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View Poll Results: Who got merked | |||
Outsider | 4 | 44.44% | |
Kre-z | 5 | 55.56% | |
Voters: 9. You may not vote on this poll |
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05-28-04, 12:20 PM | #1 |
Flyweight
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Outsider VS Kre-z
IP: 509D 5063
Yo heres the rules:
No hate votes No crew votes 120- 20 lines min Lets go son
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05-28-04, 12:22 PM | #2 | |
This is my first post!
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IP: DF7B C8F7
your spitting first. and ive just checked in by da way
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05-28-04, 12:41 PM | #3 |
Flyweight
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Watch out for my ryhmes, I'ma bout to hurt you/
I checked yo lyrics they ain't got no lyrical vitue/ I'm coming on the stage and my name is kre-z/ Yo outsider, how come you and fine mind got the same IP/ You see me at the army, give me a one hand salute/ Yo FINE MIND, didn't I ALLready merk you/ I call myself Kre-z, but bitch you gone insane/ My lyrics burn you/ FUck you up like mary-jane/ (marijuana) My punches hurt you and they hittin/ Cause my freestyle beats e-ver-y one of yo writtens/ Style, bitch you don't even know the word/ (put in a post asking what a style was) Me losin to this bitch, man that shit is absurd/ Take some speed so I can hype thee/ With a FINE MIND like mine/ You can't check my Psyche/ My style, naw bitch you can't even see this/ And I bet you a nigga with a micro-penis/ Takin garbage out, so I put yo shit in the bin/ I'm Golaith and this time David won't win/
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05-28-04, 01:20 PM | #4 | |
This is my first post!
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IP: DF7B C8F7
this boy need to calm down, your facin a lyrical murder/
I got more strengh in me to put u down by my little finger/ if i switch to my other finger, 3 times i'll show u the middle finger/ thats pointed at you, to represent my hate/ i'll paint a picture of what you'll be like shot dead/ 20-lines-of-shit, makein my lines hit-twice-as-hard/ your nothing-special, just something god made by-mistake/ im gonna put you in a coffin, and higher you a new undertaker/ i'll leave you down for restin, dig your grave up with rotten peices/ with all kinds of deseases, use the body parts for your mummas feeding/ the lyrics are made for mental illness, you'll find yourself sayin things dislexic/ im an energy resource like eminem , fireing firearms as big as giant-fire-bombs/ shoot you like computerized missiles, leadin in your direction for the blast/ stop with the corny rhymeing, im like a ticking bomb u run outta time/ shove the miniture penis, miss leaded it in a wrong ageneders place/ the A-hole thats in your dads-hole, makin it bleed from the rectum/ my rhyming is so ill, it'll make you take pills and kill like brutal violence/ your rhyming so shit, you tried to make a mix tape and got banned/ take my rapping to sleep on, givin you the worst nightmare ever/ |
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05-28-04, 02:33 PM | #5 | |
This is my first post!
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IP: DF7B C8F7
uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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05-28-04, 02:41 PM | #6 | ||
RV AUDIOS BEST
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IP: 7402 EED9
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um no rhyming at all that was the wackest verse i have ever read man you neeed to stop and pause and say to your self y am i here then you will find the anwser v/ kre-z repay the favor link in the sig
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05-28-04, 04:38 PM | #7 |
Flyweight
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Yo anymore votes????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????
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05-28-04, 05:45 PM | #8 |
Flyweight
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Yo vote and get this shit closed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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05-29-04, 07:11 AM | #9 |
Flyweight
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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05-29-04, 09:39 AM | #10 | |
:..you aint rockin shit..:
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IP: 9F70 3159
Aight, Hit up my battle for me
Outsider, man what the hell was that? YOu didnt even rhyme in most of your bars. YOu seriously need to elevate. Kre-Z, nice verse. Decent flow and ok structure. YOu need to work on your punches though. This one goes to Kre-Z
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05-29-04, 11:38 AM | #11 |
Flyweight
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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05-29-04, 03:40 PM | #12 |
Flyweight
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IP: DF7B C8F7
Uppin for votes, don't sleep on this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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05-29-04, 06:53 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 2F05 D129
Battle was aight..nuttin much..both had some good punches & wordplay...but kre had harder punches...
Vote = Kre-Z Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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05-29-04, 07:38 PM | #14 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 1E03 B472
kre-z fuck is happenin 2 u, ya whole garbage waz weak kid. u need fuckin blowz in there not just wordz that don't even scare away a rat. u gotta try HARDER next time u battle. weak outsider u did good, u had blowz in there and got a better struture than kre-z. but it wazn't perfect (but u didn't have 2 4 this guy here u battled), u did okay decision opener-outsider structure-outsider blowz-outsider closer-outsider outsider, u fucked this guy up like hell, it ain't hard to tell (lol) kre-z, c'mon son, u makin a joke of yourself, practice
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05-30-04, 06:08 AM | #15 | |
Middle Weight
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IP: 8D4A 5365
lol im gonna go outsider on this one. kre-z started aiight but i juz got so bored reading ur verse dawg. i think u fukd up hard. i think u cud have beaten him but u shud have done better, took ya time. outsider man u seem to be improving every battle. good work. keep uppin ya self n u'll do aiight man.
vote = outsider
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