ok rules are... no feeding... no biting... no hate votes... no crew votes... no d/r votes...

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Yo Scriptive son im bringin the pain

You're as real as kentucky fried Chickens
trap you in a maze with your eyes missing
I make the skies glisten/so what if I trash fags?
wrap you in an American flag in Bagdad
How come Scriptive spills raps but one wonders where his skills at?
Your underage and your getting killed black
you could take a day to write and you're still wack
it's normal to feel scared
break your legs and put you in a broken wheelchair
me losing is like you finding a date with real hair...
NEVER HAPPENS
you come softer than when all of Heaven's rappin
murdering you nicely is unlikely
you've killed as my rappers as untouched old rifles
You grasping rap will happen when a Muslim holds Bibles
I'm more crooked than the crack in J-Lo's ass
there's more chance of me losing if you dont say no raps
fuck it I might go soft
so you won't piss and have to take your diapers off
you wacker than indian porn channels
and get "stood on" more than a "whore's" sandles
I'm Hiphop's Iverson except I break more ankles

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I ~choke this cretin~, me sayin you're a ~joke is needless~/ Get your "penis fondled by Einstein" if you want a ~stroke of genius~// You'll lose your ~life n family~, this ain't no ~type of fantasy~/ Show off in "expensive wear," and my baseball bat'll ~strike your "fancy"~// You're not ~shootin for wealth~, just gettin ~bruises and welts~/ Of course you stay "strapped"... your father keeps ~usin his belt~// ~Beware bitch~, I ~bear switch~ blades, so say your ~prayers quick~/ If greatest fears give an erection... then I got you ~scared stiff~// I'm ~erasin the filth~, ~blazin wit skill~, ~makin you shrill~/ The sudden growth of daisies "stems" from the ~day you were killed~//

a new style yet again this kids on fire today..............

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ice-pick pickin on rookies lol anyways i gotta give this to ice pick his rymes hit harder and made alot more since and scriptive ur trying to hard on ur structure anyways...

v/ ice

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what the fuck i ripped him to shreds do u see any use of vocabulary in his verse... no i took this...... u know it

yo foreal scriptive took this one he really uped the anty on this one man,
cause in our battle his shit was half asses but in this battle he stormed
tite mulits and erething

no hate to ice pick

return the favor

delin. vs. novakane
delin. vs. optimal

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yo dat battle was hot
its only 1 way diss vote can
go its 2 scriptive his wordplay
was hot n his punches so i
had 2 go wit him
vote 4 deez battles
amayze vs novakane
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749

2hard2lose
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487

murda-gram
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136506

forgotten flow
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031

peace

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UPPN FOR SOME VOTES

READ THE VERSES 2

HIS MAY BE FLASHY BUT HIS Rymes Are IRRELEVANT IN THIS BATTLE

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How can scriptive go from being wack,

To having a verse like this.l...

I seen some of his battles since this and their wack as fuck

I dunno man but im watching who i battle from now on.....

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