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Scriptive vs. ice pick
ok rules are... no feeding... no biting... no hate votes... no crew votes... no d/r votes...
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Yo Scriptive son im bringin the pain
You're as real as kentucky fried Chickens trap you in a maze with your eyes missing I make the skies glisten/so what if I trash fags? wrap you in an American flag in Bagdad How come Scriptive spills raps but one wonders where his skills at? Your underage and your getting killed black you could take a day to write and you're still wack it's normal to feel scared break your legs and put you in a broken wheelchair me losing is like you finding a date with real hair... NEVER HAPPENS you come softer than when all of Heaven's rappin murdering you nicely is unlikely you've killed as my rappers as untouched old rifles You grasping rap will happen when a Muslim holds Bibles I'm more crooked than the crack in J-Lo's ass there's more chance of me losing if you dont say no raps fuck it I might go soft so you won't piss and have to take your diapers off you wacker than indian porn channels and get "stood on" more than a "whore's" sandles I'm Hiphop's Iverson except I break more ankles |
I ~choke this cretin~, me sayin you're a ~joke is needless~/ Get your "penis fondled by Einstein" if you want a ~stroke of genius~// You'll lose your ~life n family~, this ain't no ~type of fantasy~/ Show off in "expensive wear," and my baseball bat'll ~strike your "fancy"~// You're not ~shootin for wealth~, just gettin ~bruises and welts~/ Of course you stay "strapped"... your father keeps ~usin his belt~// ~Beware bitch~, I ~bear switch~ blades, so say your ~prayers quick~/ If greatest fears give an erection... then I got you ~scared stiff~// I'm ~erasin the filth~, ~blazin wit skill~, ~makin you shrill~/ The sudden growth of daisies "stems" from the ~day you were killed~//
a new style yet again this kids on fire today.............. |
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ice-pick pickin on rookies lol anyways i gotta give this to ice pick his rymes hit harder and made alot more since and scriptive ur trying to hard on ur structure anyways...
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what the fuck i ripped him to shreds do u see any use of vocabulary in his verse... no i took this...... u know it
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yo foreal scriptive took this one he really uped the anty on this one man,
cause in our battle his shit was half asses but in this battle he stormed tite mulits and erething no hate to ice pick return the favor delin. vs. novakane delin. vs. optimal Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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yo dat battle was hot
its only 1 way diss vote can go its 2 scriptive his wordplay was hot n his punches so i had 2 go wit him vote 4 deez battles amayze vs novakane http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749 2hard2lose http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487 murda-gram http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136506 forgotten flow http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031 peace Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
UPPN FOR SOME VOTES
READ THE VERSES 2 HIS MAY BE FLASHY BUT HIS Rymes Are IRRELEVANT IN THIS BATTLE |
How can scriptive go from being wack,
To having a verse like this.l... I seen some of his battles since this and their wack as fuck I dunno man but im watching who i battle from now on..... |
Uppn Fo Some Votes
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