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Listen, ur not Dreaded in battles..ur just headed for a loss-
I could DQ ur ass-

I'm not a patient man..so I'll lock ur whole head by twistin' it off-
Then you'll be dreaded..but without a head you can't diss me at all-
I've seen the worst of the worst..and you fit just above Fine Mind-
Cuz line for line ur his wack twin..jus a inch better rhyme for rhyme-
You're not good enough to battle me..I'm leaving u cracked wide open-
Now u can spill ur guts..u weren't serious, in ur lines u were jokin'-
U got no catch phrases in ur style..ur punches are average at best-
Kid, ur wack..don't take ur anger out on me cuz you're mad at ur rep-
I bet ur uglier than Soul Skriptz..maybe a she-man like Latin Kitten-
But, if you're a racist like King Solo..the Ku Klux Klan jus stopped lynchin-


fuck otta huuuuuuuuuuuuuuur!

N-sights just str8 wack he was never "destined-2-rhyme"...
Like retarted rock-climbers when they fall off cliffs tryin' to climb...
Inarticulate rapper, when you rhyme it sounds like you grunt...
The only way you'll draw attention is doodling your name on a blunt...*
Your flow has evaporated- you're battlin on a lyrical drought...
You should smash bulbs- the only way you punch my lights out...
Must have entered this battle defeated- you lost since the beginning...
If you spat at the speed of light, we still couldn't 'c' you winning...**
You couldn't make an impression if you wrote your verse in scratches...
You could try to light up herbs and still would throwaway matches...***
Im to "dreaded" with punches ill leave ya spitz "out-of-sight"...
Only way ya rhymes are eva takin' flight is if ya writtin' with a kite...

Explainations:
*... 'draw' is another word for weed
**...'c' is the scientific symbol for the 'speed of light'
**... lighting up a joint/herb requires a match

my last explaination is ment to be *** not **
upping for votes

Dread won this because she had extreamly well used punches that were hard hitting on N sight and i think she had better vocab word play and just a better verse that was the most entertaining. N sight most of your stuff didn't even rhyme. And you need to elevate real bad. Keep with it.

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Dread:
N-sights just str8 wack he was never "destined-2-rhyme"...
Like retarted rock-climbers when they fall off cliffs tryin' to climb...
^FIRST LINE GREAT SECOND WAS OK IT HAD GOOD FLOW^^8/10
Inarticulate rapper, when you rhyme it sounds like you grunt...
The only way you'll draw attention is doodling your name on a blunt...*
PRETTY GOOD LINE.. SOUNDS ORIGINAL 8/10
Your flow has evaporated- you're battlin on a lyrical drought...
You should smash bulbs- the only way you punch my lights out...
NICE WORDPLAY GOOD FLOW NICE PUNCH 8/10
Must have entered this battle defeated- you lost since the beginning...
If you spat at the speed of light, we still couldn't 'c' you winning...**
MORE GOOD WORDPLAY AND NICE CONCEPTZ 7/10 ^
You couldn't make an impression if you wrote your verse in scratches...
You could try to light up herbs and still would throwaway matches...***
^^ NICE FLOW SOUNDS FAIRLY ORIGINAL 7/10^^
Im to "dreaded" with punches ill leave ya spitz "out-of-sight"...
Only way ya rhymes are eva takin' flight is if ya writtin' with a kite...
FIRST LINE WAS TIGHT! SECOND WAS SORTA PLAYED 7.5/10
OVERALL 45.5 / 60.0

N-SIGHT
I'm not a patient man..so I'll lock ur whole head by twistin' it off-
Then you'll be dreaded..but without a head you can't diss me at all-
^^ IT WAS ALRIGHT.. BUT NOT GREAT NOT GOOD RHYMING 6/10
I've seen the worst of the worst..and you fit just above Fine Mind-
Cuz line for line ur his wack twin..jus a inch better rhyme for rhyme-
GREAT WORDPLAY NOT BAD FLOW AND GOOD PUNCH 8/10
You're not good enough to battle me..I'm leaving u cracked wide open-
Now u can spill ur guts..u weren't serious, in ur lines u were jokin'-
NICE FLOW GOOD PUNCH..GOOD 8/10
U got no catch phrases in ur style..ur punches are average at best-
Kid, ur wack..don't take ur anger out on me cuz you're mad at ur rep-
^^ AVERAGE WITH A PLAYED CONCEPT.. MEH 7/10
I bet ur uglier than Soul Skriptz..maybe a she-man like Latin Kitten-
But, if you're a racist like King Solo..the Ku Klux Klan jus stopped lynchin-
GOOD ENDING.. BUT BRINGING IN LATIN KITTEN WAS IRRELIVENT... 6/10
fuck otta huuuuuuuuuuuuuuur!
^^ QUIT SAYIN THAT IT KINDA ANNOYING DAWG...
OVERALL 37/60 MY VOTE GOES TO DREADED FOR HARDER HITTING PUNCHES AND BETTER FLOW

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why u black list me fuck??.. u all are bitches i drop an honest vote and look what happens..damn!

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break down

pucnhes: D
flow:both
wordplay:none
structure: D
personals:both
overall took this can you guys return the fava the link is on my sig

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fuck dread kicked this dudes ass vote dread had more punches like cashes clay and shit lol.... lines i was feelin umm shadow u was aight o not to mention u had some punches but dread came out hard as hell and just took this one but good battle
v/dread

my bad when i said that shadow part i ment n-sight my bad yo my bad

Vote=Dreadedwicksta

This was a nice battle.I have to give it to dread becasue he had some nice punches.N-Sight,you had nice flow and some nice punches too,but Dreaded had harder punches.

Must have entered this battle defeated- you lost since the beginning...
If you spat at the speed of light, we still couldn't 'c' you winning...**

^Nice line Dreaded


That's was a good battle,but Dreaded took it.

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i dunno what votes ur counting or what
so upping.

i already had some of these peeps blacklisted from before...and Outsiders vote will be DQ'ed...so this battle is 1-0 ur way basically...and u might get DQed on suspicion of PMin for votes...

so, we'll see...i told u I didn't care about this battle...but, Im not going to be cheated...

nuff said


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