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Scriptive vs. ice pick
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Yo Scriptive son im bringin the pain
You're as real as kentucky fried Chickens trap you in a maze with your eyes missing I make the skies glisten/so what if I trash fags? wrap you in an American flag in Bagdad How come Scriptive spills raps but one wonders where his skills at? Your underage and your getting killed black you could take a day to write and you're still wack it's normal to feel scared break your legs and put you in a broken wheelchair me losing is like you finding a date with real hair... NEVER HAPPENS you come softer than when all of Heaven's rappin murdering you nicely is unlikely you've killed as my rappers as untouched old rifles You grasping rap will happen when a Muslim holds Bibles I'm more crooked than the crack in J-Lo's ass there's more chance of me losing if you dont say no raps fuck it I might go soft so you won't piss and have to take your diapers off you wacker than indian porn channels and get "stood on" more than a "whore's" sandles I'm Hiphop's Iverson except I break more ankles |
I ~choke this cretin~, me sayin you're a ~joke is needless~/ Get your "penis fondled by Einstein" if you want a ~stroke of genius~// You'll lose your ~life n family~, this ain't no ~type of fantasy~/ Show off in "expensive wear," and my baseball bat'll ~strike your "fancy"~// You're not ~shootin for wealth~, just gettin ~bruises and welts~/ Of course you stay "strapped"... your father keeps ~usin his belt~// ~Beware bitch~, I ~bear switch~ blades, so say your ~prayers quick~/ If greatest fears give an erection... then I got you ~scared stiff~// I'm ~erasin the filth~, ~blazin wit skill~, ~makin you shrill~/ The sudden growth of daisies "stems" from the ~day you were killed~//
a new style yet again this kids on fire today.............. |
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ice-pick pickin on rookies lol anyways i gotta give this to ice pick his rymes hit harder and made alot more since and scriptive ur trying to hard on ur structure anyways...
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what the fuck i ripped him to shreds do u see any use of vocabulary in his verse... no i took this...... u know it
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yo foreal scriptive took this one he really uped the anty on this one man,
cause in our battle his shit was half asses but in this battle he stormed tite mulits and erething no hate to ice pick return the favor delin. vs. novakane delin. vs. optimal Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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yo dat battle was hot
its only 1 way diss vote can go its 2 scriptive his wordplay was hot n his punches so i had 2 go wit him vote 4 deez battles amayze vs novakane http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749 2hard2lose http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487 murda-gram http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136506 forgotten flow http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031 peace Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
UPPN FOR SOME VOTES
READ THE VERSES 2 HIS MAY BE FLASHY BUT HIS Rymes Are IRRELEVANT IN THIS BATTLE |
How can scriptive go from being wack,
To having a verse like this.l... I seen some of his battles since this and their wack as fuck I dunno man but im watching who i battle from now on..... |
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Yo dis was a good battle, propz to both yall but Imma have to give dis one to scriptive, Ice pick was hot too. Just that scriptive cam out harder and his punches were hittin. So my vote goes to Scriptive.
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STILL WACK
Flaunt ya wealth and shit, had nothin to do with the battle at hand In a verbal face to face battle his shit would get boo'd off the fucking stage |
yo somebody tell 2h2l to stop ridin dick.......hes always choosing ice pick....no offense ice pick......ur flow was ok......but scriptive ripped u......scriptive gotta give ya credit.....sikk flow, punches,werds, everything....witout a doubt this ones goes to scriptive..
please return the favor honestly. non stop vs 2h2l non stop vs v non stop vs macattack |
it's nice to see some people voting fairly i riped him apart ice pick your verse was hot but you lacked wordplay.......... no hate
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In a verbal face to face battle his shit would get boo'd off the fucking stage
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well is this a face to face verbal battle... no i dont think so.... so just face it, you just got lyrically raped...
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Break Down I
Ice Pick- Structure Was A Lil Uneven, Metaz Were There, Flowed Ok, Punches Were There But Some Were Played.... Overal Ok Verse Scriptive- Struct Would Have Been Better Lined Up, But Still Flowed Nicely.... Multis Were Good, Punches Hit Ok... Overal Good Verse.... Break Down II Punches- Scriptive Personals- Tie Flow- Scriptive Wordplay- Tie Multis- Scriptive Metaphors- Ice Pick Structure- Scriptive Originality- Ice Pick Vocab- Niether Final Vote- Name Here Return Favor And Honest Vote On This: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137726 |
Lol Reason It Says Name Here CUz I Kept Getting In TRouble For Not Explaing Votes SO I Made A Lay Out, And I Fill It In... Forgot To Say WHo Won... lol
-Vote- Scriptive... my bad yo.. |
aight 4-1 to me... uppin this battle...........................
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mULTIES: Scriptive
Wordplay: Scriptive Punches: Scriptive Flow: tie Stucture: Tie Scriptive, I have to give this to you because you started off stronger with more multies and a tight punch.. then you kept it up, ice pick's punches were mediocre to me.. stucture was okay on both sides, no real good personals. So basically scriptive you win this mostly because of your multies and those few punchlines that connected.. V/Scriptive |
MY BAD, I MEANT TO ASK CAN YOU RETURN THE FAVOR WITH A DROP IN MY THREAD TOO PLEASE, THANX.. HERE'S THE LINK..
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138484 |
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to be for real i think scrip won this battle 2....i think his wordplay and punchlines were mad more better....and...i think his struc was ok.....just overall an better verse..
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yo vote to scriptive, yours wasn't as original jus cuz ice picks a freak and does wierd shit like that, but u killed 'em wit wordplay punches that i wish i would of came up before u lol. but ya das what wins battles, both of u need to work on actually doin personals though, neither of ya really had many.
vote scriptive. RETURN THE FAVOR WIT A VOTE ON ME AND DUSTY'S BATTLE!!!!!!! |
~choke this cretin~, me sayin you're a ~joke is needless~/ Get your "penis fondled by Einstein" if you want a ~stroke of genius~
Show off in "expensive wear," and my baseball bat'll ~strike your "fancy"~// If greatest fears give an erection... then I got you ~scared stiff~ PUNCHES THAT WON THE BATTLE^^^^ Punches- Scriptive Personals- Tie Flow- Scriptive Wordplay- Tie Multis- Scriptive Metaphors- Ice Pick Structure- Scriptive Originality- Ice Pick Vocab- Niether YO GET YA'LLS STRUCTURE IN LINE. WE WRITE IN BARS KIDS. VOTE-SCRIPTIVE. return the favor!!!!!! |
this was a hot battle...scriptive came hard with his flows, nice multia and nice punches...but i think pick took it with better wordplay, nice structure and harder punches...keep elevating people...no hate scriptive, i just think pick took this one...elevate
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Scriptive Won This Battle Off Top.. His punches were steady, his wordplay was better, more vocab and i also liked his structure better.. Ice Pick, you need to elevate a lot, your punchline were really played in that verse, your flow was off and you had a lot of filler, scriptive however came with fire in every round.. honestly he took it hands down.. i hope you don't get this battle closed because people voted against you either, this is honesty.. You need to elevate a whole lot before you can be a real contender and win fairly without complaining.. no hate..
Vote = Scriptive. return favor in this battle rihttp://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=144250ght here.. |
I already knew that he'd block me, but you got burned once again cuz, you are so predictable, LMAO, that verse wasn't good at all... do you tho,
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how many votes have i had for me bout 7... so i shouldav won this by now whats goin on????
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My Vote Goes To Ice Pick, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, But Ice Came A Little Harder With His Punches Tho... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo~
ice pick:your verse had great flow from beginning to end, you threw witty and creative punches at him,while i was reading this, i heard the delivery in my head, this would be a dope audio verse, your vocabulary was ill, and your opening chicken line was funny as hell, i just think your verse read better, and you took this because of flow, and all the hard disses... scriptive~your verse was good as well, but it seemed like i've heard some of your punches before, the belts line for instance, but you did have impeccable flow, but i had to give it to ice pick for originality in his verse......this was tough but great job both....pc vote:ice pick |
na dis battle was mad close i cant tell hoo won it
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