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Check in by: 08-09-04 at 06:00 AM

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Diamond042291 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 06:02 AM.

dysphoria has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-06-04 06:03 AM.

alright its time to say goodnight you pussy
time to turn off the light dont push me
cuz it'll be a distaster cause i'll blast you faster
than a shao Lin master yeah its a catastrophe
for any bitch thats after me
cant u hear my laughter B
bobbin and weavin my fake jab then a right so decievin
thats why all these bitches leavin retreatin
cause they dont want a beatin
watchin your nose leakin
u seekin safety u thought u could take me
but now u looking all shakey
about to fall this fight is called
u just got malled
my reach can teach u
itll fuckin beat you
defeat you
its somethin u cant see through
somethin u cant see past
cause if u step in its path
u gettin knocked on your ass so fast
50 rounds i can last and i'll be havin a blast
fly the flag have mast
cause I just killed your ass
its a thrill
to see your blood spill
i was born to kill
it gives my spine a chill
and until u can take my hook
and not be shook
watch the way you look
before you life gets took

Illest MC DISTRAININ' AND INFAMIN' And Its All PROGRESSED BY THE RHYMES ...
Strangle Your Optics From Your Soul And Say I Killed Ya FLESH BY THE NINE
This Bitch a Mad Biter ... But I'll Still FIGHT TO CONDESED ... Strapped In a HI TECH VEST
I'll BITE YA TEXT ... Leave It Without Multies And DIGEST THA REST
I Start DISSIN' TO ABUSE ... To Bruse You Like Chickens Cloakin' In CHICKEN COOPS
Its a Cumalitive To An Abortion ... The Predecessar Is Used To R.I.P-pin' NEW BORNS
Strattle Ya Tech Nine ... You Ain't Equipin' Hand Guns Cauze I'm CLIPPIN' BRUSED ARMS

Real Shit :

I'mma Slash Thin Cuts From Razors To Your Text Cauze I RINCK ICE
Shoot Double Caps To Make You HALF BRAINED ... Just To Make You THINK TWICE
I Rap MAD HARD ... My Cyps Are BACK STABBERS The Way I STAB BARS
Its An ARENA BATTLE Cauze I'm warmin' Shooters To Have You Dead Before You Can GRAB GUARDS
This Bitch ROCKS DUST ... HANDCUFF YA TEXT ... Ya Name Consepted a COP BUST
This Bitch GLOCKS WHAT ... INTIMATE CYPHERS KILLIN' YOU QUICK In This HARD CORE GAME
DESCINIMATE RIDERS REVEALIN' YOU SHIT ... Cauze I'll Rock Ya Head Into a HARD FLOOR DAME

Voted For: dysphoria

Dysphoria had better structure... might wanna look at his word usage and pick up a dictionary (last line)... third bar looks like it's missing a line... what's a cyp?... no real punches ... a lot of shit talking... gun talk don't win battles unless you displaying mad skillz...but...

Diamondbuncha#'s:

didn't finish explaiing vote:

d: your lines were stretched all to hell... no structure at all... rhymes were simplistic... most of ya verse seemed filler... ya used multi's but very effectively... no word play... very basic and premature rap style... v/ goes to dys

uppin this .. c'mon peeps need votes in here so we can close this thread .. don't sleep y'all ... peace

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Voted For: Diamond042291

structur 2 diamond rimes to dimin no punchlines on either side you both could do better but dimin favored over you more. so i give my vote to diamond.. no lie hit me back

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Voted For: dysphoria

like Dysphoria flow better
both structures wasn't all
dat great but Dysphoria's
worked with da flow
v/Dysphoria
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Nice drop really feelin it
I liked ur structure punchlines and overall verse
TOO bad I cant vote yet but I will be sure to do it