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View Poll Results: Who got merked
Outsider 4 44.44%
Kre-z 5 55.56%
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Old 05-28-04, 12:20 PM   #1
Kre-z
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Outsider VS Kre-z

IP: 509D 5063

Yo heres the rules:
No hate votes
No crew votes
120- 20 lines min

Lets go son
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Old 05-28-04, 12:22 PM   #2
infinite
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your spitting first. and ive just checked in by da way
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Old 05-28-04, 12:41 PM   #3
Kre-z
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Watch out for my ryhmes, I'ma bout to hurt you/
I checked yo lyrics they ain't got no lyrical vitue/
I'm coming on the stage and my name is kre-z/
Yo outsider, how come you and fine mind got the same IP/
You see me at the army, give me a one hand salute/
Yo FINE MIND, didn't I ALLready merk you/
I call myself Kre-z, but bitch you gone insane/
My lyrics burn you/
FUck you up like mary-jane/ (marijuana)
My punches hurt you and they hittin/
Cause my freestyle beats e-ver-y one of yo writtens/
Style, bitch you don't even know the word/ (put in a post asking what a style was)
Me losin to this bitch, man that shit is absurd/
Take some speed so I can hype thee/
With a FINE MIND like mine/
You can't check my Psyche/
My style, naw bitch you can't even see this/
And I bet you a nigga with a micro-penis/
Takin garbage out, so I put yo shit in the bin/
I'm Golaith and this time David won't win/
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Old 05-28-04, 01:20 PM   #4
infinite
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this boy need to calm down, your facin a lyrical murder/
I got more strengh in me to put u down by my little finger/
if i switch to my other finger, 3 times i'll show u the middle finger/
thats pointed at you, to represent my hate/
i'll paint a picture of what you'll be like shot dead/
20-lines-of-shit, makein my lines hit-twice-as-hard/
your nothing-special, just something god made by-mistake/
im gonna put you in a coffin, and higher you a new undertaker/
i'll leave you down for restin, dig your grave up with rotten peices/
with all kinds of deseases, use the body parts for your mummas feeding/
the lyrics are made for mental illness, you'll find yourself sayin things dislexic/
im an energy resource like eminem , fireing firearms as big as giant-fire-bombs/
shoot you like computerized missiles, leadin in your direction for the blast/
stop with the corny rhymeing, im like a ticking bomb u run outta time/
shove the miniture penis, miss leaded it in a wrong ageneders place/
the A-hole thats in your dads-hole, makin it bleed from the rectum/
my rhyming is so ill, it'll make you take pills and kill like brutal violence/
your rhyming so shit, you tried to make a mix tape and got banned/
take my rapping to sleep on, givin you the worst nightmare ever/
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Old 05-28-04, 02:33 PM   #5
infinite
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uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 05-28-04, 02:41 PM   #6
Big Kountry
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From: Rochester N.Y. Da Roc
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Quote:
Originally Posted by outsider
shoot you like computerized missiles, leadin in your direction for the blast/
stop with the corny rhymeing, im like a ticking bomb u run outta time/
shove the miniture penis, miss leaded it in a wrong ageneders place/
the A-hole thats in your dads-hole, makin it bleed from the rectum/
my rhyming is so ill, it'll make you take pills and kill like brutal violence/
your rhyming so shit, you tried to make a mix tape and got banned/
take my rapping to sleep on, givin you the worst nightmare ever/


um no rhyming at all that was the wackest verse i have ever read man you neeed to stop and pause and say to your self y am i here then you will find the anwser

v/ kre-z

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Old 05-28-04, 04:38 PM   #7
Kre-z
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Yo anymore votes????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????
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Old 05-28-04, 05:45 PM   #8
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Yo vote and get this shit closed!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 05-29-04, 07:11 AM   #9
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Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 05-29-04, 09:39 AM   #10
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Aight, Hit up my battle for me

Outsider, man what the hell was that? YOu didnt even rhyme in most of your bars. YOu seriously need to elevate.
Kre-Z, nice verse. Decent flow and ok structure. YOu need to work on your punches though.

This one goes to Kre-Z
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Old 05-29-04, 11:38 AM   #11
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Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 05-29-04, 03:40 PM   #12
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Uppin for votes, don't sleep on this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 05-29-04, 06:53 PM   #13
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Battle was aight..nuttin much..both had some good punches & wordplay...but kre had harder punches...

Vote = Kre-Z

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Old 05-29-04, 07:38 PM   #14
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kre-z
fuck is happenin 2 u, ya whole garbage waz weak kid. u need fuckin blowz in there not just wordz that don't even scare away a rat. u gotta try HARDER next time u battle. weak

outsider
u did good, u had blowz in there and got a better struture than kre-z. but it wazn't perfect (but u didn't have 2 4 this guy here u battled), u did okay

decision
opener-outsider
structure-outsider
blowz-outsider
closer-outsider

outsider, u fucked this guy up like hell, it ain't hard to tell (lol)

kre-z, c'mon son, u makin a joke of yourself, practice
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Old 05-30-04, 06:08 AM   #15
FreSh_EmCee
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lol im gonna go outsider on this one. kre-z started aiight but i juz got so bored reading ur verse dawg. i think u fukd up hard. i think u cud have beaten him but u shud have done better, took ya time. outsider man u seem to be improving every battle. good work. keep uppin ya self n u'll do aiight man.

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