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Calamity Vs One-Man-Band (part 2)
20 Lines max House Rules 250 posts for voters Drop when you can.. But Dont take a life time Checkin in.. rematch |
checkin in.... ill be droppin later, n no feedin so it doesnt matter whos first
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my victims bruise-n-bleed, this dude steppin again is new-to-me..*
surprising, cos usually my battle raps end up as eulogies.. mcs aint what they used-to-be.. wack kids, my dispels-are-insane.. no votes for calamity, cos bitin chinos the only way he XL's-in-this-game.. Plating my knuckles-with-brass, Ill slam clam's face-into-glass.. burn the herb, leave a match by your corpse after I drench-it-in-gas.. attack-with-an-axe, beat ya till theres no bones-left-to-crack.. Twist up ya neck till you can count-tha amounta holes-in-ya-back.. propellin-the-pain.. ya cant last, ya half assed imagery is faulty-n-merciful.. punches missin-me while my verse crunches with riveting multis-n-personals.. snubbin-n-hurtin-you..id end it, bitch, but i wanna see ya suffer-in-pain.. cos frankly this kid couldnt hold down if i handed him cuffs-n-a-chain.. tough-in-the-brain, server minds wit clever rhymes, while loosin-my-mental.. im fuckin crazy, now y'all understand how easily i beat dudes-with-a-pencil.. rip bitches fit for clips from the six clipped to my hips, flip'd hits u threw-me.. this kids dick's licked by his click, crew voters, but im a misfit-for-newbies.. by even challengin me again, i can see you got no more than failin-grade.. fuck a icepick, ill impale-a-blade, calams no em, but hes still trailer-made.. droppin his mic-fast, on the run, afraid of the shame that his types-cast..** sorry nigga, but youre the first black man to be classified as white-trash.. *beat him before ** thats types as in what he types... not his type ONE |
where it says server minds.. thats supposed to be sever
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no-merits,scared hairless,tho he not a bald eagle.. couldnt change identitys for the better............ ............if he played the character of smeagle.. he wouldnt be high among "vets" ona ladder in vietnam.. whys this dude rappin, his "instruments" are pom-poms.. bomb-frauds,you gassed,i light matches to biters.. want a personal ?, you belong back in the cypher.. the only way you get a win,is the votes i give to you.. yada yada yada yada..........^and i mean that literal.. you couldnt soar above par,if dropped from a plane.. and you dont have g/fs,that's explained in ya name.. wouldnt be a starter for a team,if in a dream was expected.. even in fairy tales you get neglected, and rejected.. ya rhymes trail away in memory,like washed out jeans.. hes addicted to herbs, just like crack house fiends.. stop and watch,maybe you can shake them newb habits.. you should be a trackstar,usin all them damn dashes.. ima save the worst for last, his lines are toys to play wit.. and like you said: Quote:
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WHOA.. so much feeding... shit... lol... ah well..
uppin for votes good battle man |
i didnt feed.... you always use dashes in your verses.. that was a given lmao.. you use dashes and hyphens and shit, in every verse.. so i just anticipated it.. like i really had time to feed lol.. i dropped 5 mins later when is aw it bruh.. honestly, no feeding.. uppin tho
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i meant feeding like... from the shit i said.. but dont worry bout it, doesnt bother me.. cant believe no-ones voted on this
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let gooooo... lets get some votes.. leave a link and we will take a look in your battle.. get at us
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uppin on this battle.. dont sleep ya'll.. return some votes.. leave a link
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its pretty fucked no one has voted on this yet...
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break down
opener:C punches:C flow:C structure:C wordplay:none vocab:C personals:both closer:C overall:calamity i'll finish the vote when you poll on mine |
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Uppin.. trigga, you need to expand on that explination.. cause right now, that cant be counted.. 0-0.. uppin for some more votes.. lol at how many views this got and no votes.. leave a link
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yeah that vote confused the shit outta me.. howd we get "both" for personals when i had like 1 and his verse was full of em?
bad vote.. uppin |
uppin on this battle.. hootyy hoooo... holla atcha boi.. leave a link
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well i cant vote on this so it doesnt matter...
but who cares cuz under me both of u will shatter... |
Drop a vote and leave a link..
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wtf... whats up with that flow2crazy guy.. .. ..
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Seriously you guys..stop being lazy.. 110 view and not one true vote.. Disgrace..iv voted in damn near all of the open non-crew EFL battles that have been uped... lazy ass niggas..
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Uppin man.. leave a link to
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Come on ya'll.. stop sleeping on this battle.. return some of my votes in the efl or something damn..
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cats are fucked these days.................................. uppin
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Come on playas.. lets get some votes pleaaaseeee lol.. we will return your favors.. plzplzplz
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word to that ^^^ if people drop a vote on this battle we WILL return the favor without fail... cmon... you know you need votes....
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stop sleeping..wtf..thanks for returning the votes i'vee made in the efl............................................... ..................................................
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lol uppin this battle.. drop a vote fuckin lazy beeeeeotches hehe
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27 replies.. and fuclking 25 were the people who were battling.. stop being lazy fucks and vote.. seriouslly.. this is why we so inactive.. no voters in EFL..return some votes rofl ...
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152 views no votes lol :(
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aight.. omb i mihgt just get this shit closed... people being herbs lol..
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yeah no probs... you dont get the win though...lol... do you?
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i dun think so... i dun know.. dude.. this is gay tho lol..... i guess we can give a lil more time.. come vote guys.. we will return the favors.......
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Stop sleeping on this battle dorks.. post ya vote and leave a link..
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there was a mad dik ryder up in here shit! yo i think One-Man-Band 1 this hands down!
opener:One punches:One flow:One structure:One wordplay:One vocab:One personals:One overall:One i thought he destroyed and i aint dik rydin i dunt even know you kids so yo whats with the dig rydin ? |
lol.....ok uppin for some other votes with explinations and can actually poll :(..
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fucckkeer my vote couldnt poll!!!... i thought i could winnit... which i can... right...
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mcs aint what they used-to-be.. wack kids, my dispels-are-insane..
no votes for calamity, cos bitin chinos the only way he XL's-in-this-game.. nice wordplay 8.5/10 droppin his mic-fast, on the run, afraid of the shame that his types-cast..** sorry nigga, but youre the first black man to be classified as white-trash.. hmmmm 7/10 nice closer really nice verse one man..........some goodd punches.personals......but you focused more on killing him than punches......lines a lil strecthed (mine 2) but ur multiples help. Calamity: ima save the worst for last, his lines are toys to play wit.. and like you said: nice closer usin his own words gainst him umm 6.7/10 no-merits,scared hairless,tho he not a bald eagle.. couldnt change identitys for the better............ ............if he played the character of smeagle.. 8.5/10 nice diss..... he wouldnt be high among "vets" ona ladder in vietnam.. whys this dude rappin, his "instruments" are pom-poms.. nice worplay wit his name an stuff..........8/10 close battle pretty good but im goin with Calamity cuz his verse flowed easier and had more so harder punches..... One bands tlaked obut killin which was ok but not necessarily punches plz return the favor... |
my victims bruise-n-bleed, this dude steppin again is new-to-me..*
surprising, cos usually my battle raps end up as eulogies.. FLOWS NICE,BUT NO PUNCH IN THERE mcs aint what they used-to-be.. wack kids, my dispels-are-insane.. no votes for calamity, cos bitin chinos the only way he XL's-in-this-game.. DECENT PUNCH...U MAKE UR LINES TOO LONG THOUGH Plating my knuckles-with-brass, Ill slam clam's face-into-glass.. burn the herb, leave a match by your corpse after I drench-it-in-gas.. NOT A PUNCH,ITS A DECENT LINE,BUT NO PUNCH attack-with-an-axe, beat ya till theres no bones-left-to-crack.. Twist up ya neck till you can count-tha amounta holes-in-ya-back.. SAME AS ABOVE,SOUNDS GOOD IF U DROPPIN AN OPEN MIC OR SOMETHING,BUT IT AINT A PUNCH propellin-the-pain.. ya cant last, ya half assed imagery is faulty-n-merciful.. punches missin-me while my verse crunches with riveting multis-n-personals.. NOT A PUNCH TO SAY U HAVE MULTIES N PERSONALS snubbin-n-hurtin-you..id end it, bitch, but i wanna see ya suffer-in-pain.. cos frankly this kid couldnt hold down if i handed him cuffs-n-a-chain.. NOT A HARD PUNCH tough-in-the-brain, server minds wit clever rhymes, while loosin-my-mental.. im fuckin crazy, now y'all understand how easily i beat dudes-with-a-pencil.. HMMM....I'M NOTICING A PATTERN HERE rip bitches fit for clips from the six clipped to my hips, flip'd hits u threw-me.. this kids dick's licked by his click, crew voters, but im a misfit-for-newbies.. NOTHIN THERE by even challengin me again, i can see you got no more than failin-grade.. fuck a icepick, ill impale-a-blade, calams no em, but hes still trailer-made.. LOL PRETTY FUNNY droppin his mic-fast, on the run, afraid of the shame that his types-cast..** sorry nigga, but youre the first black man to be classified as white-trash.. U ALREADY HAD THE PREVIOUS PUNCH THAT SAID HE WAS TRAILOR MADE..ISNT THAT THE SAME THING??? no-merits,scared hairless,tho he not a bald eagle.. couldnt change identitys for the better............ ............if he played the character of smeagle.. I LIKED THE BALD EAGLE,BUT I DUNNO WHO IS SMEAGLE SORRY..SHOULD HAVE EXPLAINED he wouldnt be high among "vets" ona ladder in vietnam.. OK PUNCH whys this dude rappin, his "instruments" are pom-poms.. WEAK bomb-frauds,you gassed,i light matches to biters.. want a personal ?, you belong back in the cypher.. NOTHIN IN THERE the only way you get a win,is the votes i give to you.. yada yada yada yada..........^and i mean that literal.. LOL I PEEPED THAT,4-5 HE WON N U WERE ONE OF THE VOTERS..NICE PERSONAL you couldnt soar above par,if dropped from a plane.. WEAK and you dont have g/fs,that's explained in ya name.. LMFAO..GOOD PLAY ON HIS NAME MAN wouldnt be a starter for a team,if in a dream was expected.. even in fairy tales you get neglected, and rejected.. WEAK ya rhymes trail away in memory,like washed out jeans.. hes addicted to herbs, just like crack house fiends.. IT'S AIGHT..DONT REALLY LIKE HERB LINES stop and watch,maybe you can shake them newb habits.. you should be a trackstar,usin all them damn dashes.. ROFL...YEA I HATE DASHES MYSELF...THIS COULD BE WORDED BETTER,BUT GOOD CONTENT ima save the worst for last, his lines are toys to play wit.. and like you said: DIDNT REALLY LIKE THE CLOSING........ COMMENT.....THIS WAS VERY HARD TO JUDGE...CUZ ONE MAN HAD A LOT OF GOOD MULTIES,FLOW WAS BETTER,BUT U SPITTIN LIKE ITS FOR AN AUDIO...CUZ ALL THOSE MULTIES WOULD SOUND NICE...BUT SAYIN U GONNA LIGHT A MATCH TO HIM AINT HITTIN HARD MAN....IN AN OPEN MIC TYPE THING U'D WIN..BUT I GO BY THE RULE,PUNCHES WIN BATTLES...IN TEXT ESPECIALLY...N THIS IS A BATTLE....U HAD THAT CHINO XL PUNCH I LIKED,N THE TRAILOR TRASH LINE WAS FUNNY...BUT THEN U USED THE SAME CONTENT IN 2 OF UR BARS,ESPECIALLY UR CLOSER......THAT WAS A WRONG MOVE CALAMITY....SEEMED LIKE A MORE BASIC VERSE,MULTI N VOCAB WISE...BUT,I'M ONE TO ALWAYS SAY..THAT SHIT ALMOST DOESNT MATTER IN A BATTLE..ITS ALL ABOUT PUNCHES,N U HAD MORE PUNCHES IN THIS BATTLE....N PERSONALS AS WELL.....THE VOTING THING,PLAYIN OFF HIS NAME N THE DASHES ...THOSE HIT THE HARDEST...U DID HAVE SOME WEAK LINES...BUT I HAD TO JUDGE BY WHO HAD MORE PUNCHES...N PERSONALS...N THAT WAS CALAMITY......ONE MAN'S VERSE DID SEEM MORE ADVANCED DUE TO THE MULTIES....BUT MY COMMENT ABOVE STANDS...... VOTE CALAMITY....NO HATE |
dayum^ thats a breakdown!.. uppin for more votes..
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okay you said ud both return the fav what happened man?......
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