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Met-Ah-Four vs. Thugzy
10-15 lines
no d/c/h u spit first no feeding house rules |
aight,checkin in,imna keyin nah!
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i ant battled fo a while,ere goes
am stickin up this wannabe mc,cheatin ya like a game/ ma lyrics 100 degree burn ya,like u jus got dowsed in flames/ am like a legend,uks finest,grimeiest known rapper/ u an unwanted nobody,sumthin like a used condom wrapper/ ma bars hit ya so hard,leave ya with broken ribs/ ma multies twist ya so bad,break both of ya wrists/ a cut ya,then put ya,in black bags for ya mother/ send her one half of ya body,then tell her to come find the other/ am a lyrical genius,i aint playin a mean this/ am sicker than gettin clap by been fucked through ya anus/ ya couldnt play me,even if a was burnt to c-d/ or downloaded from kazza,straight onto ya pc/ metaphur still be playin whack games on his dreamcast at home/ while i be playin xbox on the tv in the back of ma ford/ why call yaself meataphur,if u aint got none fool/ and best wishes to ya boy,ill tempa,get well soon/ i know tht was 16 lines,soz,15 dint work |
the last line was hit at ill-tempa cos he say he wa gona battle me,but backed out!
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you broke the rules.
U.s = United States Battle Another "Thug"? I Thought I Already Did tHis routine ................................i got this win easy, 5-0 unless he has dickriders, or not hes pretty much just upseen if this kid is shooting something he must be shootin rubber pelts .............................................i click so much i be clickin wit chicks more then drunkdrivers with seatbelts ima show this kid that underground uk aint nothin 2 da U.S ........................................show me ya beats my punches goin higher up in poll then spanish population rates ...........havent battled in a while i can see your low self-esteem ............................................kid is retarted he actually thought food was included under my girls peaches n creame ima wrap this up like a gwat wrappin sandwiches up in the deli ................................................im a get some hits im get hits 5-0 more votes then sadness then From Justin To Kelly |
aight,nice spit,u wanna disqualify,up 2you,say now,i admit i broke rules,by 1 line,so say now if u lettin it stand or not.
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Thug = your lines were played and flow was kinda choppy at times, you had fillers and sometimes went off topic not really trying to diss meta,instead talking about yourself, the punches were not so great and personals needed a boost, no wordplay or much meta's here, and u kept the vocab simple..try to incorporate much of those ingriedients possible next time..
Meta4 = i hate when people use all those fuckin dots, you also went on the self-promo thing talkin about yourself, but you had a lil better vocab and punches, not much personals , wordplay and meta's was about the same, but you had better punches which took it.. it basically came down to thugzy concentratin on dissin you more wit played and useless lines wit you comin and talkin about yourself wit like 3 to 4 decent punches which took the battle Vote = meta |
^^^^safe,i dunno if u can vote,its 150+ votes only!thanks 4 advice
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thugzy its straight..uppin..............................
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safe metaphur,good lookin out,soz bout tht..............uppin this......
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Thugzy - your punches were kinda played and your vocab was low. elevate some on the vocab and make your punches hit harder. Try to cut out those filter lines
Meta - pretty good verse. your punches hit harder than his and your personnals were better. better vocab than Thugzy and I think u had the overall better verse. Good battle Vote - Meta Need honest votes |
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nice battle but i seen alot of talkin about they self in a battle lol but let me vote
opener-umm meta got it,thugzy ur's was madd basic structure-thugzy,metah dem lines i wasn't feelin u got ya own style tho punchlines-meta..thugzy aint have nun really multis-nun creativity-metah personals-thugzy finisher-nun wasn't feelin both of ya'll's enjoyed-metah cuzz he had sme creativity in his verse even tho he ws talkin bout his self a lil 2 much lol and thugzy u been on here 4 madd long now dogg step ya shit up my vote-metah its 3 LINKS IN MY SIG PLEEZ DROP A VOTE IN ATLEAST WUN...GON |
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Meta had the punches and the flow in this battle
Meta u got my vote |
mmm k Thug you had punches and good struc but ya punches were played and came out wack its like u didnt come hard at all but u still had an ok verse but u were focused on 2 much self glorification and you had some personals but they really didnt connect eitheir you need 2 elevate some kid Met ah 4 had some nice punches that connected but in my eye you got the win cuz of wordplay and complexity you had horrible structure it was kinda hard 2 even follow so u need 2 fix that shit but you had nice wordplay and an overall alright verse which got you the win in my book but change ya structure and chop that shit down some both of you had an allright drop but it came down 2 wordplay and punches and Met ah 4 had the better punches and wordplay gets my vote |
Not Even Really A Battle...
Thugzy I Wasnt Really Feeling Your Verse At All... None Of Your Punches Really Stood Out Or Seamed Unique Or Special... It Was JUST A Verse... Nothing More Nothing Less, Had Flow But Nothing Intrique Or Anything... Just Overall I Think Meta Had This... Vote: Meta... Return The Favor And Check This For Me... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137391 ~One~ |
ok this was an easy decision......F.T.C. had this he came harder with his punches had sum nice wordplay in there but thugzy fix ur structure it bugs me....same wit F.T.C. lol
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