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spiky vs 2hard2lose
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no d/r no crew no biting and etc.... u spit first check in 8:30 verse due friday befo 5pm |
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check-in no limit lyrics?????????? aight then but this well be my 1rst
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lets go aight no beef
o yea 10 lines max aight lets go |
u wanna drop right now if so im down lol lemme no soon aight peace
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as long its b4 friday aight u can go at any time
so hurry up so i cn go |
aight rush ready to be crushed?
Rush lol im take u down and ima flush u down to the~sewer// ima take u down quickly cause when i joined~rb~there was~fewer~good mc's// but i give u respect for~tryin~, this like a street race and im in the jet~flyin// im dusting~u, u have no hope im owning ur flows so what u gonna~do?// come~back~? lol, i gotta better chance hittin j-lo and thats a~fact// why u choose me cause ur gonna get bitch slapped by my ~vers.// what u doin rappin vs me while holding a~purse?// my rymes are makin u~ill~want me to get the~nurse?// cause this time ur brains gonna~spill~, thats what u get for throwin a~fit// cause u got~hit~by a~flyweight~, stop suckin up to me this aint no~date// alright hurry n go cause my rymes are so sweet im gonna~faint// |
man look yo name is 2hard2lose but tha thing that hard u lose
was tying yo shoe/ my bad if i offended u cause yo dad didn't bother skool u on who u fin to lose to/ i was gone for a while but now i'm back but this this time i aint on tha attack/ my rhymes r mo clever cat cant u see i'm right bhind u fin to murk yo ass with a bat/ i see u tried and like that but when i see rhymes a baby couldnt did that/ i chose to rap against u fo practice god dammit/ to be honest i feel like a Kon Artest cause this is hardest battle i had to tackle/ see u a youngbuck so go back dawg and duck aight/ cause nigga u suck so why tha fuck u challenge me u should change to sweet pea cause is so easy to see it offends me/ so i'm done son this battle wasnt shit but a little spit/ started voting people aight need 50 post to vote or over 50 uppin fo vote now |
Weak Battle...
Punches- Weak on both sides.... 2h2l Flow- 2h2l Metas- Tie Multis- Tie Structure- 2h2l Originality- Niether Final Vote--- 2h2l comments--- weak battle.... elavate... rush... opener.. wat was that.. tie my shoe?... lol.... not much i can say Peep Battle N Vote Fair no hate http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136850 Unexplained vote... removed |
uppin fo some votes
need to win uppin fo some votes |
weak battle, fake ass emcees...dont use the fuckin /'s you look like faggots...learn how to throw harder punches and definitely elevate, this battle is to weak for me to vote on
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Weak, weak, weak.
Punches: weak, but 2h2l personals: weak, again 2h2l metas: neither multis: neither structure/flow: rush overall: 2h2l That battle was weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaak. Seriously, elevate. Read other battles and see what really good battlers do, and then use your own concepts. Just write, and write, and write until you get better. |
Rush u had structure and a flow mega point fo u
u need change punches where they realy work and multis where as u needs to but still u did all right 7.5/10 2Hard2Lose i seen no punches but u had a better structure then him yo flow was weak u points fo that like Reaper said write and write until u get better 6/10 |
diss was a weak battle
but i'll give it 2, 2h2l his structure was better n so was hi flow v/2H2L vote 4 my battles http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138259 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138229 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138200 thanx Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
2hard2loose
Rush lol im take u down and ima flush u down to the~sewer// ima take u down quickly cause when i joined~rb~there was~fewer~good mc's// No, flow's terrible but i give u respect for~tryin~, this like a street race and im in the jet~flyin// im dusting~u, u have no hope im owning ur flows so what u gonna~do?// Blah, filler, still no flow come~back~? lol, i gotta better chance hittin j-lo and thats a~fact// why u choose me cause ur gonna get bitch slapped by my ~vers.// WACK! what u doin rappin vs me while holding a~purse?// my rymes are makin u~ill~want me to get the~nurse?// Neh, you suck cause this time ur brains gonna~spill~, thats what u get for throwin a~fit// cause u got~hit~by a~flyweight~, stop suckin up to me this aint no~date// alright hurry n go cause my rymes are so sweet im gonna~faint// Haha... bushwack yourself in the head That verse ^^ yes that one, was utter shit.I know your new, but keep working on all aspects of battling. Rush man look yo name is 2hard2lose but tha thing that hard u lose was tying yo shoe/ my bad if i offended u cause yo dad didn't bother skool u on who u fin to lose to/ pfft, name flip could of been better i was gone for a while but now i'm back but this this time i aint on tha attack/ my rhymes r mo clever cat cant u see i'm right bhind u fin to murk yo ass with a bat/ Blah i see u tried and like that but when i see rhymes a baby couldnt did that/ i chose to rap against u fo practice god dammit/ vocabs horrible, 'baby couldnt did that' did you mean 'could of'? to be honest i feel like a Kon Artest cause this is hardest battle i had to tackle/ see u a youngbuck so go back dawg and duck aight/ cause nigga u suck so why tha fuck u challenge me u should change to sweet pea cause is so easy to see it offends me/ so i'm done son this battle wasnt shit but a little spit/ Flows retarded, battle/tackle line could of been flipped better.All the lines after it though, sucked dildos Structures unco, some meta's... but weren't used effectively, the battle/tackle line being a prime example.Up your vocab & your wording V/Rush;argh you both sucked, but Rush gets my vote. Follow my links & do your thing |
Rush lol im take u down and ima flush u down to the~sewer// ima take u down quickly cause when i joined~rb~there was~fewer~good mc's// 5/10 but i give u respect for~tryin~, this like a street race and im in the jet~flyin// im dusting~u, u have no hope im owning ur flows so what u gonna~do?// 6/10 come~back~? lol, i gotta better chance hittin j-lo and thats a~fact// why u choose me cause ur gonna get bitch slapped by my ~vers.// 6/10 what u doin rappin vs me while holding a~purse?// my rymes are makin u~ill~want me to get the~nurse?// 6/10 cause this time ur brains gonna~spill~, thats what u get for throwin a~fit// cause u got~hit~by a~flyweight~, stop suckin up to me this aint no~date// alright hurry n go cause my rymes are so sweet im gonna~faint// 6/10 man look yo name is 2hard2lose but tha thing that hard u lose was tying yo shoe/ my bad if i offended u cause yo dad didn't bother skool u on who u fin to lose to/ i was gone for a while but now i'm back but this this time i aint on tha attack/ my rhymes r mo clever cat cant u see i'm right bhind u fin to murk yo ass with a bat/ i see u tried and like that but when i see rhymes a baby couldnt did that/ i chose to rap against u fo practice god dammit/ to be honest i feel like a Kon Artest cause this is hardest battle i had to tackle/ see u a youngbuck so go back dawg and duck aight/ cause nigga u suck so why tha fuck u challenge me u should change to sweet pea cause is so easy to see it offends me/ so i'm done son this battle wasnt shit but a little spit/ ^^^^^^5/10 i dont kno wha the hell that was both of ya structure needs work but it came down 2 harden punches and better wordplay ~~~~~~2h2l~~~~~~~~~ |
Both didnt really come dat hard but 2h2l getz it.
Punches- Weak...2h2l Metas- Rush Multis- 2h2l Structure- 2h2l Originality- tie Final Vote- 2h2l Vote honestly on dis pleaze... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138450 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
kronuz cuz his actually rhymed and had good punhes and i say this to 2h2h you suck
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sry ya'll i put kronuz i ment rush i'm really dumb
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some of ya'll cheating
or Dick Ridin ya'll fuckn suck if u got to cheat or Dick Ridin |
this battle was pretty weak but ima have to give it rush even tho they both need to elevate alot but just keep writin
rush's punches were better n personals were better holla at me http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136344 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136408 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137874 __________________ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin fo votes
fo real man vote now....................... |
iight dis is hella obvious....rush won fa' sho...
hard: yo...first of all..before your battle, learn how to rhyme... well u did, but it didn't look like u did for example: Rush lol im take u down and ima flush u down to the~sewer// ima take u down quickly cause when i joined~rb~there was~fewer~good mc's// dat shyt waz f ucken gay as hell, also u should have better strucures... your dis's sucked as hell???wth?? plz elevate before i see u battle again... well i never was dis bad...but i know others that was that got hella good Rush: yo...you should be better then dis.. ight..your shyt was okay...but not good... u hella got to learn to elevate also... your lines were also fucken long as hell...it all strechtes n shyt..u shouldn't really do dat cuz it ain't all dat good if u do... vote: rush |
ok this battle sucked noi good disses or punches no good wordplay or vocab so ill vote on what i can hard your flow was too streched while rush had a good easy to follow flow and so rush gets my vote
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i got 4 vote
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ima give this battle to rush even tho yall both need to elevate
there werent any outstanding things from either MC but rush was the better verse out of the both of them he had slightly better structure n personals punches were nonexistent tho holla at me http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136344 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=140333 |
I vote fo Rush come he had betta punches
Both of you had horrible fuck structers but rush you've gottan betta wordplay tie punches R Metas What metas? structer Fuck that v/Rush |
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