Shadows Edge (A.I) vs Daclassic (B.P.) crew battle
 

10 lines max
no feeding
if you can't vote don't post comments
no fake personals
if they are fake they will be proven
no d/r
no hate/v
no crew/v
no recycling

overall detailed voting only....

this is not acceptable
opener X
multi X
punches X
personals X
Closer X
Is not acceptable
line by line analysis voting only

Due on Thursday

lol... let's see what you got.

lol...you should already know rookie....i remembered when you first got here.

my verse is ready... drop whenever and i'll follow unless im at work.

well drop it.....

do you really need 2 days to look at it? we drop at the same time, so as to prevent feeding.

it's due tommorrow...which I told you before...I havent even started yet...and besides there is no feeding...read the rules...I been busy with a lot of other shit...kid.

The Classic Verse
 

Since want to be a shadow or some sort so bad
I going treat him like he really is a fucking shadow
so pay attention to the lines

By far this dude is butt, Soft, A fragile pussy, He gushy, Is he hard? I think he nuts
This shadow's edge aint even coming close to creating damage close to a papercut
Can we stop the fakers, Ghostwriters are profit takers, From shadow, A bread breaker
He's Another daclassic hater, A shadow that follows my motions, A fuckin imitator
A vet-vet-veteran, Damn I'm stut-ter-in', A vet please! He a vet on animals of a disease
With ease, I be getting so hot, I'll walk right through this fucker to take a breeze
The way I'm tellin' it, humiliating this faggot for rappin in front of an audience
Your life is irrelevent, Never a leader, You behind others with a simulated intelligence
Always you on my ass or which ever one of my sides, I see depression in your eyes
Wishing to duck and hide, In the land of Urbana, Where the rest of these herbs reside

Now you happy......I went first now....now go edit your damn verse....

lol just woke up. now stop swaying and using gay quotes.

[font=tahoma]Long time in the making? Best savor these moments
No wait…
its just dc’s acne that had a breakout performance
It’s sad really, herbs on this site ever respected you
Kid would be fucking wack… but even that rejected you
We both know, I’m straight better battle wise
Called yourself DC, but I’ll be the one to capitalize
My punches explosive, this stupid fucks ill fated
Cuz daclassic Blue up… n thought he’d elevated
no surprise you stressed, fucking with the best
I commit Cardinal sins, way I Pujoles in your chest
[/quote]



yeah, i remember when people thought you were good.

eh... whoops. still tired... fucked up tags.

^wow *speechless*.. why you guys making this so hard lol..this was close as iv seen so far..


daclassic:
By far this dude is butt, Soft, A fragile pussy, He gushy, Is he hard? I think he nuts
This shadow's edge aint even coming close to creating damage close to a papercut
^nice punch, but the flow was choppy..7/10
Can we stop the fakers, Ghostwriters are profit takers, From shadow, A bread breaker
He's Another daclassic hater, A shadow that follows my motions, A fuckin imitator
^nice 8/10
A vet-vet-veteran, Damn I'm stut-ter-in', A vet please! He a vet on animals of a disease
With ease, I be getting so hot, I'll walk right through this fucker to take a breeze
^most people wouldnt catch that line.. took a second to see it.. nice play on his name.. that was good 9/10
The way I'm tellin' it, humiliating this faggot for rappin in front of an audience
Your life is irrelevent, Never a leader, You behind others with a simulated intelligence
^nice vocab..i saw this as decent.. 7.5/10
Always you on my ass or which ever one of my sides, I see depression in your eyes
Wishing to duck and hide, In the land of Urbana, Where the rest of these herbs reside
^ok.. wasent that strong of a closer tho..6/10
^^if my mathisnt wrong, it was 37.5/50(75%)

shadows edge:
Long time in the making? Best savor these moments
No wait…
its just dc’s acne that had a breakout performance
^good flow..not sure i understood that tho..has he posted his pic with acne or something ? 7/10
It’s sad really, herbs on this site ever respected you
Kid would be fucking wack… but even that rejected you
^that was hot.. nice flow, nice punch lol 9/10
We both know, I’m straight better battle wise
Called yourself DC, but I’ll be the one to capitalize
^nice play on his name.. 7.5/10
My punches explosive, this stupid fucks ill fated
Cuz daclassic Blue up… n thought he’d elevated
^aight play on his squad Blue Print.. 7/10
no surprise you stressed, fucking with the best
I commit Cardinal sins, way I Pujoles in your chest
^nice word play lol.. 7/10
^^well fuck me.... 37.5/50(75%)..

my vote comes down to the enjoument of the verse.. im a flow man.. if the verse doesent flow as well as i might have expected it to, then i might flow against it.. flow is pretty much a must in verses.. Daclassic your flow was decent, but shadow had a pretty nice flow in his verse..

Much respect to you both of you.. and like heavy d "got nothin but love for ya babeh".. lol
no hate.
v/Shadows edge

Uppin...and for you'll info really read my punches so you'll can understand them......and Urban means Herbana if you'll didn't get it....it's where he's from in his profile....take the time and read my verse shit.....uppin...let the votes come in.

vote, drop links, you know the deal.

Long time in the making? Best savor these moments
No wait…
its just dc’s acne that had a breakout performance
It’s sad really, herbs on this site ever respected you
Kid would be fucking wack… but even that rejected you
We both know, I’m straight better battle wise
Called yourself DC, but I’ll be the one to capitalize
My punches explosive, this stupid fucks ill fated
Cuz daclassic Blue up… n thought he’d elevated
no surprise you stressed, fucking with the best
I commit Cardinal sins, way I Pujoles in your chest

first off the hole shit was simple as hell and should not be a verse. second punches was weak as hell and personals...damn they suck... stop trying... i see y you retired.


By far this dude is butt, Soft, A fragile pussy, He gushy, Is he hard? I think he nuts
This shadow's edge aint even coming close to creating damage close to a papercut
Can we stop the fakers, Ghostwriters are profit takers, From shadow, A bread breaker
He's Another daclassic hater, A shadow that follows my motions, A fuckin imitator
A vet-vet-veteran, Damn I'm stut-ter-in', A vet please! He a vet on animals of a disease
With ease, I be getting so hot, I'll walk right through this fucker to take a breeze
The way I'm tellin' it, humiliating this faggot for rappin in front of an audience
Your life is irrelevent, Never a leader, You behind others with a simulated intelligence
Always you on my ass or which ever one of my sides, I see depression in your eyes
Wishing to duck and hide, In the land of Urbana, Where the rest of these herbs reside

i don't no about anyone else but i liked it nice flow (though style was bad{i recommand puting .'s or /'s after ever rhyme}) personals and punches were alot better (even though you had to read a hole bunch of shit understand some of them). plus your was more complex.

i give this battle to you: daclassic



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Up For this battle yo.

uppin bring the votes thank you.....

daclassic~ i really enjoyed ya shit your vocab was aight your punches was good structure was pretty good word play was good multis were their flow was on lock i think u coulda come a lil harder but u came hard enough to beat shadow this time overall i think u had a overall good verse that about wraps it up for you...


shadow's edge~ u did good to i think u did tha same in everything except punches in my opinon daclassic got you their your structure was good same wit multis word play was aight flow was on lock but i expected u to come alot harder but maybe it was because u just woke up like u said but overall u was tha same as daclassic i just was feelin him more your vocab wasnt very good but big up's this was bad for you and betta than half these cats here....


punches daclassic
flow both
vocab both
multis both
humor shadow
word play both
enjoyed both
overall vote daclassic

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:( fraid im going to have those votes discounted daclassic. your rules, and what not. lifes ironic, eh?

?very confused you afraid? uppin

Up.

Seriously. Half the fucking site is either in BP or AI.

DC:

By far this dude is butt, Soft, A fragile pussy, He gushy, Is he hard? I think he nuts
This shadow's edge aint even coming close to creating damage close to a papercut
-structure was off, but punch was understood...opener:6/10
Can we stop the fakers, Ghostwriters are profit takers, From shadow, A bread breaker
He's Another daclassic hater, A shadow that follows my motions, A fuckin imitator
-nice punch, good personal...wordplay was good
A vet-vet-veteran, Damn I'm stut-ter-in', A vet please! He a vet on animals of a disease
With ease, I be getting so hot, I'll walk right through this fucker to take a breeze
-haha, my favorite line...great punch with great comedy
The way I'm tellin' it, humiliating this faggot for rappin in front of an audience
Your life is irrelevent, Never a leader, You behind others with a simulated intelligence
-haha, another comedy line, good punch, nice vocab
Always you on my ass or which ever one of my sides, I see depression in your eyes
Wishing to duck and hide, In the land of Urbana, Where the rest of these herbs reside
-nice structure, good meta, nice wordplay....closure: 8/10

Comments:you had stretched lines, but you had great punches, great style...i was a actually laughing during some of your lines, comedy is always good, you had great wordplay and you had original vocab, nice verse...opener was decent but closure was good.....//.....8.7/10


Shadow:

Long time in the making? Best savor these moments
No wait…
its just dc’s acne that had a breakout performance
-nice opener, but ance is just an asumption. great structure....opener:7/10
It’s sad really, herbs on this site ever respected you
Kid would be fucking wack… but even that rejected you
-good punch, lacked vocab or word play
We both know, I’m straight better battle wise
Called yourself DC, but I’ll be the one to capitalize
-good good, punch was also understood, still needs word play
My punches explosive, this stupid fucks ill fated
Cuz daclassic Blue up… n thought he’d elevated
-cussing brings this line down, newbs cuss not vets
no surprise you stressed, fucking with the best
I commit Cardinal sins, way I Pujoles in your chest
-nice meta, aight wordplay....closure:6/10

Comments:you had great stucture throught the whole verse, but you lacked word play which brought down your creativity points, you had many landed punches, i didnt see any filler really, opener was good, closure was decent.....//......8.3/10


vote: DaClassic

Look Me Up And Drop A Vote

is it only one vote wins, cuz im voting dc but the poll is showing the records, and theres no way to poll vote my self, so tell strobe

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=133785&page=1

hit that up or i will kill u :thumbup:

dc

By far this dude is butt, Soft, A fragile pussy, He gushy, Is he hard? I think he nuts
This shadow's edge aint even coming close to creating damage close to a papercut
HAD MULTIES FLOW WAS CHOPPY PUNCH WAS PRETTY AVERAGE... DECENT BARS

Can we stop the fakers, Ghostwriters are profit takers, From shadow, A bread breaker
He's Another daclassic hater, A shadow that follows my motions, A fuckin imitator
STOP WITH THE COMAS FIRST LINE WASNTWORDED RIGHT SOUNDED FORCED 2ND LINE PRETTY NICE WORDPLAY DECENT PUNCH

A vet-vet-veteran, Damn I'm stut-ter-in', A vet please! He a vet on animals of a disease
With ease, I be getting so hot, I'll walk right through this fucker to take a breeze
NICE BARS RIGHT HERE TIGHT WORDPLAY IN THE 2nd LINE TIGHT PUNCH HERE

The way I'm tellin' it, humiliating this faggot for rappin in front of an audience
Your life is irrelevent, Never a leader, You behind others with a simulated intelligence
NICE BARS AGAIN DONT THINK PEOPLE GONNA CATCH THE PUNCH '"BEHIND OTHERS" AN HIS NAME SHADOWS EDGE DONT KNOW IF U REALIZED THAT BUT SHIT WAS NICE AN PUNCH WAS GOOD

Always you on my ass or which ever one of my sides, I see depression in your eyes
Wishing to duck and hide, In the land of Urbana, Where the rest of these herbs reside
NICE FIRST LINE GOOD WORDPLAY OFF HIS NAME PUNCH WAS PRETTY NICE I CAUGHT IT NICE BARS AGAIN HERE

OVERALL- NICE VERSE HAD A BUNCH OF PERSONALS NICE WORDPLAY IN A BUNCH OF LINES HAD MULTIES YADA YADA YADA THINK YA VERSE GOT BETTER AS IT WENT ON MADE UP FOR THE SOFT PUNCHS IN THE BEGINNING TIGHT VERSE AN GOOD USUAGE OFF HIS NAME

SE
Long time in the making? Best savor these moments
No wait…
its just dc’s acne that had a breakout performance
KINDA FUNNY BUT DIDNT THINK THE PUNCH HIT TO HARD

It’s sad really, herbs on this site ever respected you
Kid would be fucking wack… but even that rejected you
NICE BARS HERE GOOD PUNCH AN DECENT PERSONAL

We both know, I’m straight better battle wise
Called yourself DC, but I’ll be the one to capitalize
FIRST LINE HALF GLORIFICATION DECENT SET UP NICE WORDPLAY IN 2ND LINE PUNCH WAS PRETTY AVERAGE NOT THAT HARD HITTIN TO ME

My punches explosive, this stupid fucks ill fated
Cuz daclassic Blue up… n thought he’d elevated
AGAIN HALF GLORIFICATION IN 1ST LINE DECENT WORDPLAY IN 2ND LINE DIDNT FEAL THE PUNCH AGAIN ON THESE LINES

no surprise you stressed, fucking with the best
I commit Cardinal sins, way I Pujoles in your chest
DAMN SHADOW AGAIN GLORIFICATION MOST I SEEN IN YOUR VERSES BUT THE 2ND LINE WAS ILL WOW REAL SICK SHIT NICE WORDPLAY PRETTY NICE PUNCH BUT KILLED IT WITH THE WORDPLAY ON THAT SHIT

OVERALL-HAD SOME PERSONALS AS WELL NICE WORDPLAY TO THAT PUJOLES LINE WAS DOPE HAD BETTER RHYME SCHEME AND FLOW I THOUGHT PUNCHS WHERE AROUND AVERAGE THINK U PUT TO MUCH GLORIFICATION IN THE VERSE NICE STRUCTURE THOUGH

VOTE DACLASSIC

THOUGHT HE HAD BETTER PUNCHS AN CONSTENT PERSONALS IF U CATCH EM GOOD BATTLE BY BOTH

uppin............................................. ..........

uppin yo can we get some damn votes please ...lol

Hmm... Nice battle... DaClassic... Way to go, i was feeling the verse, flow had something about it... Cant say it was bad, just, wierd... Nice lines, you had some personals, but would have been nice if there was more... Shadow, nice, good flow, also could have used more personals... Even as shit... I give it to Shadow because he had an awesome closer...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137958
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Hit that up...

I'm bout to say fuck this battle and everything else...people don't vote...this is like the 6th vote tooken away from me....then not only that shadows edge is up 2 to 1 when he got one vote overall. what the fuck.....if so ....why he got an extra vote?
uppin...line by line analysis which means give feed back on each bar....thanks I guess I shouldn't have put the rules like that...

Yo... I didnt even read the voting rules... My bad... But i did read the battle... My vote is how it should be...

an my vote didnt get returned damnit

I gotta come in here an break it down lol./.

I gotta give DaClassic my vote because i think his verse was pretty good..he used some good multies and punchlines and some ok wordplay...shadow ur sturc threw me off in the begging...thinking i was reading the text format and color lol..nah tho...but it was an hott verse both of ya dropped but.....daclassic urs was i think skin better.....shaodw u had some good sturc some ok wordplay and O.K...punchlines..daclassic punches i think hit a little more better because it think they were a bit more complexed....iight nough sayed..

Vote-DaClassic.

By far this dude is butt, Soft, A fragile pussy, He gushy, Is he hard? I think he nuts
This shadow's edge aint even coming close to creating damage close to a papercut
5/10...wow, s-t-r-e-t-c-h-e-d
Can we stop the fakers, Ghostwriters are profit takers, From shadow, A bread breaker
He's Another daclassic hater, A shadow that follows my motions, A fuckin imitator
7/10...decent
A vet-vet-veteran, Damn I'm stut-ter-in', A vet please! He a vet on animals of a disease
With ease, I be getting so hot, I'll walk right through this fucker to take a breeze
6/10...weak..
The way I'm tellin' it, humiliating this faggot for rappin in front of an audience
Your life is irrelevent, Never a leader, You behind others with a simulated intelligence
5/10..weak, didnt rhyme
Always you on my ass or which ever one of my sides, I see depression in your eyes
Wishing to duck and hide, In the land of Urbana, Where the rest of these herbs reside
5/10...no punch...
overall - 5.6...weak...1 good line


Long time in the making? Best savor these moments
No wait…
its just dc’s acne that had a breakout performance
7/10...nice punch
It’s sad really, herbs on this site ever respected you
Kid would be fucking wack… but even that rejected you
6/10...not feelin[/b
We both know, I’m straight better battle wise
Called yourself DC, but I’ll be the one to capitalize
[b]7.5/10...nice
My punches explosive, this stupid fucks ill fated
Cuz daclassic Blue up… n thought he’d elevated
7.5/10..nice, really liked this.
no surprise you stressed, fucking with the best
I commit Cardinal sins, way I Pujoles in your chest
8/10...i dont care, this was a fuckin ill punch
overall - 7.2...wow, punches killed this cat..
v/se

thanks to everyone......peace.

aiht i thought that this was a good battle....daclassic came a lil weak but it was good...but all in all shadow came alot harder..

shadow: you came with soem heat...and it was crazy how you didnt even use one stretched line they were all short in sweet...lol but you could have used alot more personals and a lot more punchlines but your meta4s were aight...you need to work on that though...good battle you prolly could have used alil more time to post this...seemed like oyu were in a hurry..you didnt even get to bold your lines...lol but yeah good battle...all in all 8/10

daclassic: alot of strectched lines ...how come when you battled me you came with so much heat it could of caught hell on fie...lol but yeah you could have also used alot more meta4s and alot more punchlines..the personals were kinda weak thouhgt,...i just expected more from you.....all in all 6/10

good battle

vote=shadow

Switched

yeah....because that's when I didn't care on how my verse was ......at that time I was thinking about leaving the site....but uh I think you should change your vote because you voted for me on accident....I'm just keeping it real...and being fare.

v/ SE

He had witty punches...hs closer was nice...better wordplay...more complexity...links are worn out and played out...daclassic ive seen u come better...=\...se took this