5 barz
yannoe the rulez


your verse due 15 minutes after mine......

15-20 after your's im gonna start typing now..
i bet you have a quote in your verse..

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this flyweight called for a Vet so im quick to accept,
i wanted a heavy wait battle but the radar red "noob cumin direct".
**cough cough** is that you?you ill? hmm No i hear u weezin,
is it a sickining illness? or is it from me givin you that lyrical beatin.
little faggot..this sites for talent..you'll never get by,
got a wasp on his jumper...so he thaught he was fly.
use a bit of slang damn Potential you realy suckie,
tought he was bad as on a day off decidin to play hookie.
I have this bitch fallin apart.. like he suffers from lepracy,
your undefeated streak is over Rascal's the enin of your legacy.

quick 10 sorri if im late..

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rascal you bitch you battle this cat but wontbattle me?

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Fuck outta here^^^..................................

PoTeNtIaL
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he had 5hours after he set the battle up and still pussied.. out..
Fucka pre-wite..
i should get the DQ win..

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seen as he has had 10 hours to drop..
you have till 8pm GMT tonight so dont be late..

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Garbage dump just-in, cuz he got his verse-in
His last avy shocked the crowd...his moms a person?
"Bakin" this muffin before this faggot kan "fill his nooks"
Never get signed...even got blanks in ya autograph books
And thinkin ya got game wit pixta's?den i got much to teach ya
"high of silver gamblin" and you'd never have a chance wit Alicia
His blood im spillin, wack fucker would never have skill n
Shiet if i "filmed him in action" he'd never be verbally killin
Buyin a "value meal at mcDonalds" the only time he'd ever mac
damn even if his dick was a "silver spike" he'd never "nail in" a "track"
*his avy sed "strippers r people too?"
**nooks....english mmuffinz...hes frum england
***alicias in his sig...alicia silverstone(silver-stoned)
****shot=film...averb
*****spikes r used to nail in tracks, big mac

i didnt prewrite or pussy out mutherfucka...theres ma verse......

structure-rascal
flow-rascal
punches-potent
metas-potent
personals-potent

vote=potential

peace out !

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potentual won this easy because his flow was so good and really strong i loved every minuite of it and drawed you in. Rascal was okay but needs some elevation in his writing aswell skill in punches, flowness because of his lack of multies that wern't carried out and word play.

Rascal-You had a few lines but mainly was weak..
You took this By some and im going to show you why
you had similies and little bit of metaphores and all
structure was decent

Potential-Your autograph book line id played as ish..
You switched up the word becuz it was year book so mainly that
lines was played..And plus you came a slight weaker theb him
Nuff said...

v/Rascal for having everything slight better

Return the favor Please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129100

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uppin this.. Rated i will hit your link up in the next 16hours..
i do return the vote

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i will return the vot on your battle..

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