Yo 12 lines rip it

thus fag still frustrated cuz i rule the rap world
so now i call him a lesbian cuz hes a bitch that likes girls
every time i rap i leave this nigga shook
he got robbed he was supposed to be the crook
ill let this boy here know all the facts
im the big dawg now meow like a cat
matter of fact ill be the cat and ur the mouse
set a trap by ur door just to lure u out ya house
i usually dont talk to bitches who play with toys
but ive always wanted to battle a member of the beastie boys
now that its all been done and said
ill let elton john and whitey go back to bed

it dont make sence to battle with me
im going to teach u a lesson just see
ill be like an ethiopean and spit you out
your stale as hell without no doubt
the ryhmes you lay are to fake to be played
your an mc that has never gotten layed
sitting in front of the tv still watching disney
you dont know what rap is when your idol is whitney
half of your shits generic but its all repeptative
you cant make up nothing new so its not competitive
take some advice and try not to battle again
because u aint never going to have a chance to win

Alright were open for votes so everyone that comes in here please vote for the best you think enlignten us on waht we could of did better and what we did wrong

common 17 views and no votes hurry up and vote and tell us what u thought

yo good battle, but white won dis bye an inch,good job

yo mj wat tha fuck was that..........................not a vote

lmfao i know he said i won but he didnt give a vote lmfao

lol

lmfao can we please hurry up and get some votes 45 views and no votes

if yall drop a vote in this battle >>>> http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131085



ill come back and vote on this one

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whatsup we need some votes so you all should start voting now ok peace

the punches went to white, mishap was way off
really none had a fair amount of multies
the whole battle battle was obvois that it had newbies in it' yall both need to elevate big time,
but white won dis still

take some advice and try not to battle again
because u aint never going to have a chance to win

again and win dont rhyme

now that its all been done and said
ill let elton john and whitey go back to bed

ok closer

End-Mishap

I just said that cuz that all u did good, u had some nice lines in their but no flow it was just 3 good lines, fillers and krap.

Whitey you had somewhat good from top to last 2 lines...So thats why i vote for u, nothing special, jus keep working at it

Vote Whitey

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