Outsider VS Kre-z
 

Yo heres the rules:
No hate votes
No crew votes
120- 20 lines min

Lets go son

your spitting first. and ive just checked in by da way

Watch out for my ryhmes, I'ma bout to hurt you/
I checked yo lyrics they ain't got no lyrical vitue/
I'm coming on the stage and my name is kre-z/
Yo outsider, how come you and fine mind got the same IP/
You see me at the army, give me a one hand salute/
Yo FINE MIND, didn't I ALLready merk you/
I call myself Kre-z, but bitch you gone insane/
My lyrics burn you/
FUck you up like mary-jane/ (marijuana)
My punches hurt you and they hittin/
Cause my freestyle beats e-ver-y one of yo writtens/
Style, bitch you don't even know the word/ (put in a post asking what a style was)
Me losin to this bitch, man that shit is absurd/
Take some speed so I can hype thee/
With a FINE MIND like mine/
You can't check my Psyche/
My style, naw bitch you can't even see this/
And I bet you a nigga with a micro-penis/
Takin garbage out, so I put yo shit in the bin/
I'm Golaith and this time David won't win/

this boy need to calm down, your facin a lyrical murder/
I got more strengh in me to put u down by my little finger/
if i switch to my other finger, 3 times i'll show u the middle finger/
thats pointed at you, to represent my hate/
i'll paint a picture of what you'll be like shot dead/
20-lines-of-shit, makein my lines hit-twice-as-hard/
your nothing-special, just something god made by-mistake/
im gonna put you in a coffin, and higher you a new undertaker/
i'll leave you down for restin, dig your grave up with rotten peices/
with all kinds of deseases, use the body parts for your mummas feeding/
the lyrics are made for mental illness, you'll find yourself sayin things dislexic/
im an energy resource like eminem , fireing firearms as big as giant-fire-bombs/
shoot you like computerized missiles, leadin in your direction for the blast/
stop with the corny rhymeing, im like a ticking bomb u run outta time/
shove the miniture penis, miss leaded it in a wrong ageneders place/
the A-hole thats in your dads-hole, makin it bleed from the rectum/
my rhyming is so ill, it'll make you take pills and kill like brutal violence/
your rhyming so shit, you tried to make a mix tape and got banned/
take my rapping to sleep on, givin you the worst nightmare ever/

uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

um no rhyming at all that was the wackest verse i have ever read man you neeed to stop and pause and say to your self y am i here then you will find the anwser

v/ kre-z

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Yo anymore votes????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????

Yo vote and get this shit closed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Aight, Hit up my battle for me

Outsider, man what the hell was that? YOu didnt even rhyme in most of your bars. YOu seriously need to elevate.
Kre-Z, nice verse. Decent flow and ok structure. YOu need to work on your punches though.

This one goes to Kre-Z

Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Uppin for votes, don't sleep on this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Battle was aight..nuttin much..both had some good punches & wordplay...but kre had harder punches...

Vote = Kre-Z

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lol im gonna go outsider on this one. kre-z started aiight but i juz got so bored reading ur verse dawg. i think u fukd up hard. i think u cud have beaten him but u shud have done better, took ya time. outsider man u seem to be improving every battle. good work. keep uppin ya self n u'll do aiight man.

vote = outsider

ohh..... both werent great.. but.... i think outsider got this by a hair...

This was weak ass battle.

Both came lame, Played as fuck.......even retards could do a betta verse. K had fucked up verse yours the most played verse i ever read, originality has to go to outsider. He also had betta punches i wasnt impressed in neither one of you guys. This was herbish for realz.

V/: OutS

Lets get this shit closed people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this battle waz close they both had good verses and good punchlines but kre-z had betta personals

votekre-z

look, you people are dick riders. I clearly kicked his ass, he had some non-rhymin peice of shit.
Anyway, one more vote to get this closed

outsider........your punches was good........but you could use some elevation.......you could wrok on re-wording your punches.......so that they hit harder.......work on your structure because your lines are uneven and it throws off your flow a little bit....but keep elevating man you got some potential

Kre-z.......I have deffintly seen some of your better shit......this was kinda not anything at all your punches was weak and i didnt really like your flow.......your structre was really off and it made your flow choppy.....keep elevating

v/outsider

outsider really needs to get some flow...and style too for that matter ha. I thought kre-z took this fairly easily with punches, flow and wordplay
vote=kre-z
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