be Sick... so Get yo ass back when u can rip a newbie... this niggaz ass if he had Polution he still couldint Polut Me... im cool about it,u aint sikk,but u still talkin shit... juss quit,u aint rich,ma rhymez will leave u wit 22 stichs, now u can go n get ya MM BITCHS... Murderous Methods |
Thats what i need is good luck lol cause i kno im not gonna beat u
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ayo mixxed my bad for freepostin but i wont be on tonight make our battle verse due tomorrow sometime ~!1!~
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Corection Read this 1 not ^^^
its the same shit i juss spelt it wronge Yo u should watch yo self cause im comein behind yo back... U juss a Weak Vet that knows he's acctually Wack... Yo My rhymes Flyin off da top like crazy... ya linez is stretched thick like Jay-z... his lips Thick realli big yo im gonna kill this fake ass Trick... when ma rhyme in-flick u wit aids then u'll be Sick... so Get yo ass back when u can rip a newbie... this niggaz ass if he had Polution he still couldint Polut Me... im cool about it,u aint sikk,but u still talkin shit... juss quit,u aint rich,ma rhymez will leave u wit 22 stichs, now u can go n get ya MM BITCHS... Murderous Methods |
my verse
okay did lots of multis....fooled around with this battle....should be enough.....
Mixxed MC’s a wack name to be given, my lines sure make Mixxed emotions given… Your ambition obviously aint driven, and will be harder to complete in critical condition.. Killin you wit my sick multi style, this is all I need for a win bein plain yet vile… Like Lloyd banks makin the voters smile, Battlin this herb was worth my while… Look at his verse already admitted a loss, why’d you bother than with confidence toss’d... Cant run shit here cause dog im the boss, Couldn’t catch a win from me if u were randy moss… Enough of your talking just leave, The loss you receive… For you nothings achieved, Truth is told now im relieved… Face the facts and just quit, cause your rhymes are just shit… Your lines need to be tough hits, and they just don’t cut it… |
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Yo u should watch yo self cause im comein behind yo back...
U juss a Weak Vet thatz knows he's acctually Wack... 5...not strong and the rhymin was too basic. My rhymes Flyin off da top like crazy... ya linez is stretched thick like Jay-z... his lips Thick realli big 6...better than the opener but still pretty weak!! yo im gonna kill this fake ass Trick... when ma rhyme in-flick u wit aids then u'll be Sick... 5...weak again, u gotta seriously improve ure punches!! so Get yo ass back when u can rip a newbie... this niggaz ass if he had Polution he still couldint Polut Me... 6...average punch!! im cool about it,u aint sikk,but u still talkin shit... juss quit,u aint rich,ma rhymez will leave u wit 22 stichs, now u can go n get 6...a nice multi but overall weak closer!! Mixxed MC’s a wack name to be given, my lines sure make Mixxed emotions given… Your ambition obviously aint driven, and will be harder to complete in critical condition.. 7...nice multi and a pretty gud punch, but u can do better L.I. Killin you wit my sick multi style, this is all I need for a win bein plain yet vile… Like Lloyd banks makin the voters smile, Battlin this herb was worth my while… 7...gud multi again and a nice punch!! Look at his verse already admitted a loss, why’d you bother than with confidence toss’d... Cant run shit here cause dog im the boss, Couldn’t catch a win from me if u were randy moss… 7...punches are consistent but low standard for a sick vet!! Enough of your talking just leave, The loss you receive… For you nothings achieved, Truth is told now im relieved… 6...pretty weak line considering ure skill. Face the facts and just quit, cause your rhymes are just shit… Your lines need to be tough hits, and they just don’t cut it… 6...weak closer, but i guess u didnt really try against this guy. POINTS TOTALS Mixxed MC - 28/50 L.I. - 33/50 V/ - L.I. |
l.i. you get my vote obviously. better verse, punches and multiples. step up your lyrics though. keep it hott though. step up double time thoguh b/c your verse wasn't real tight. all in all better verse. mixxed mc step up your verse sucked ass dude.
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thanks uppin........i didnt try on this battle.......
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LI wins because his verse had punches... Mixxed you gotta elevate... work on wordplay and the such. Don't do 20 minutes battles... try to get some nice concepts in mind for wordplay and creative flipped punches.
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... err hit back my battle against lil-trip... shit's getting mad slept on.
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lol wow
mixxed brah had a average verse all ya punchs where about average none of em really stands out structure was pretty good but none of ya punchs or personals was really strong just work on that an try gettin creative or usin wordplay in ya verses might help out ya punchs a lil bit brah l.i bout a lil above average verse mulites aint really much when ya punchs arent to good said u didnt try an it showed ya barely brought enough to beat him that randy moss line was prolyl the best punch i seen in the whole battle vote l.i |
And i Used That Randy Moss Line Be 4 thaz fucked up it was when i was on Reg. Mixxed MC i said sunttin like this niggaz a loser chouldint Catch a Win if he was Randy Moss
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^ and how many other people have probably used that before....i used it to fit in with my multi's.....one more vote UP.
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PRetty Weak
V/L.I - he cam harder with better punched Mixed MC punchline`s were pretty weak Yo u should watch yo self cause im comein behind yo back... U juss a Weak Vet thatz knows he's acctually Wack... Defined wackness . . ^^ L.I was decent/below average I dont think he really tryed but he came better with punches & used personals like you did not really u just said he was a weak vet. |
decent battle...mixxed mc i think u came better than i usually see you...prolly cuz u battlin a vet average punches from you good wordplay and multies structure was a lil off it was kinda cosistent and it flowed pretty good...if u use more punches and personald you would be a hott emcee now i picture you as above average but use harder stuff and youll get more wins
overall: 6/10 L.I obviously you came weaker than usual in this battle...you had a good verse tho...nice punches multies were off tha chain good wordplay structure was decent flow was good...and very consistent i dont think i need to give you tips but good verse overall:7/10 vote : L.I he had the better verse due to harder punches a plyed line but it didnt affect his verse much cuz it was good mixxed yours was good too but not as good as L.I's..so my vote is to him ~!1!~ can someone drop a vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126194 |
too bad someone blacklisted me and i cant poll it o well not my problem
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one more fucking vote......................up..............
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uppp.........come on and fucking vote!!...................
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lol.... I can't vote (crew) - but i think it's funny how the votes actually 6-0, with two DQ's who aren't even crew votes. lol....
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v/ LI.
More creative.. some fresh concepts too.. personals were generally used to good effect.. a tad stretched on some lines.. an your opener was kinda weak.. but you picked up an stayed consistant thereafter.. MC.. structure was bad.. 5 stand alone punches killed any chance of a flow.. punches were ineffective cos they coulda been for anyone.. `Jay-Z` line was worst.. minimal personals too. Vote: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=121685 |
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