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Dis Nigga actin all dumb and pullin my hair, like we in a Blonde Fight/
Croz got ya lookin more FUCKED than bitches on Prom Night/
You crew aint shitt nigga, so stop yellin " Don't Push Me"/
Got our Government all Twisted cuz it switched from Dicks to Pussies/
Nobody on dis site knows yo fuckin name, and u talk like you Universal/
My heat in da back gon leave ya mo Popped than Pringle Commercials/
I advise you to no-show, and save all the Pressure/
Definitely a Noob cuz yo lyrics aint got da TEXTure/
Must be "Unfortunate" to battle "DaCROZ", and cant even get out a Word/
Just Rhymin a bunch of SHIT together like one of my Blows hit ya Flow Nerve

im here for my checkin

yo yo check it

loading my tec-9 he screaming, get him pleading for his life
folding my fingers i leave him bleading,sending in the knife
their crews soft,all fags the only thing hard is their gay erection
reluctant to the matter, leaving these hermafidites in anticipation
its time for genicide, delete this crew, kill them all with a pistol
Dacroz is the bitch, he blows dick like a referee blows his whistle
unfortunates here to rip this bitch leave his mom with a nervous twitch
misunderstood queer, rapping with a dick in his ear, flippin my switch
yo your barking up the wrong tree looking like a long eared monkey
now go home and tell all your friends you just got beat by a honkey

alright were going to uppin this now for votes so lets get it hoppin in here

yo vote here and then go check out mishap vs e-dubz but vote if u look at this thread oright

open for votes

first off...this was an aight battle...okay d...u had some alright flow...not the best in the world...your punches were weak compared to white boy...but i did like this line Nobody on dis site knows yo fuckin name, and u talk like you Universal/
My heat in da back gon leave ya mo Popped than Pringle Commercials....funny....and unfortunate....strong flow...good punches...and structure was good....and i liked this line the best...their crews soft,all fags the only thing hard is their gay erection
reluctant to the matter, leaving these hermafidites in anticipation...strong...overall vote goes to unfortunate

alright comon lets get some votes in this is a crew battle type thing

lets get some honest votes in dis shit....ill hit up ur battles

ok this battle was ok, most defitly seen better. structure was ok on both parts need help tho.

its time for genicide, delete this crew, kill them all with a pistol
Dacroz is the bitch, he blows dick like a referee blows his whistle

that was a good line from Unfortunate, not very original, but clever. Unfortunate had a few good punches but croz's were better and he had a better flow. vote goes to croz but not by much.

this was a pretty close battle.. both of you had decent flow and rythem.. rhyme scheme was ok for both... this is what won the battle right here for Croz:

Nobody on dis site knows yo fuckin name, and u talk like you Universal/
My heat in da back gon leave ya mo Popped than Pringle Commercials/
I advise you to no-show, and save all the Pressure/
Definitely a Noob cuz yo lyrics aint got da TEXTure

those 2 lines where pretty tight. now unfortunate i aint hatin on you cause this was close as hell playa.. good battle from both of you but Croz takes this one with better punches/personals... good battle u 2

VOTE- Croz

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16 KOs 19 WINS

yo uppin for votes

open for votes

croz KILLD em, if u vote for lil unfortunate, you must be his lil dick ridas.

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