Battle: Whiteyonthemic vs Mishap
 

Yo 12 lines rip it

thus fag still frustrated cuz i rule the rap world
so now i call him a lesbian cuz hes a bitch that likes girls
every time i rap i leave this nigga shook
he got robbed he was supposed to be the crook
ill let this boy here know all the facts
im the big dawg now meow like a cat
matter of fact ill be the cat and ur the mouse
set a trap by ur door just to lure u out ya house
i usually dont talk to bitches who play with toys
but ive always wanted to battle a member of the beastie boys
now that its all been done and said
ill let elton john and whitey go back to bed

it dont make sence to battle with me
im going to teach u a lesson just see
ill be like an ethiopean and spit you out
your stale as hell without no doubt
the ryhmes you lay are to fake to be played
your an mc that has never gotten layed
sitting in front of the tv still watching disney
you dont know what rap is when your idol is whitney
half of your shits generic but its all repeptative
you cant make up nothing new so its not competitive
take some advice and try not to battle again
because u aint never going to have a chance to win
:shoot: :shoot: :shoot:

Alright were open for votes so everyone that comes in here please vote for the best you think enlignten us on waht we could of did better and what we did wrong

common 17 views and no votes hurry up and vote and tell us what u thought

yo good battle, but white won dis bye an inch,good job

yo mj wat tha fuck was that..........................not a vote

lmfao i know he said i won but he didnt give a vote lmfao

lol

lmfao can we please hurry up and get some votes 45 views and no votes

if yall drop a vote in this battle >>>> http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131085



ill come back and vote on this one

whatsup we need some votes so you all should start voting now ok peace

the punches went to white, mishap was way off
really none had a fair amount of multies
the whole battle battle was obvois that it had newbies in it' yall both need to elevate big time,
but white won dis still

take some advice and try not to battle again
because u aint never going to have a chance to win

again and win dont rhyme

now that its all been done and said
ill let elton john and whitey go back to bed

ok closer

End-Mishap

I just said that cuz that all u did good, u had some nice lines in their but no flow it was just 3 good lines, fillers and krap.

Whitey you had somewhat good from top to last 2 lines...So thats why i vote for u, nothing special, jus keep working at it

Vote Whitey

hey can we hurry up and get this over with now will some people please vote

MIshap: wow that was not a very good drop.................I saw that your
flow was decent.........you didn't use many big words at all so up your
vocab.......punches didn't hit as hard as Whiteyonthemic ya know and that
is one major downfall.......

Whiteyonthemic: not a very good drop from you aswell..........flow was
aight not the best but aight, vocab not big words just like Mishap....
but you took it in the punches category which gives you this battle...

do a honest vote on my shit links in my signature.

my vote for this battle goes to mishap, I dont realy look for structure too much like every body else, I actually read wat they got to say. WOTM was just saying things to fill in space and make things ryme. A punch line is suppose to be clever, I did'nt see this in his verse. to me, his flow sounded Old School as fuck and terribale. Mishap attempted in my veiw to make more of a punchline than his opponent. He did'nt hit as hard as he should be hitting at this point in the battles. But in this weak ass battle, he did just enough to get up in my view.

V/Mishap

Lyrically ya'll both on tha same level. So this was a neck n neck battle. Neither of you had any good punches. Whitey had slightly better lyrics than Mishap. Both of ya had iight structure. Vote - Whitey.

P.S. - Return tha favor. Link in my sig.

hey may we please get some more votes its 4-1 and we both want to end it

hey we need votes common now me and him both want to end this thing so hurry up please

hey vote for us hurry up we want to end this both of us do

whitey
 

man....this was a wack battle...mishap this was weak...had an aight flow...but not good...and whitey...it wasnt the best...its ure first battle...only up from here mayne...so overall whitey...

v/whitey