Eye's of pain
 

(INTRODUCTION)
Some times we all have a story
to tell on how the world looks
from our point of view...
and this is how i see some of it...

(VERSE)

YO..
I live my life every day
like it was my last
how can people survive in the streets?
If they eating out of garbage bags.

Dam it's so sad.
To watch a child eat out of the trash.
His mom ain't got a job,
and his dad just got out of rehab

His aunt came over to watch him
but she barely loves him
Unless you got cash
thats not family
she's a thorn in your ass

I've seen it hapen to many times
not to recognize it.
Just put your faith in god,
and he'll be there until the sun rises

Cant you here the babies crying
through all there pain.
I wonder where they at.
Im only one soldier.
but i'll always have your back's
Holding you closer.
God hold up my shoulders,
and give me the strength
So they can survive threw this.
While i try an take out the dents.

Cause every thing comes from within.
If its truly from your heart.
Join hands and make friends
and let's spread this love far

Everythings a jar
cause hate is alway's partially open
A vet with no legs
still beg's
cause his life seem's hopless
His eye's is open,
but his tear's still running
remembering moments
when he fought in vietnam.
Now the state dis own him

Why would you do such a thing?
when he fought for our freedom
Now it's against the law
for him to ask some body to feed him

How could you treat him in such a way
knowing the years has been long.
He steped on a mine for our sake
Then he lost two of his own.
The government is wrong
They used him
Then they took up his youth
Why would i join the arm forces?
when i know you lying to your troop's

(outro)
YO
This is the leader of soldiers of war.
Im hoping you can understand that life
has it's ups and downs.
Which is why I wrote this.
I really dont need your response
just read it and think about where
we are today compared to yeasterday
1 love
and keep hope alive
copy righted through ASCCAP 2004

Words To Live By

ummm..u gotta rhyme home boi elevate...

i was feelin what u was talkin bout, u can work on da structure a lil better but the concept was good even though its been done but it was good stay up

I thank you both for your comments
and good looking
but da jakah im not sure what you meant by

ummm..u gotta rhyme home boi elevate...
__________________
South Side Queenz..Holla
......DA Jokah......
But if you would read it
instead of just trying to look for rymes
You would see that it does.
Music is about expression
and I feel like
Im as good as any one els
but If you feel your better
you know what you can do home boy
i'll be here...first of all Im not a rookie
Second of all
you just didnt take the time to read it
I said I really didnt need a response
but i forgot....you only want it to ryme
hows this...cat mat hat bat...that sounds about right
if ryming is all its about to you
so think before you talk
most of all read and understrand it first
before you judge
LIKE I SAID I KEEP IT REAL
Im sorry if you take this the wrong way
but if you dont thanx for understanding
If you do thats your right to feel how you want
But im going to always keep it real

And young beezy
I feel what you said as well
but like I said before I keep it real.
yes it might have been done before ,
but not like me
because theres only one me
making it the only one in the world like it
And as far as the structure is concerned
we all got our own style
thats why God made us all different
but thanx fot your thoughts
I respect that..1 love
Keep hope alive

aight safe...

yea dat was gd u haf to elevate by rhymin ur words
elevate- Get betta
Homeboy-just sumr andom name ting for like a boi or wateva
lol if dat help yo out

lol ut oh baby_girl strait thug now she explainin our words and shyt lol j/p u kno i luv ya...but as for the drop... kid work on ur flow wordplay and rhymin...u might even wanan check out that tutorial shyt to teach u some shyt iight....keep elevatin

I hope your battle is as good as your talking
because your going to need it!!..
Alone with the rest of your little crew
'''You telling me to elevate ,but
you cant even type shit for me to understand
what the fuck you just said......lol..
check your self before checking some on els...aight!

Look's like the whole ..tell me how to ryme thing
is getting out of hand,
so why dont you post against me!
and show me how it should be done...
as a matter of fact...baby
gal can join forces with you so you two can team up
and show me
how It should be done,
because I want to know...no really...
I want to know
lol,,,,,As if you got what it takes to write the perfect ryme
That I dont believe....
none of us are that.....
so i dare you to post on me
and we'll see who's wack......
and this thing about ryming has got you failing to read the flow.....
You only look for rymes...well if you read it ...
you will see that it does.....young beezy can join forces with you two..
Plus d jakah...since you all feel you got some thing to show me....
Im not playing at all...
Go ahead and post on me and see what you get for it....lol
Im glad you think I cant flow or ryme...thats the weakest part
about you all....
because you dont know me,,,,,,
and yet you taking me litely
And im not trying to be the big bad ass
but you all seem to be sticking together on this one
and I ain't seen you post on no one els but me.
So if you want to prove your the best
you know what you got to do!

da jakah you and young beezy seem to have
gotten your turns together on me
you say some thing she say some thing
stop riding each others dicks
and bring whats left of you to the battle grounds
and post on me if you all are
as dope as you say you are
I want you all at once
since your riding each others dick's
and refuse to leave me alone....I aint going no where
so put up or shut up!!!!

This is where i was trying to be nice about it.....
but if all of yall notice
There together hating on me.....I got more 1 sec

im not hatin im tellin u what u need to work on its called feedback kid but if u wanna get tough then pm me if u wanna battle and i will put ya ass in ya place kid.............

More Poetic Than Song Lyrics. Nice Though.

yo nice shit good shit... only thing id be tellin you is not to elevate...? but to make it simpler for us to see your flow... on average we cant hear the beat gonnin on in your head, that it... lyrics cant get much more meaningfull then that....

if i was baby gurl and her lover boy id fear battling you cause you got strong lyrics ... wor up son... hard hitting! LOVE YA'LL WE NEED LOVE YA'LL!

ha yo i will merk u (p.o.) and his bitch ass so if yall think ur so fukin good then pm me and i will strait serve ur fagget asses................

Make it hapen pussy...and stop talking...
I've dissed you already
and you still begging me to pm you
knowing you shouldn't have got in it!
I never asked for your thoughts on my flow!
And Im glad you think your going to win...
But I got bad news for you....
you want win...
So stop talking and start walkin
IM READY FOR WAR MOTHA FUCKAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....

Yo thanx po....
it's good to know the rap world really do got mc's
with heart enought to see when shit is AIGHT...
the rest of them dick riders pride
want let them say the words you said.
It takes a real mc to say what you said...I thank you
And its because of you
That I will prove his punk ass wrong...
So fuck you insain16!!!...your name is even fucked up!....
OH dont forget to bring the rest of your dick riders who are on the list with you.
because I kill squads....and fuck soloest with no grease!!
So watch your asses

Thanks For The Luv
You And PO Are Real True Mc's...
1 Luv

aint nobody hatin on u its constructive critism take it or leave it no one cares but if u dont want it dont post

Your In the line of fire,
and will get droped
hating is hating....enough said
Watch your ass!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

bitch fuck u there aint shit to hate on especially if u wack n da only thing u know how 2 drop is soap so get ya shit straight b4 u get ya feelings hurt

^^ fuck dis internet beef shit what da fuck typing gone do u dumb fuck

It WILL PROVE IM BETTER
SINCE YOU ALL SAY IM WACK BITCH!!!
THATS WHAT.....
DONT PUNK OUT NOW!!!!
YOUR IN THE LINE OF FIRE!!!!
DIE SLOW MUTHA FUCKAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

bitch do what u do best suck a dick get a life and a new craft

Mater of fact you wanted to know
what typing was going to prove.
It was you who said I was wack!
So what was dissing me going to prove?
and it was the typing that got your attention
You think about that...hhmmmm...Do I got a point

Point proven...when you wrong ..your wrong
dont get mad now
elevate.....

nah go to bitch slapped

hahaha
 

Dont say nothing els stupid
unless you calling me out
and that would be stupid as well
because you want win
So call your dick riding crew for help....hhmmmm.....
sounds like your scared to call me out....
You talked the shit...but can you walk it?????????
Make sure you look at that dick riders list
There the ones I want your wack ass TO JOIN WITH
Since there shit talking got them no where.....just like you.....

post it where it goes dick rider!!!....

that is wher it goes u dumb dick suckin bastard

Unlimited bar's
No crew vote's
and you must post
your flow alone with insain16
and the rest of the dick riders on the list
I dont battle soloest
I battle squads of dick riders
So do your worst...
and you dont have to set shit up bitch
I'll do it my got daum self!!!!
Enough talk.....post in 30 minutes mutha fucka's
if your squad ain't helping you
then you can cancel battling until they bring it!!!!
Im not playing with a bunch of chaps on line
Im trying to make a point...
but you don't seem to have your shit together!!!
So unless I battle all the names on the dick riders list
you by your self want have a chance...LMAO
So talk it over with your little squad ok little girl.
You have 30 minute's to post....
You called me out so you all have to post
If not you all lose..
and your names go on my defeat list
as if I didnt know that...lol....
Your move bitch....
All of your moves
mutha fucka'sssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

First of all young beezy....
and insain16...you need to call me out where
every one can see it!
Dont be sending me private messages
acting like bitches on the low....
If you calling me out say it..
I just want it made clear that yall
asked for this ass wooping.......
and it looks like your time is up....
and your a no show...because i excepted yalls battle...
but i wanted you all to post yall shit together...
That way you can all die together ass dick riders should
in a battle....but since your not here and i know your on line
you all lose.....now get you squad up bitches....
and let's do the shit right.....
look at the list of dick riders and join forces
I dont care how you get them just do it...
or no battle....i already posted thje rules
and no friends voting
if i feel your dick riding you lose...no question's asked

i called u ou n u neva replyed i tol ya dumb as to go to bitch slapped u neva went i left a link n u still neva replyed so be a bitch n sit in a corner

well im going to battle you
and who ever got some thing to say about me

contract of battle
 

this is how the battle im in started...
all because they wanted me to write in there
styles and shit...so it all came from this one flow...
and if i was so wack you sure found room to hate...
then insaine16 got in it...so he said he would murk me and po
so actually he did in a since start it with me....
and offer to battle me...so if anyone is reading this...
can you tell why he saying i dissed him first
when it's plain to see my work isn't bad at all...
and i did post in my flow...
i didn't really need any one thought's
but any way...you all know the truth now.....
so he will spit first or his name goes on my defeat list
yo....insaine16 why dont you see that you were wrong from the start...
It was you who said you could beat me..when po gave me props
So back up those words and post hommie
im really tired...and sleepy...
so if your down for this then post..if not then you know the rest....1

look @ ya post u agreed to battle

stop talking and drop aight shorty...1

and you lost...lol
next time save all the talk...lol

yo man fuck all dis dam hatin or w.e, ne way dawg yo piece was pretty good but u do gota rym more dawg, but ne way i liked it, uh peep me n Raw Killa's collabos, iite 1 love