WiNC vs *The~Star*
 

aight
5-0 let's me leave a one where the zero is/
you a second-rate artist like b2k's lil fizz/
not even the teenie bppers know who he is/
if you "the star" then you've "fallin'" like "alicia" in the "WiNC" of an eye/
prepare your self like "biggie" be "ready to die"/
after 5-0 why haven't you "elevated" yet/
what's a matter you scared to get ya feet wet/
you wanna play with the youngin's stead of hanging with the vets/
you got almost 200 and just got took by a rookie/
you were mistaken if you thought your 5-0 record shook me/

Umm…ok.Go easy on dis.Once I get past 5 wins,I’m heading over to elevated.Watch this…


-I was bored, so I was looking for a quick lil battle
-Yo stupid ass signed up, and wasn’t prepared to get rattled
-You new, so I’ll try to take it easy on you
-Spitting that bullshit you spiting, you could never be in a crew
-Fucking with a future best, so I don’t know why you stepped to test
-But I’m bout to lay the smackdown, and lay ya soft ass to rest
-Your weak punches don’t faze me, cuz I would obviously blaze thee
-Go ahead and set yourself on fire, I’m burning you like a forest tree
-Let this be a lesson, don’t ever fuck with Star again
-I’m too hot ,I’ll leave ya ass blowing in the wind

:shoot:

vote on mah battle wit hoops an ill vote on this one

thanks for the battle Star... aight ... uppin for votes...
even though on this site you seems like people practically have to beg for them...

aight y'all....this battle has got to go to WiNC cuz i was feelin him more. da other cat was rhymin to simple and he said he wasnt tryin and i believe him haha. no beef y'all...i just think WiNC came ready to play and brought da fire from da get-go.
vote: WiNC


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^I'm a female just 2 let you know

aight y'all....this battle has got to go to WiNC cuz i was feelin him more. da other cat was rhymin to simple and she said he wasnt tryin and i believe her haha. no beef y'all...i just think WiNC came ready to play and brought da fire from da get-go.
vote: WiNC


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....that better hoe?

^Alright you better chill out with that bullshit

aight...no beef....just settin ya straight

great battle... winc came out swingin hard, and I don't think Star was fully prepared.. she came a little to soft this time and winc got her wit his cunning rhymes... good battle for both but one takes the cake

winnner.... Winc

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lol...

aight break down...

winc:first bars are played... record disses about you being her first lost or sumthing is really really played... like half ur verse circled around her record.. :-/... not much creativity.. nice wordplay tho i liked that part about ur verse.. flow was off a lil.. structure was ok... overall 5/10

star: you strunture stood out.. was pretty good.. flow was ok.. punches were ok.. not many played lines, thats better.. over like a 6.5/10...nice drop..

over all i was feelin stars the most... big ups to both of you, and keep elavatin...

v/star

to further explain my vote.. i hate played lines lol.. alot.. so if a emcee uses one, he needs to work twice as hard to get out of that hole he dug himself for me.. feel me ? its like, usin something thats not entirely of your thought, or has beenused to many times, is like you not tryna be creative... not dissin ne one, cause you both had nice drops, just my vote was swayed a lil bit by the played line is all.. good battle both of you... keep elavatin, get at me

Winc: Your structure was off a lil, but it didnt hurt your flow much.
Your punchlines were pretty syck.
I liked your personals: if you "the star" then you've "fallin'" like "alicia" in the "WiNC" of an eye/ <---That line was nice.
Maybe a lil more wordplay next time.

The Star: I thought your verse was pretty generic. You had good structure and flow, woulda sounded good on a mic.
Punchlines were very weak, I wasnt feelin em at all.
Wasnt seein any good personals.
Your wordplay however, was good.

v/ Winc

the start won this one she came harder than winc u just sucked dude for sho
star had some nice punches nice use of her words and most of all more punches thats what won this battle and thats somthin win didnt have
v/star

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wtf


the star: your structure was aiight
good flow..it was almost perfect
your punches were there but i aint feelin the rattled battled line
personals were hittin
saw some meta's
no multi's but good job
overall: 29/50

WINC: your shit was aiight btu i dont like ur structure,wordplay, and personals...they were weird dawg i dunno...ur personals were hittin..ur punches were good..but i dunno bout structure it was messed
overall:27/50

i aint gon poll vote until u drop a vote in this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132255


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Uppin

strcutre: Tie
Flow: wink
Personals: Stars
Punches: Winc
Enjoyed WInk
vote Wink

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...uppin...

Punches-Winc
Personals-*
Flow-who cares its text....but *
Opener-Tie...both were meh
Closer-*
Enjoyment-Winc...but like Hoops said ive seen a lot of ur conceptz b4
Overall-Star.......

WinC ur wordplay was cool im a fan of wordplay but some of ur lines coulda been worded better and like i said u had some played conceptz but ur verse was pretty tight
Star...ur personals were great u had better structure...and u had some wordplay in there 2

close battle...but star

Uppin 4 da last vote of a close battle :wtf: So vote

What the hell man no one even told the battle was gonna be reopened ne ways they dq most of my vote .......uppin ........

uppin for votes again

votes

uppin for votes...

It was some bullshit votes in here & I ain't losing by some bullshit votes.

Let's get some more votes

the star got this wit better punches and i liked da flow..winc ur punches werent hittin as hard as star's..good battle but star edged it on her punches

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How Did The Star Get A 5-0 Record ?...She Sucks...lOl...I Ko'ed Her Numerous Times On SixShot...But AnyWay...This Win Goes To WiNc...Star You Reallly Didn't Have Any Punches...WiNC Had Weak Ones But He Won...

Punches:Winc
Personals:WinC
flow:star
structure:star
consistency:winc
quality:winc
overall:winc

Honest Votes...

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^^^ :thefinger

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yo i thought this was a close battle but the star had better punches and flow both yall structures was nice but i give this battle to the star


good luck WinC on ur next battle

win=the star

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This poll is funny every single votes been dq'd wut tha fuck is really goin on aite break down
winc-you came hot on this one i liked your punches and ya pesonal was fucink raw -if you "the star" then you've "fallin'" like "alicia" in the "WiNC" of an eye/
prepare your self like "biggie" be "ready to die"/--ya structure can get better though just work on that and youll be a skr8 emcee

the star-ya verse was iight ya punchlines werent hittin as hard as wincs he hit harder than wut u said i liked how u said---Your weak punches don’t faze me, cuz I would obviously blaze thee
-Go ahead and set yourself on fire, I’m burning you like a forest tree---but i feel u came into this too confident and thought you had it won easily but u shouldve came a lil harder and you wouldve had my vote but....

vote-winc

votes people ...

ok...

winc.not great......sum ok punches....ova than that basic structure..up vocab/creativity...ok flow..

star...no punches..ok rhyme scheme....i know u betya than that..u jus came half assed coz u thought it woz gonna b easy
it wasnt a strong battle verse....
dnt take nuttin 4 granted n always cum hard..(ive bin a victim of this maself..)

ima hve to vote winc...cos he tried n had the beta punches

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I'ma have to vote for winc on this one, they had better puches, creativity and structure....

vote - winc

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