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N-SIGHT vs. Dreadedwicksta*
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Listen, ur not Dreaded in battles..ur just headed for a loss-
I could DQ ur ass- Quote:
I'm not a patient man..so I'll lock ur whole head by twistin' it off- Then you'll be dreaded..but without a head you can't diss me at all- I've seen the worst of the worst..and you fit just above Fine Mind- Cuz line for line ur his wack twin..jus a inch better rhyme for rhyme- You're not good enough to battle me..I'm leaving u cracked wide open- Now u can spill ur guts..u weren't serious, in ur lines u were jokin'- U got no catch phrases in ur style..ur punches are average at best- Kid, ur wack..don't take ur anger out on me cuz you're mad at ur rep- I bet ur uglier than Soul Skriptz..maybe a she-man like Latin Kitten- But, if you're a racist like King Solo..the Ku Klux Klan jus stopped lynchin- fuck otta huuuuuuuuuuuuuuur! |
N-sights just str8 wack he was never "destined-2-rhyme"...
Like retarted rock-climbers when they fall off cliffs tryin' to climb... Inarticulate rapper, when you rhyme it sounds like you grunt... The only way you'll draw attention is doodling your name on a blunt...* Your flow has evaporated- you're battlin on a lyrical drought... You should smash bulbs- the only way you punch my lights out... Must have entered this battle defeated- you lost since the beginning... If you spat at the speed of light, we still couldn't 'c' you winning...** You couldn't make an impression if you wrote your verse in scratches... You could try to light up herbs and still would throwaway matches...*** Im to "dreaded" with punches ill leave ya spitz "out-of-sight"... Only way ya rhymes are eva takin' flight is if ya writtin' with a kite... Explainations: *... 'draw' is another word for weed **...'c' is the scientific symbol for the 'speed of light' **... lighting up a joint/herb requires a match |
my last explaination is ment to be *** not **
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Dread won this because she had extreamly well used punches that were hard hitting on N sight and i think she had better vocab word play and just a better verse that was the most entertaining. N sight most of your stuff didn't even rhyme. And you need to elevate real bad. Keep with it.
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Dread:
N-sights just str8 wack he was never "destined-2-rhyme"... Like retarted rock-climbers when they fall off cliffs tryin' to climb... ^FIRST LINE GREAT SECOND WAS OK IT HAD GOOD FLOW^^8/10 Inarticulate rapper, when you rhyme it sounds like you grunt... The only way you'll draw attention is doodling your name on a blunt...* PRETTY GOOD LINE.. SOUNDS ORIGINAL 8/10 Your flow has evaporated- you're battlin on a lyrical drought... You should smash bulbs- the only way you punch my lights out... NICE WORDPLAY GOOD FLOW NICE PUNCH 8/10 Must have entered this battle defeated- you lost since the beginning... If you spat at the speed of light, we still couldn't 'c' you winning...** MORE GOOD WORDPLAY AND NICE CONCEPTZ 7/10 ^ You couldn't make an impression if you wrote your verse in scratches... You could try to light up herbs and still would throwaway matches...*** ^^ NICE FLOW SOUNDS FAIRLY ORIGINAL 7/10^^ Im to "dreaded" with punches ill leave ya spitz "out-of-sight"... Only way ya rhymes are eva takin' flight is if ya writtin' with a kite... FIRST LINE WAS TIGHT! SECOND WAS SORTA PLAYED 7.5/10 OVERALL 45.5 / 60.0 N-SIGHT I'm not a patient man..so I'll lock ur whole head by twistin' it off- Then you'll be dreaded..but without a head you can't diss me at all- ^^ IT WAS ALRIGHT.. BUT NOT GREAT NOT GOOD RHYMING 6/10 I've seen the worst of the worst..and you fit just above Fine Mind- Cuz line for line ur his wack twin..jus a inch better rhyme for rhyme- GREAT WORDPLAY NOT BAD FLOW AND GOOD PUNCH 8/10 You're not good enough to battle me..I'm leaving u cracked wide open- Now u can spill ur guts..u weren't serious, in ur lines u were jokin'- NICE FLOW GOOD PUNCH..GOOD 8/10 U got no catch phrases in ur style..ur punches are average at best- Kid, ur wack..don't take ur anger out on me cuz you're mad at ur rep- ^^ AVERAGE WITH A PLAYED CONCEPT.. MEH 7/10 I bet ur uglier than Soul Skriptz..maybe a she-man like Latin Kitten- But, if you're a racist like King Solo..the Ku Klux Klan jus stopped lynchin- GOOD ENDING.. BUT BRINGING IN LATIN KITTEN WAS IRRELIVENT... 6/10 fuck otta huuuuuuuuuuuuuuur! ^^ QUIT SAYIN THAT IT KINDA ANNOYING DAWG... OVERALL 37/60 MY VOTE GOES TO DREADED FOR HARDER HITTING PUNCHES AND BETTER FLOW |
why u black list me fuck??.. u all are bitches i drop an honest vote and look what happens..damn!
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pucnhes: D flow:both wordplay:none structure: D personals:both overall:D took this can you guys return the fava the link is on my sig |
fuck dread kicked this dudes ass vote dread had more punches like cashes clay and shit lol.... lines i was feelin umm shadow u was aight o not to mention u had some punches but dread came out hard as hell and just took this one but good battle
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my bad when i said that shadow part i ment n-sight my bad yo my bad
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Vote=Dreadedwicksta
This was a nice battle.I have to give it to dread becasue he had some nice punches.N-Sight,you had nice flow and some nice punches too,but Dreaded had harder punches. Must have entered this battle defeated- you lost since the beginning... If you spat at the speed of light, we still couldn't 'c' you winning...** ^Nice line Dreaded That's was a good battle,but Dreaded took it. |
i dunno what votes ur counting or what
so upping. |
i already had some of these peeps blacklisted from before...and Outsiders vote will be DQ'ed...so this battle is 1-0 ur way basically...and u might get DQed on suspicion of PMin for votes...
so, we'll see...i told u I didn't care about this battle...but, Im not going to be cheated... nuff said 1 |
upping on this joke lets get the battle finished,..
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dreaded won dis wit better punches and flow..nice battle tho
wun |
both verses were good...n-sight had the structture, the punches were aight & the flow was good...dread...your verse was the same...*get rid of the quotations 'n' shit...hate that*....but anyway sight's punches were harder & they landed....
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yo ima hav to giv dis to n sight cuz he led in everything to me this was a merk na mean... dreadedwicksta u was nice but ur opener was kinda wak and u started fallin off afta dat so wut do u think? keep writin tho u'll elevate ~!1!~
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fuck off u herbs
if my votes dont count those unexplained dick rydes dont faggot 1-0 upping |
^^^ actually, its gonna be 5-0 me if u keep Pmin for votes
it's really 2-1 my way...nuff said |
N-Sight just got fuckin clowned!!!
Man half ure shit didn't rhyme fool!! And it's a battle against Dread so why are u bringin me, Skriptz and Latin into ure drop, wat u cudn't think up anything to say about dread............cuz ure shit!!! But u got me blacklisted, little bitch!!! |
flow dred
punches dred vocab neither humor dred overall vote dred |
upping for more votes mahh fuckaz.......^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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holy shit
upping this bitch....................... |
omg votes up in dis bitch az mah fucka^...........
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D came with a better rhyme scheme with a natural flow. N-sight came with weak disses and punches. D's last line got her the win.
vote - Dreadedwicksta vote on mine: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132597 |
N site,
U spit an ok and average verse, I feel U on how niggaz be dick riding and votin for surtain niggaz, but thats a different topic right. U were one of my first battles that I got my ass whooped in, so I know U can do better then this. Ur punches did'nt come as hard as I expected and most of Ur personals were aimed at other people(latinkitten does sound like a man if u listen to her annoying ass voice in audio). U shouldv stook to the theme, which was dissin Dreaded. U aint get merked, but U lost my vote for not staying focused on one person. Dreaded, U aint win this battle by much, Ur verse wasn't as exciting as U may think. Ur flow was ok, no creativity in it at all and some of Ur lines were basic. U had some punches in there. fact of the matter is, Im giving u dis vote cuz U stayed focuse and on key. Ur personal was kinda stupid but once U got Ur punches str8, U started doing better, I was feelin Ur verse a lil more then N-Sites. Flow, N Struct, N Punches, D Metas, D wordplay, D Overall, D V/ DreadedWicksta Ps. N, U should calm down and not let these RB niggaz get U down kid. this shits all about bettering Ur skillz, once U get focused again, U'll lay niggaz out wit Ur verses, stay up kid. |
yo okay this is how i saw it
punches: dread metas:dread multis:none structure: no one on this site has structure enjoyed : dread personals: none that hit hard vote: dread he just murked u but gud battle all |
dread-punches
sight-disses sight-flow dread-wordplay except the ending which should be write on kites not with kites and that rock climbers shit aint make sence at all dread-vocab better verse is dread so thats where my vote goes always a fair vote return the favor |
dreadedwicksta cuz he was hard and flow was good.
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I'm not a patient man..so I'll lock ur whole head by twistin' it off-
Then you'll be dreaded..but without a head you can't diss me at all- 4/10 I've seen the worst of the worst..and you fit just above Fine Mind- Cuz line for line ur his wack twin..jus a inch better rhyme for rhyme- 4/10 You're not good enough to battle me..I'm leaving u cracked wide open- Now u can spill ur guts..u weren't serious, in ur lines u were jokin'- 4/10 U got no catch phrases in ur style..ur punches are average at best- Kid, ur wack..don't take ur anger out on me cuz you're mad at ur rep- 4/10 I bet ur uglier than Soul Skriptz..maybe a she-man like Latin Kitten- But, if you're a racist like King Solo..the Ku Klux Klan jus stopped lynchin- 8/10*Ya Hottest Punch* N-sights just str8 wack he was never "destined-2-rhyme"... Like retarted rock-climbers when they fall off cliffs tryin' to climb... 6/10 Inarticulate rapper, when you rhyme it sounds like you grunt... The only way you'll draw attention is doodling your name on a blunt...* 7/10 Your flow has evaporated- you're battlin on a lyrical drought... You should smash bulbs- the only way you punch my lights out... 6/10 Must have entered this battle defeated- you lost since the beginning... If you spat at the speed of light, we still couldn't 'c' you winning...** 6/10 You couldn't make an impression if you wrote your verse in scratches... You could try to light up herbs and still would throwaway matches...*** 6/10 Im to "dreaded" with punches ill leave ya spitz "out-of-sight"... Only way ya rhymes are eva takin' flight is if ya writtin' with a kite... 7/10 overalll this wasent the best battle but it came down 2 better wordplay and who had the overall harder punch and better structure Sight overall 50/100 Dred overall 70/100 |
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