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WiNC 5 71.43%
*The~Star* 2 28.57%
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Old 06-30-04, 01:24 AM   #1
*The~Star*
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WiNC vs *The~Star*

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10 lines or 5 bars
No Strecthing
No D/R

WiNC spits first
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Old 06-30-04, 01:36 AM   #2
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aight
5-0 let's me leave a one where the zero is/
you a second-rate artist like b2k's lil fizz/
not even the teenie bppers know who he is/
if you "the star" then you've "fallin'" like "alicia" in the "WiNC" of an eye/
prepare your self like "biggie" be "ready to die"/
after 5-0 why haven't you "elevated" yet/
what's a matter you scared to get ya feet wet/
you wanna play with the youngin's stead of hanging with the vets/
you got almost 200 and just got took by a rookie/
you were mistaken if you thought your 5-0 record shook me/
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Old 06-30-04, 02:03 AM   #3
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Umm…ok.Go easy on dis.Once I get past 5 wins,I’m heading over to elevated.Watch this…


-I was bored, so I was looking for a quick lil battle
-Yo stupid ass signed up, and wasn’t prepared to get rattled
-You new, so I’ll try to take it easy on you
-Spitting that bullshit you spiting, you could never be in a crew
-Fucking with a future best, so I don’t know why you stepped to test
-But I’m bout to lay the smackdown, and lay ya soft ass to rest
-Your weak punches don’t faze me, cuz I would obviously blaze thee
-Go ahead and set yourself on fire, I’m burning you like a forest tree
-Let this be a lesson, don’t ever fuck with Star again
-I’m too hot ,I’ll leave ya ass blowing in the wind


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Old 06-30-04, 02:09 AM   #4
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vote on mah battle wit hoops an ill vote on this one
 
Old 06-30-04, 02:18 AM   #5
TAKENOTICE
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thanks for the battle Star... aight ... uppin for votes...
even though on this site you seems like people practically have to beg for them...
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Old 06-30-04, 02:29 AM   #6
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aight y'all....this battle has got to go to WiNC cuz i was feelin him more. da other cat was rhymin to simple and he said he wasnt tryin and i believe him haha. no beef y'all...i just think WiNC came ready to play and brought da fire from da get-go.
vote: WiNC


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Old 06-30-04, 02:32 AM   #7
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^I'm a female just 2 let you know
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Old 06-30-04, 02:34 AM   #8
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aight y'all....this battle has got to go to WiNC cuz i was feelin him more. da other cat was rhymin to simple and she said he wasnt tryin and i believe her haha. no beef y'all...i just think WiNC came ready to play and brought da fire from da get-go.
vote: WiNC


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Old 06-30-04, 02:35 AM   #9
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....that better hoe?
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Old 06-30-04, 02:36 AM   #10
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^Alright you better chill out with that bullshit
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Old 06-30-04, 02:38 AM   #11
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aight...no beef....just settin ya straight
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Old 06-30-04, 02:41 AM   #12
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great battle... winc came out swingin hard, and I don't think Star was fully prepared.. she came a little to soft this time and winc got her wit his cunning rhymes... good battle for both but one takes the cake

winnner.... Winc

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Old 06-30-04, 02:41 AM   #13
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lol...

aight break down...

winc:first bars are played... record disses about you being her first lost or sumthing is really really played... like half ur verse circled around her record.. :-/... not much creativity.. nice wordplay tho i liked that part about ur verse.. flow was off a lil.. structure was ok... overall 5/10

star: you strunture stood out.. was pretty good.. flow was ok.. punches were ok.. not many played lines, thats better.. over like a 6.5/10...nice drop..

over all i was feelin stars the most... big ups to both of you, and keep elavatin...

v/star
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Old 06-30-04, 02:44 AM   #14
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to further explain my vote.. i hate played lines lol.. alot.. so if a emcee uses one, he needs to work twice as hard to get out of that hole he dug himself for me.. feel me ? its like, usin something thats not entirely of your thought, or has beenused to many times, is like you not tryna be creative... not dissin ne one, cause you both had nice drops, just my vote was swayed a lil bit by the played line is all.. good battle both of you... keep elavatin, get at me
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Old 06-30-04, 09:37 AM   #15
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Winc: Your structure was off a lil, but it didnt hurt your flow much.
Your punchlines were pretty syck.
I liked your personals: if you "the star" then you've "fallin'" like "alicia" in the "WiNC" of an eye/ <---That line was nice.
Maybe a lil more wordplay next time.

The Star: I thought your verse was pretty generic. You had good structure and flow, woulda sounded good on a mic.
Punchlines were very weak, I wasnt feelin em at all.
Wasnt seein any good personals.
Your wordplay however, was good.

v/ Winc
 
 


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