(dr) dacrozofhb vs. unfortunate (tg)
 

house rules ten lines.. verses due by thursday midnight

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Dis Nigga actin all dumb and pullin my hair, like we in a Blonde Fight/
Croz got ya lookin more FUCKED than bitches on Prom Night/
You crew aint shitt nigga, so stop yellin " Don't Push Me"/
Got our Government all Twisted cuz it switched from Dicks to Pussies/
Nobody on dis site knows yo fuckin name, and u talk like you Universal/
My heat in da back gon leave ya mo Popped than Pringle Commercials/
I advise you to no-show, and save all the Pressure/
Definitely a Noob cuz yo lyrics aint got da TEXTure/
Must be "Unfortunate" to battle "DaCROZ", and cant even get out a Word/
Just Rhymin a bunch of SHIT together like one of my Blows hit ya Flow Nerve

im here for my checkin

yo yo check it

loading my tec-9 he screaming, get him pleading for his life
folding my fingers i leave him bleading,sending in the knife
their crews soft,all fags the only thing hard is their gay erection
reluctant to the matter, leaving these hermafidites in anticipation
its time for genicide, delete this crew, kill them all with a pistol
Dacroz is the bitch, he blows dick like a referee blows his whistle
unfortunates here to rip this bitch leave his mom with a nervous twitch
misunderstood queer, rapping with a dick in his ear, flippin my switch
yo your barking up the wrong tree looking like a long eared monkey
now go home and tell all your friends you just got beat by a honkey

alright were going to uppin this now for votes so lets get it hoppin in here

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first off...this was an aight battle...okay d...u had some alright flow...not the best in the world...your punches were weak compared to white boy...but i did like this line Nobody on dis site knows yo fuckin name, and u talk like you Universal/
My heat in da back gon leave ya mo Popped than Pringle Commercials....funny....and unfortunate....strong flow...good punches...and structure was good....and i liked this line the best...their crews soft,all fags the only thing hard is their gay erection
reluctant to the matter, leaving these hermafidites in anticipation...strong...overall vote goes to unfortunate

alright comon lets get some votes in this is a crew battle type thing

lets get some honest votes in dis shit....ill hit up ur battles

ok this battle was ok, most defitly seen better. structure was ok on both parts need help tho.

its time for genicide, delete this crew, kill them all with a pistol
Dacroz is the bitch, he blows dick like a referee blows his whistle

that was a good line from Unfortunate, not very original, but clever. Unfortunate had a few good punches but croz's were better and he had a better flow. vote goes to croz but not by much.

this was a pretty close battle.. both of you had decent flow and rythem.. rhyme scheme was ok for both... this is what won the battle right here for Croz:

Nobody on dis site knows yo fuckin name, and u talk like you Universal/
My heat in da back gon leave ya mo Popped than Pringle Commercials/
I advise you to no-show, and save all the Pressure/
Definitely a Noob cuz yo lyrics aint got da TEXTure

those 2 lines where pretty tight. now unfortunate i aint hatin on you cause this was close as hell playa.. good battle from both of you but Croz takes this one with better punches/personals... good battle u 2

VOTE- Croz

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croz KILLD em, if u vote for lil unfortunate, you must be his lil dick ridas.

uppin........honest votes will return da fav

Structure; Tie
Flow: Tie
Punches: Croz
Personals: Croz
Closer: Tie
Vote Croz

yo yo yo yo yo lets get some votes

good battle, i think whitey had some good punches,Croz attacked but is punches were too soft, so its whitey

yo lets get this up and votin, leave a linka nd ill repay the favor

DaCroz Drop:

Dis Nigga actin all dumb and pullin my hair, like we in a Blonde Fight/
Croz got ya lookin more FUCKED than bitches on Prom Night/
ok opener not the best 6/10
You crew aint shitt nigga, so stop yellin " Don't Push Me"/
Got our Government all Twisted cuz it switched from Dicks to Pussies/
aight punch 7/10 used the crew name against em its all good
Nobody on dis site knows yo fuckin name, and u talk like you Universal/
My heat in da back gon leave ya mo Popped than Pringle Commercials/
nice punch 7/10
I advise you to no-show, and save all the Pressure/
Definitely a Noob cuz yo lyrics aint got da TEXTure/
good nice play there dawg 7/10
Must be "Unfortunate" to battle "DaCROZ", and cant even get out a Word/
Just Rhymin a bunch of SHIT together like one of my Blows hit ya Flow Nerve
aight closer not the greatest but whateva 6.5/10

overall: 7/10

Unfortunate Drop:

loading my tec-9 he screaming, get him pleading for his life
folding my fingers i leave him bleading,sending in the knife
weak played & uncreative 4/10
their crews soft,all fags the only thing hard is their gay erection
reluctant to the matter, leaving these hermafidites in anticipation
gay jokes=played as well 4/10
its time for genicide, delete this crew, kill them all with a pistol
Dacroz is the bitch, he blows dick like a referee blows his whistle
gay jokes=played but decent punch 6/10
unfortunates here to rip this bitch leave his mom with a nervous twitch
misunderstood queer, rapping with a dick in his ear, flippin my switch
wow you obsessed with gay jokes kid getting irritating 0/10
yo your barking up the wrong tree looking like a long eared monkey
now go home and tell all your friends you just got beat by a honkey
what the fuck! didn't get it! 5/10

overall: 4.5/10

vote goes to: dacrozofhb

do a honest vote on my shit links in my signature peeps.

Unfortunate had the better flow and punchlines so i'ma vote for him, DaCROZofHB's flow was a little shaky in the begining, but he worked towards the end:

their crews soft,all fags the only thing hard is their gay erection
reluctant to the matter, leaving these hermafidites in anticipation
its time for genicide, delete this crew, kill them all with a pistol
Dacroz is the bitch, he blows dick like a referee blows his whistle
^^fav line from unfortunate

You crew aint shitt nigga, so stop yellin " Don't Push Me"/
Got our Government all Twisted cuz it switched from Dicks to Pussies/
Nobody on dis site knows yo fuckin name, and u talk like you Universal/
My heat in da back gon leave ya mo Popped than Pringle Commercials/
^^fav line from DaCROZofHB

i'ma vote for unfortunate cause his punches hit harder

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DaCrozofHB - Not a bad verse. Some some nice punches. Lyrically could of been a little better but still good job.

Unfortunate - Verse was iight but lacked tha lyricks to take this one. Closer could of been better. Keep elevatin.

Vote - DaCrozofHB

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