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Old 05-23-04, 11:42 AM   #1
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(INTRODUCTION)
Some times we all have a story
to tell on how the world looks
from our point of view...
and this is how i see some of it...

(VERSE)

YO..
I live my life every day
like it was my last
how can people survive in the streets?
If they eating out of garbage bags.

Dam it's so sad.
To watch a child eat out of the trash.
His mom ain't got a job,
and his dad just got out of rehab

His aunt came over to watch him
but she barely loves him
Unless you got cash
thats not family
she's a thorn in your ass

I've seen it hapen to many times
not to recognize it.
Just put your faith in god,
and he'll be there until the sun rises

Cant you here the babies crying
through all there pain.
I wonder where they at.
Im only one soldier.
but i'll always have your back's
Holding you closer.
God hold up my shoulders,
and give me the strength
So they can survive threw this.
While i try an take out the dents.

Cause every thing comes from within.
If its truly from your heart.
Join hands and make friends
and let's spread this love far

Everythings a jar
cause hate is alway's partially open
A vet with no legs
still beg's
cause his life seem's hopless
His eye's is open,
but his tear's still running
remembering moments
when he fought in vietnam.
Now the state dis own him

Why would you do such a thing?
when he fought for our freedom
Now it's against the law
for him to ask some body to feed him

How could you treat him in such a way
knowing the years has been long.
He steped on a mine for our sake
Then he lost two of his own.
The government is wrong
They used him
Then they took up his youth
Why would i join the arm forces?
when i know you lying to your troop's

(outro)
YO
This is the leader of soldiers of war.
Im hoping you can understand that life
has it's ups and downs.
Which is why I wrote this.
I really dont need your response
just read it and think about where
we are today compared to yeasterday
1 love
and keep hope alive
copy righted through ASCCAP 2004
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My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

Defeat list
Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
none


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Old 05-23-04, 09:00 PM   #2
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Words To Live By
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My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

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out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
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Old 05-23-04, 09:01 PM   #3
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ummm..u gotta rhyme home boi elevate...
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Old 05-23-04, 09:26 PM   #4
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i was feelin what u was talkin bout, u can work on da structure a lil better but the concept was good even though its been done but it was good stay up
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Old 05-23-04, 09:48 PM   #5
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I thank you both for your comments
and good looking
but da jakah im not sure what you meant by

ummm..u gotta rhyme home boi elevate...
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But if you would read it
instead of just trying to look for rymes
You would see that it does.
Music is about expression
and I feel like
Im as good as any one els
but If you feel your better
you know what you can do home boy
i'll be here...first of all Im not a rookie
Second of all
you just didnt take the time to read it
I said I really didnt need a response
but i forgot....you only want it to ryme
hows this...cat mat hat bat...that sounds about right
if ryming is all its about to you
so think before you talk
most of all read and understrand it first
before you judge
LIKE I SAID I KEEP IT REAL
Im sorry if you take this the wrong way
but if you dont thanx for understanding
If you do thats your right to feel how you want
But im going to always keep it real

And young beezy
I feel what you said as well
but like I said before I keep it real.
yes it might have been done before ,
but not like me
because theres only one me
making it the only one in the world like it
And as far as the structure is concerned
we all got our own style
thats why God made us all different
but thanx fot your thoughts
I respect that..1 love
Keep hope alive
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My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

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Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
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Old 05-23-04, 09:51 PM   #6
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aight safe...
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Old 05-24-04, 11:51 AM   #7
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yea dat was gd u haf to elevate by rhymin ur words
elevate- Get betta
Homeboy-just sumr andom name ting for like a boi or wateva
lol if dat help yo out
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Old 05-24-04, 12:53 PM   #8
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lol ut oh baby_girl strait thug now she explainin our words and shyt lol j/p u kno i luv ya...but as for the drop... kid work on ur flow wordplay and rhymin...u might even wanan check out that tutorial shyt to teach u some shyt iight....keep elevatin
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Old 05-25-04, 02:18 AM   #9
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Exclamation

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I hope your battle is as good as your talking
because your going to need it!!..
Alone with the rest of your little crew
'''You telling me to elevate ,but
you cant even type shit for me to understand
what the fuck you just said......lol..
check your self before checking some on els...aight!
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My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

Defeat list
Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
none


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Old 05-25-04, 02:51 AM   #10
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Look's like the whole ..tell me how to ryme thing
is getting out of hand,
so why dont you post against me!
and show me how it should be done...
as a matter of fact...baby
gal can join forces with you so you two can team up
and show me
how It should be done,
because I want to know...no really...
I want to know
lol,,,,,As if you got what it takes to write the perfect ryme
That I dont believe....
none of us are that.....
so i dare you to post on me
and we'll see who's wack......
and this thing about ryming has got you failing to read the flow.....
You only look for rymes...well if you read it ...
you will see that it does.....young beezy can join forces with you two..
Plus d jakah...since you all feel you got some thing to show me....
Im not playing at all...
Go ahead and post on me and see what you get for it....lol
Im glad you think I cant flow or ryme...thats the weakest part
about you all....
because you dont know me,,,,,,
and yet you taking me litely
And im not trying to be the big bad ass
but you all seem to be sticking together on this one
and I ain't seen you post on no one els but me.
So if you want to prove your the best
you know what you got to do!

da jakah you and young beezy seem to have
gotten your turns together on me
you say some thing she say some thing
stop riding each others dicks
and bring whats left of you to the battle grounds
and post on me if you all are
as dope as you say you are
I want you all at once
since your riding each others dick's
and refuse to leave me alone....I aint going no where
so put up or shut up!!!!
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My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

Defeat list
Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
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Old 05-25-04, 09:40 PM   #11
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This is where i was trying to be nice about it.....
but if all of yall notice
There together hating on me.....I got more 1 sec
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My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

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Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
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Old 05-26-04, 09:33 AM   #12
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im not hatin im tellin u what u need to work on its called feedback kid but if u wanna get tough then pm me if u wanna battle and i will put ya ass in ya place kid.............
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Old 05-26-04, 09:37 AM   #13
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More Poetic Than Song Lyrics. Nice Though.
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Old 05-26-04, 10:33 AM   #14
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yo nice shit good shit... only thing id be tellin you is not to elevate...? but to make it simpler for us to see your flow... on average we cant hear the beat gonnin on in your head, that it... lyrics cant get much more meaningfull then that....

if i was baby gurl and her lover boy id fear battling you cause you got strong lyrics ... wor up son... hard hitting! LOVE YA'LL WE NEED LOVE YA'LL!
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Old 05-26-04, 01:08 PM   #15
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ha yo i will merk u (p.o.) and his bitch ass so if yall think ur so fukin good then pm me and i will strait serve ur fagget asses................
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