time 2 kill
 

iight man u spit 1st and it be 4-7 lines iight?

Hurry up and post back after me, i don't got time.
Say my name, that's only way you'll say a hot line(Jae Burnz(Burnz something hot))/
You spit hard but i bet if i seen you it would be a hi now.
It was live befo, but when i came round it became a shy town/
Take that icon off you wish you was pac.
Take a look at our names, I'm jae burnz, so you not hot(jae Burnz(burnz something hot burns))/

u sound way 2 confident


yo flyweight don't eva let yo gaurd down burnz betta look out
cuz i took out enough of yo fam 2 have a muthafuckin cookout

yo be like kanye west and start walkin with christ
cuz fuckin wit me is more of a gamble den a pack of dice

u don't kno dat i'll murda u and and do it again in da after life
belive me u lost yo mine rushin me 2 spit my line

i'm shYtowm i don't care bout yo life nigga cuz i got time

yo yo verse wuz iight

u need 2 take dat 2 audio tho cuz ppl dunno how u say yo ryhems on text

yea i feel you people never do but i have no mic righ tnow but yea uppin......

JaeBurnz354 Drop:

Hurry up and post back after me, i don't got time.
Say my name, that's only way you'll say a hot line
ha 1st line was weak and 2nd line was a self-glorification line 3.5/10
You spit hard but i bet if i seen you it would be a hi now.
It was live befo, but when i came round it became a shy town
u used his name atleast....but still weak 5/10
Take that icon off you wish you was pac.
Take a look at our names, I'm jae burnz, so you not hot
what the fuck self-glorification line again! and don't use hot twice in 3 bars not a smart move boi 1/10

overall: 4/10



Shytown Drop:

yo flyweight don't eva let yo gaurd down burnz betta look out
cuz i took out enough of yo fam 2 have a muthafuckin cookout
blah! barbeque style used his name against him properly tho 5/10
yo be like kanye west and start walkin with christ
cuz fuckin wit me is more of a gamble den a pack of dice
aight wordplay but self-glorification second line 5/10
u don't kno dat i'll murda u and and do it again in da after life
belive me u lost yo mine rushin me 2 spit my line
i'm shYtowm i don't care bout yo life nigga cuz i got time
weak weak weak yet again 4.5/10

overall: 4.8/10

vote goes to shytown

do a honest vote on my shit links in my signature etcetera .vs. me

uppin 4 votes..........Vote .........uppin 4 votes

upppin 4 votes people!!! cum on yaw i vote all da time and we need 2 change dat not votin shit cuz we got battles dat last WAY 2 long and its only 5 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!

word uppin 4 votes......Vote.uppin 4 votes........

need votes now!!!!!
 

yo get dis battle ova wit i have 2 battles out now dat been going on 4eva, just plz vote 4 one of dem, i vote all da time and people neeva vote on my battles so plz vote!!!!!!

uppin 4 votes.......VOTE..........uppin 4 votes...

Yo is anyone gonna vote on our battle 4real 4real?

yo thas fucked up nobody battles in here yo even when you vote for their battle

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Honestly I really wasn't feeling either one of yall's punches, neither one of you had no multi's or anything, no disrespect yall both just seem you could've came harder, like you put no effort into it, but of out of the two I gotta go with Shytown

v/Shytown

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Yo nobody votes but then wants you to vote for their battles man fuck U..P..P..I..N

Ima have to give this vote to Shytown

punches:shy
meta:shy
structure:shy
flow:shy
personals:neither really just glorification
creativity:neither *Back2Basics*

check out ur boi......http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136748

Shout outs 2 da 9-1-9 and da 2-5-2 and my crew Mosiac

R.I.P. 2 da falln soliders

the only hot line is when you say my name and it was live and i made it a shy town-punches personals and disses go to jae but struture and flow go to shytown.since its a battle punches and good personals win it for jae.




i always vote honest check my shits out and do the same

Shy Took this one .. i was feelin his verse mo ... so there Shy takes it .. return the favor man on these battles :
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http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140383
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140123

ok jae had a hot line with that shytown but the rest was weak no punch other then that hit and your struture needs help.shytown had good punches all the way through and a good struture and that brought him through