EyeDentdy V.s. raw killa
 

no limit to how many bars, we spit at the same time. shits do 30 mins after check in atleast. no crew hate dr, biting votes, no feeding. U do any of this and U'll get dQ'ed wit out warning. Lets do this, Keep it HipHop. no beef afterwardz.

Heres my check..... Im gonna drop soon, just give an extra 2 mins cuz Im setting it up.

This nigga dont wanna spit, his girl did it all for em/
writes garbage then cries cuz nobody reads his Forums/
I'll ramsak his backpacking rap act in seconds/
then cut meat out Raw killas beef for me like a C-Section/
U dont kno about battles, But I'll school U in war/
Iv forgoten more about rap then u could ever ask for/
I aint a vet, so why ya'll niggaz got chin checking animals/
Id bite Ur rymes just to leave Ur style mangled/
Bitting me'll poison Ur record quick/
got U visiting Ur verse's hospital bed while breaths it last spit/
thiis nigga wish he could ride my dick, thats to say the least/
U might as well send me another message saying

I'll give U a heart attack that'll leave war moments as flash backs/
but fuck It, cuz Iv been looking for something to laugh at/

So spit......

U ever gonna drop? U told me to set it up and even sent me the congrats on my victory. It dont take that long to write a verse nigga. c'mon kid.

ayt son u want daddy dat bad 2 teach u da un writin rules of battle rap fine im back sry been up 4 a few days straight but ayt ill spit good luck when da votes come in ayt ima drop it now

yo who dis cat eyedentdy,dis nigga aint spillin raps he writin symphony's,
now sit down n listen,when ya daddy teachin a lesson,n c if u complete da testin//
u think those half ass lines'll work,betta off sellin ya mom on ebay 2 see her worth//
when it comes 2 battlin cats,i get'em comin out da closet like 1 of eminem's raps//
i attack da keyboards,when takin trash like u out like it was part of my chores//
drop da mic n admit it,u cross dress jus 2 get in women's prisons u fruity bitch//
battlin u is like eminem 2 vanilla ice,cuz every1 knows,when i kick flows they nice//
wit des words n my mic im takin ur soul,ya givin da studio frostbite cuz u comin off cold//i contravene,ur veins,into ya brain,givin u migrains,kill da mic make sure u feel its pain//i told cats b4 dis aint a battle its a privelege,cuz i stay on top of da flow like dishwasher liquid

ayt eyedentdy da shit done good luck again when da votes come peace out

come wit da votes now every1 dont hesitate look us out oh n i kno kid damn relax its jus music peace

after syphony's i meant 2 // so yea hit us up we need votes

Biting Kaniva from D12 in Devils Night track.
 

I could get U DQ'd for biting D12's rymes homie. but I dont think I'll need that. If I ever see this again in any of Ur battles, Ur gonna get Dq'd and possibly banned. lets get these votes in now.

lol ur funny man really ive got all eminem's,d-12's,royce da 5'9'' cds n none of da shit i wrote is biting n e of d-12 lines im nota biter jus a ill writer but w/e lets get these votes like u said

D12 Devil's Night CD. devils night track #16 3rd verse in the song I think. Kanivas verse

Cross dress to get thrown in the womens prison/
I guess I was just dressed to be hoodlem/
cuz stress and ridlin coused those cops feelings to be hurt after they saw wat I did to those children/

something like that....still think Im kidding? I kno my shit.

Eye:ya verse had good flow and some nice raw punches, also had some good personals there,ya opener was funny and you stayed tight all the way thru, overall good spit man, structure was on point to
Raw:you had some good punches and some decent lines, but ya structure needs a little cleaning up, then ya flow will be betta, but overall not bad from either..
VOTE: EYE

ayt why only 1 fuckin vote come on shit vote dis thing i dont care if i win or lose i want see peeps feedback goddamn ya'll lazy 2 type or sum shit cuz i kno u peeps have read it so drop a reply vote 4 it c'mon wake up up up up up^^^^^^^^^^^^^thank you

raw killa is the shit and will take out eyes eye with his rhymin. eyes will pop out.

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lol thanx 4 da support dawg now we jus need more votes ask shy 2 check dis out n n e else 2 but b honest peace out 1 luv...ha ha eyedentdy now it look like we 50/50 holla back pussy

eyedentdy i this that your flow wasfire i really liked your punchlines but raw killa you killed it your flow was exclusive the way you came back and didnt get discouraged. so you get my vote

ayt y i see 56 view n only like 15 replys u chicken betta give us ur votes shit i wanna kno who one god damn get ya panties out ya ass crack n reply n vote comin people holla back uppin please we need voted uppin please

raw killa you riped that shit you did your thing as always so you get my vote baby

shy shouldnt count she voted for raw killa in a battle where the other cat didnt even post yet and shy voted him and some otha kat did 2

Eye...like Shy said you spit some fire...you was really good...i like how you quoted Raw and made it rhyme with your rap...that was kinda funny....lol nice flow keep it up

Raw...i liked yours too.... there was no bitin....no where in that song Devil's Night does it say somethin about cross dressin to get throw in a womens prison....so you don't know your shit...i agree with Shy...i like how he came back at you not discouraged....Raw has my vote

v/ Raw Killa I vote in your battles so retun the favor and vote in mine

thanx ya'll i already voted in ur thing but ill look into sum different ones n help ya out thanx 4 da love all peace

Lets get niggaz that aint never been on Raws dick befor. I only see niggaz that U run around wit voting. I checked Ur background, Only niggas who agree wit me is niggaz that u aint interacted wit. that concerns the shit out of me. lets get some honest votes in here. most of his shit was wak. I dont like beef either but this shits going too far. Im checking out the biten line right now. give me a few.

yoyooyoyo... raw killa this a message from my nigga EyeDentdy

My bad, it wasnt from the devils night track, it was actually from the American Psycho track... last verse on the bottom. heres the link.
http://www.d12world.com/index.php?s...s/devilsnight/7

cheatin ass, oh sorry... no one likes a cheater

Eye: Verse was very strong all throughout. Punches, personals was all there. The ending took the cake though. Favorite line: got U visiting Ur verse's hospital bed while breaths it last spit


Raw Killa:Nothing was hard hittin in your verse, it didn't make me same DAMN, the structure most definitely needs some work I had to re-read a few things because the structure was messed up and the lines were stretched something terrible.


Vote: Eye

no sides helpin me wit votes pussies i dont kno many on here n like i said i aint bite shit bitch u wanna fuckin real battle 2 prove u suck compared 2 me than tell u back wash pussy got all ur dick ridaz helpin u dont hate cuz people say talent n please
mistress if u had 2 read my shit over u seriously need glasses shit was easy 2 read undastand n flat out a good comeback seein it was my first battle online u fuckin morons "yoyooyoyo... raw killa this a message from my nigga EyeDentdy"

"Eye: Verse was very strong all throughout. Punches, personals was all there. The ending took the cake though. Favorite line: got U visiting Ur verse's hospital bed while breaths it last spit


Raw Killa:Nothing was hard hittin in your verse, it didn't make me same DAMN, the structure most definitely needs some work I had to re-read a few things because the structure was messed up and the lines were stretched something terrible.


Vote: Eye"

"Lets get niggaz that aint never been on Raws dick befor. I only see niggaz that U run around wit voting. I checked Ur background, Only niggas who agree wit me is niggaz that u aint interacted wit. that concerns the shit out of me. lets get some honest votes in here. most of his shit was wak. I dont like beef either but this shits going too far. Im checking out the biten line right now. give me a few."

only dick ridaz r da ones u bringin bitch dont be mad u losin its not my fault urself esteem is 2 high u shouldnt have gased urself if u cant handle defeat

U getting mad for some one wit only 3 dick riders. after 3 dick riders U kinda loose Ur edge in this battle, If U aint bite then why those that line sound the same as the one in the D12 track. I aint got beef but nobody likes a cheater kid. I lost all respect I had for U wit that shit. after this battle, I dont wanna see ya'll niggaz in any of my battles. Ur getting black listed after this shit.

wtf u such a goddamn bitch i dont need ur respect or n e 1 elses chump i didnt bite shit may have been similar but i aint bite there big difference u sry lil cry baby hoe i aint got no dick ridaz u da one got niggaz n bitches on ya nuts n u on my nuts as it is take da win i did like a fuckin man n move on bitch n how da fuck it go from 3-2 to 2-2 me a fuckin cheater u such a lil punk lil faggot

i took a cleser look at the rules and saw "no beef".......its like both r forgetting this shit yo....

errr..."shy" if that was a way to vote i guess u need a complete brain wash...digs?...

lets come down to my vote :

eye: as usual u was tight..you had a decent structure...cool punches but not much of 'em...you didnt have multis at all(a minus) but ur metaz and so on were cool

raw killa:damn yo u whoa!!you ate eye's verse with ur punches everywherre asin u had continuos tight punches &tight personals...and towards the end of ya verse u had a cool multi...

my vote gose to : raw

eye flow was real good and had a little ryme to it,and raw u was also good its just that one line,but we know who won this battle,killa.

yo i enjoyed this shiytt, not enuff attacks , but still kinda enjoyable
I like how eye stuck with a rhythym in his head,
it came off as if he had a certain beat poundin
raw, you was koo, some of your bars kinda didnt make sense,
but i saw a couple uppercuts in there.

but overall man
eye got this one,
he just came a little harder !

good shit fellas
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remember to return the fav in my ongoin poll of me and marvousj
MONSOON VS marvoulousj

Heres my answer to ur diss to me in ur puss ass lil thread homie.

I laugh at Ur attemps, and Im unshook by Ur "feelings"/
I'll bring so much heat...Ur fucking skin'll start pealing/
U aint a battle rapper, Ur hardest written lines get pissed on/
Ur styles commercial like 5 minutes in between a cit~com/
and I'll str8 bomb on u like U was Yokohamas child/
My dicks like true love from the way it makes ur momma smile/
U dont want beef? every were U go, I see U misspelling my name/
but U couldnt flow curcles around me, even if U went down the drain/
My topics could pound Ur brain and ground Ur fraim...I dont know if U knew that/
But I would like for U to give Missy eliot her jumper suit back/
U aint a killa, real niggaz dont gotta explain they selves/
but I want U to write a long essay explaing while U look like an Elf/
and U should join the special Olympics from the way U run Ur disfiguered mouth/
the only way Id have to pop the trunk on U...is to toss Ur body out/
and U could never bite my style or copy my lines/
Ur too addicted to swollowing 9's and borrowing D12's rymes/
tell Ur possie of misspunctuated punk bitches that Im coming to see em'........while they sleeping/
going down all they fucking chimmanies wit reasons to stop they breathing/
This jewish run DmC wannabe cant fuck wit a lyricacist/
but in a few minutes...ALL his d/riding niggaz wont even excist/
I percist wit punchlines that hit hard like bare knuckle boxing wit grown men/
U cant go 10 rounds wit out the use of oxygen in ur collen/
People mistake U for my dick from the way I'll leave Ur head swollen/
U had spit U verse at me from a speeding vehicle cuz 80% of it was stolen/

Eye: Punches were hittin. Flow was nice with a good structure. They way u put his quote in there from another battle brought it home. Keep it up homie

Raw: You had punches but they jsut want landin. Lines were stretched and I couldnt get into the flow like I did with Eye. But I could tell where u was comin from I just couldnt catch da flow u had obviously. It seems as if u had no motive in that freestyle just random punch lines here and there.

But 2 say da least it was still a good battle. Big up's 2 da both of ya!
Keep at it fellas

Check me out....http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137344

first off eyedentdy i spell ur punk ass name rite every time n dats ur answer back 2 my shit?lmmao dat shit fuckin sucked compare 2 my call out rhyme get a life grow up or sumtin like xxxtasy said it stats clearly in da rules no beef yet u instagated it like u wanted sum dont b mad u've met ur match n dis whitie actually got talent n for u morons who dont undastand my drawn out lines picture speed rapped like twista cuz i do is run "tracks" past u fuckin idiots(eyedentdy) but every1 who left an honest opinion good looks n thank u holla back n stay up

ayt we need votes 1 more for either who will come out dis battle da winne who kno's c'mon people we need ur honest votes no more crew shit sum who know's neither of us n will give an honest opinion n vote peace uppin ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

i think raw killa got this he got this battle he go batter punchlinesand over all its bettar

we need one more vote on this to get it done wit. wether I win or loose, this was good for me. I was just begginning to get bored wit this site. thanx raw

ayo tha boi who said raw was bitin d12 was rite.. got tha bar rite here:

"As a youngin I was beat for just livin
Cross dressed just to get thrown in the womens prison
I guess i was just dressed to be a hoodlem
being pressed cause the stress that cause the ridelin"

damn i aint battlin u if u bite son..

~1~

eye won this battle..he had better wordplay. he had good punches and also had better personals thrown in there..raw kill-nice try homie but really think u came up short on this one you lackd the smack in yo punch you feel me you had a good structure though.Also try an manipulate sum of those words better
v/eye

I NEED HONEST VOTES LIKE I DID FOR YALL
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