Potential vs. Rascal
 

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your verse due 15 minutes after mine......

15-20 after your's im gonna start typing now..
i bet you have a quote in your verse..

this flyweight called for a Vet so im quick to accept,
i wanted a heavy wait battle but the radar red "noob cumin direct".
**cough cough** is that you?you ill? hmm No i hear u weezin,
is it a sickining illness? or is it from me givin you that lyrical beatin.
little faggot..this sites for talent..you'll never get by,
got a wasp on his jumper...so he thaught he was fly.
use a bit of slang damn Potential you realy suckie,
tought he was bad as on a day off decidin to play hookie.
I have this bitch fallin apart.. like he suffers from lepracy,
your undefeated streak is over Rascal's the enin of your legacy.

quick 10 sorri if im late..

rascal you bitch you battle this cat but wontbattle me?

Fuck outta here^^^..................................

PoTeNtIaL
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he had 5hours after he set the battle up and still pussied.. out..
Fucka pre-wite..
i should get the DQ win..

seen as he has had 10 hours to drop..
you have till 8pm GMT tonight so dont be late..

Garbage dump just-in, cuz he got his verse-in
His last avy shocked the crowd...his moms a person?
"Bakin" this muffin before this faggot kan "fill his nooks"
Never get signed...even got blanks in ya autograph books
And thinkin ya got game wit pixta's?den i got much to teach ya
"high of silver gamblin" and you'd never have a chance wit Alicia
His blood im spillin, wack fucker would never have skill n
Shiet if i "filmed him in action" he'd never be verbally killin
Buyin a "value meal at mcDonalds" the only time he'd ever mac
damn even if his dick was a "silver spike" he'd never "nail in" a "track"
*his avy sed "strippers r people too?"
**nooks....english mmuffinz...hes frum england
***alicias in his sig...alicia silverstone(silver-stoned)
****shot=film...averb
*****spikes r used to nail in tracks, big mac

i didnt prewrite or pussy out mutherfucka...theres ma verse......

structure-rascal
flow-rascal
punches-potent
metas-potent
personals-potent

vote=potential

peace out !

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potentual won this easy because his flow was so good and really strong i loved every minuite of it and drawed you in. Rascal was okay but needs some elevation in his writing aswell skill in punches, flowness because of his lack of multies that wern't carried out and word play.

Rascal-You had a few lines but mainly was weak..
You took this By some and im going to show you why
you had similies and little bit of metaphores and all
structure was decent

Potential-Your autograph book line id played as ish..
You switched up the word becuz it was year book so mainly that
lines was played..And plus you came a slight weaker theb him
Nuff said...

v/Rascal for having everything slight better

Return the favor Please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129100

uppin this.. Rated i will hit your link up in the next 16hours..
i do return the vote :)

i will return the vot on your battle..

Opener:potential
Closer:rascal
Punches:potential
Flow:potential
Vote = Potential, Had An All Around Better Verse Than Rascal, Harder Hittin Punches, And His Flowed Better, Rascal Had Some Too, But None Of Them Hit Hard, All Kind Of Weak

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Potential gets my vote- he had great flow great punches and while he accomplished all that he was still humorous

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thankz for the votez guyz but try ta explain better plez...lol...this bitch disqualifyin all mah votes......ill hit up ya battlez latta...pz

This is a very good battle, and very close.

Flow: Rascal. His flow was just a little bit better here. It was close, but rascal get's this.

Meta's: I think this is a draw here. Both people came with good one's, but both had one's that don't make any sense either (rascal's fly one, and potential's muffin thing. Never heard of the english being called muffins before...).

Multies: Both lacking really.

Wordplay: Potential. His wordplay was funnier. That nail line was very good.

Punches: I'm afraid rascal got this here. Although potential's stuff was very good, it was all nicely worded work that has been frequently played. Rascal's stuff was more original, and that's what i feel hip hop lacks. Rascal's stuff was equal, and more original, and that's what took it.

Overall: Rascal. His originality took it, but barely. Potential should work on being more original, and rascal should work on a little better wordplay.

potential took this battle. it was close but potential had better lyrics and punches. cant actually vote yet i dont have enough posts but

vote- potential

ima have to go wit rascal, cuz his shit flowed better, an made sense, i didn really kno wut potential was talkn bout, maybe im jus slow, but to me rascal came harda, but good job to both of yall.

vote rascal

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Come On I Will Vote On Your Links If You Vote :)..
pz.

Oprner, Closer, Flow, Wordplay, PUnches= Potential

he merked you his verse was tight it had alot of good punches. He flipped soem of your stuff

Potential really has pontential

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opener:rascal, his punch hit harder
closer:rascal, his punch hit harder
personals:both
metas:neither
multis:neither

vote rascal

now this shit is how it was in tha votin thread on how ur suppose to do it, so if it gets dq'ed again, o fuckn well. now return tha favor

overall rascal had the better verse.i liked the fly line and u used more complexity and harder punches in ur verse.potential ur verse was good but weaker and u need to work on harder punches and makin ur verses sound better the flow wastn bad jus cut down on word uses

v/rascal

This battle sucked, but...

Rascal: You came wittier even though it wasn't a very strong verse. Decent punchlines, it was pretty ehh... But enough. Come with better wordplay and personals. Keep elevatin'.

Potential: Your verse was bad as well. You had concepts, but they were unfounded. I mean, it's not like Rascal said Alicia's my girlfriend, so why mention that? Your verse was witty, but not personal enough, which is important in text battling. Keep elevatin'.

Vote: Rascal

flow-tie
structure-rascal
punches-potent
metas-potent
personals-potent

overall:potent (came hard in this battle)

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now its explained........

rascal wins because he is better.

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Breack down for potential:

Garbage dump just-in, cuz he got his verse-in
His last avy shocked the crowd...his moms a person?
dont get it 5/10
"Bakin" this muffin before this faggot kan "fill his nooks"
Never get signed...even got blanks in ya autograph books
decent punch 7/10
And thinkin ya got game wit pixta's?den i got much to teach ya
"high of silver gamblin" and you'd never have a chance wit Alicia
that was an old punch...5/10
His blood im spillin, wack fucker would never have skill n
Shiet if i "filmed him in action" he'd never be verbally killin
stupid punch 6/10
Buyin a "value meal at mcDonalds" the only time he'd ever mac
damn even if his dick was a "silver spike" he'd never "nail in" a "track"
good fincher 8/10

Breack down rascal:

this flyweight called for a Vet so im quick to accept,
i wanted a heavy wait battle but the radar red "noob cumin direct".
hahaha good opener 8/10
**cough cough** is that you?you ill? hmm No i hear u weezin,
is it a sickining illness? or is it from me givin you that lyrical beatin.
played and old 5/10
little faggot..this sites for talent..you'll never get by,
got a wasp on his jumper...so he thaught he was fly.
ok word play 7/10
use a bit of slang damn Potential you realy suckie,
tought he was bad as on a day off decidin to play hookie.
no much of a punch 5/10
I have this bitch fallin apart.. like he suffers from lepracy,
your undefeated streak is over Rascal's the enin of your legacy.
ok closer 7/10


flow:rascal
structuer:potential
punches:rascal
personals:rascal

last thoughs....I think that overall rascal had a better verse then potenial...

v-rascal