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J_Trooper vs DV8 *Most Wanted Newbie*
aight u kno tha statz
10/15 no bitein no re postin no crew votes no bull shit verses due 30 minz after check in im waitin 4 u 2 check in then i will |
aight im checkin in ,damn dawg that took a while,,,j/p within 1/2 hr imma drop aight...
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chek mate
this my check in
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Rb kno i got Punches... that will mos def have ya Ass Gaspin
Supply Karate kicks 2 ya like the kid off of The Last Dragon DV'8... hung on my Meat. so this dame Cough'n and Gaggin O So Disgustin how i experience more head than an Asprin If you cant Defeat me fuck it The most Yung and Gifted Fuck it u Mede'oKer but my Approach put me on base like Kirby Puckett Verbal Terminal Lashins have me like Carmelo all ova ya Nugget My Intensions ..2 Be Kicked back... in a Purple Merche'Ahlogo DV8'Z Dame fixin me Waffles put 23 on her back like Mj in Chicago Hey 8 keep runnin off wit ya Soup Coolers basically keep runnin ya Lips and Watch me send u bulletz as long as Rulers turn ya into P-Cake Mix Guarranteed that this Faggot Fem can catch em Like his whole squad Men? No Hesitatin Here ni99a i Slip and Slide Hustle mo rocks than Tyrone Bigums |
Ima give u 10 more minz b cuz u bullshittin dont take that damn long 2 write some Bars
aint gone matter anyway dont make me dq u bun hurry that shit up 10 MINZ!!! |
accepted this battle~kid thinks im a punk~but not so,
youre at best top soil~imma dunk~ this kid in slow mo, see j im the inside like beer is in the bottle~n im really drunk, you the outside~like a label gettin peeled~tossed in the trunk, ya crews~murder mitten~guess you advertise ya hands are cold, this dudes a ~cowardly kitten~watch how this pussies legs fold, this kid likes ta put Z's on,its his style"like he's something special", watch me sneeze"more mentals"than his prtoduced by his pencil, in his p/m he said he was down,damn i don't wanna know that, admittedly on his knees,keep da fetish ta yourself n da "cock"fat, honestly kid,obviously just using my name makes your verse better, im drunk n still beat you,if half my verse was missing half the letters, 3 K.O's but~this ones mine~you've just stepped into a battle field, ya ~mines blown~could'nt win this battle if you were sittin on a shield, |
sorry man im a slow ass typer when im drinkin,yo imma dude why you thinkin imma chick yo,,2 bad i dint know that i would've played off that,anyhow you know i dint feed off your verse any,yo can we get some votes up in this herrrrreeeeee...
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yea man its coo cuzz
i b tipsy 2 lol fuck ya can we get some votes |
this was very close, but i gotta give it to dv8, he came jus a lil stronger, with a better structure and flow! id say both had equal punches but dv8 just took it.....
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Punches: Troop
Flow: Troop... Dv8 didnt rhyme in some barz Metaz: Dv8 Originality: Niether Multis: Dv8 Tho - - - dont make all barz multiz Final::: Troop Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136693 <- vote fairly niggaz.. peace
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Rb kno i got Punches... that will mos def have ya Ass Gaspin
Supply Karate kicks 2 ya like the kid off of The Last Dragon 7/10. good opener. DV'8... hung on my Meat. so this dame Cough'n and Gaggin O So Disgustin how i experience more head than an Asprin 8/10. good flow. If you cant Defeat me fuck it The most Yung and Gifted Fuck it u Mede'oKer but my Approach put me on base like Kirby Puckett Verbal Terminal Lashins have me like Carmelo all ova ya Nugget 6/10. I liked the carmelo line, but the flow is chopy here My Intensions ..2 Be Kicked back... in a Purple Merche'Ahlogo DV8'Z Dame fixin me Waffles put 23 on her back like Mj in Chicago 6/10. it's a'ight. I like the MJ line, decent punch. Hey 8 keep runnin off wit ya Soup Coolers basically keep runnin ya Lips and Watch me send u bulletz as long as Rulers turn ya into P-Cake Mix 8/10. I hate having to fill in words on this but I like it. a bit stretched. good punch on the lips. Guarranteed that this Faggot Fem can catch em Like his whole squad Men? No Hesitatin Here ni99a i Slip and Slide Hustle mo rocks than Tyrone Bigums 5/10. stretched no punch. 40/60 overall. you could shorten it up to reduce the chopiness but otherwise a good battle verse. few ok personals. accepted this battle~kid thinks im a punk~but not so, youre at best top soil~imma dunk~ this kid in slow mo, 9/10. nice flow, good opener. see j im the inside like beer is in the bottle~n im really drunk, you the outside~like a label gettin peeled~tossed in the trunk, 9/10. good line, nice punch, nice wordplay ya crews~murder mitten~guess you advertise ya hands are cold, this dudes a ~cowardly kitten~watch how this pussies legs fold, 9/10. nice dude. this kid likes ta put Z's on,its his style"like he's something special", watch me sneeze"more mentals"than his prtoduced by his pencil, 8/10. loved the wordplay, got a little shook off the flow. in his p/m he said he was down,damn i don't wanna know that, admittedly on his knees,keep da fetish ta yourself n da "cock"fat, 6/10. wasn't feelin this line. honestly kid,obviously just using my name makes your verse better, im drunk n still beat you,if half my verse was missing half the letters, 9/10. makes ammends for your spelling mistake...nice line, and a punch to boot. 3 K.O's but~this ones mine~you've just stepped into a battle field, ya ~mines blown~could'nt win this battle if you were sittin on a shield 7/10. decent closer, good punch. 57/70. good battle verse. I liked ya flow and great wrdplays, nice multis. no real personal. vote: DV8 return da fava ya'll Kizza--VS--2Hard2Lose thanks |
Thanks For The Votes I'll Return The Favour Asap....
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both had great punches,,but dv8 took it home...but both mc's were hot
dv8 just came a little harder....1...vote=dv8 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Ok This Was A Ok Battle
Troop..You Some Nice Vocab But Not Really No Punches Or personals But You Had A NiCe Drop.... Dv8..You Need 2 Go At Your Opponent More Also Punches And You Need Punches And You Lacked Vocab.... Open IP: D135 D6AF Rb kno i got Punches... that will mos def have ya Ass Gaspin Supply Karate kicks 2 ya like the kid off of The Last Dragon NiCe 8/10 accepted this battle~kid thinks im a punk~but not so, youre at best top soil~imma dunk~ this kid in slow mo, 7/10 Kinda Weak No creativity.. Closer Guarranteed that this Faggot Fem can catch em Like his whole squad Men? No Hesitatin Here ni99a i Slip and Slide Hustle mo rocks than Tyrone Bigums Ok 8/10 3 K.O's but~this ones mine~you've just stepped into a battle field, ya ~mines blown~could'nt win this battle if you were sittin on a shield, ok 7/10 Winner Troop |
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Dv8 gets da vote here
structure:DV multi.:Troop flow:DV Punches:same R.I.P. 2 all da falln soliders shouts 2 ad 9-1-9 and da 2-5-2 and my crew Mosiac Im still on da blok for ya "Hustle Hard Inc." check...http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136311 http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136748 |
There wasnt alot of creativity in this battle. It was kept simple. Not really any personals but I saw some good punches by DV. Dont get me wrong Troop brought his A-Game. He had a betta vocab but I saw some stretched lines that kinda threw me outta flow.
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After reading it the first time I was going with troop, but it was close so I read again. Then I caught a lot more things in DV8's post. DV8 had good wordplay, good punches, a good opener, and an alright closer. Troop had alright punches, a good opener, and a bad closer.
V/ DV8 |
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closer: J trooper i bet half y'all didn't understand that..
wordplay: J Trooper style/ creativity: both personals: close but both J Trooper came hittin' hard but DV8 tried to come back attackin' like a muthafukka.. DV8 needed to work on his vocab but nice flow, nigga fa real.. This was a close battle not a bad drop from either one of you but i must give to the one who came harder.. my vote/ J Trooper ~wun~ |
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Vote jTrooper
he had harder hitting punches and a better flow and better wordplay, Not really any personals but still good battle none the less DV8 you got some skills and you will elevate more doing battles like this props to both http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136525 |
arent personals supposed ta win battles???damn im gettin fucked cause no1's sein da personals,,,goo'battle,but i think it was closer than that.....uppin for votes...
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J TROOP's
Rb kno i got Punches... that will mos def have ya Ass Gaspin Supply Karate kicks 2 ya like the kid off of The Last Dragon Hot Opener..8/10 DV'8... hung on my Meat. so this dame Cough'n and Gaggin O So Disgustin how i experience more head than an Asprin Second Line in bar Doesn't particularly pertain to the battle..6/10 If you cant Defeat me fuck it The most Yung and Gifted Fuck it u Mede'oKer but my Approach put me on base like Kirby Puckett Verbal Terminal Lashins have me like Carmelo all ova ya Nugget only good line was third......5/10 My Intensions ..2 Be Kicked back... in a Purple Merche'Ahlogo DV8'Z Dame fixin me Waffles put 23 on her back like Mj in Chicago What dis gotta do wit the battle fam..kinda liked the last line...6/10 Hey 8 keep runnin off wit ya Soup Coolers basically keep runnin ya Lips and Watch me send u bulletz as long as Rulers turn ya into P-Cake Mix Whasn't really a punch...General Statement...6/10 Guarranteed that this Faggot Fem can catch em Like his whole squad Men? No Hesitatin Here ni99a i Slip and Slide Hustle mo rocks than Tyrone Bigums Not a good closer ..... 5/10 36/60....Overal...Decent Verse.....Yu Spit betta tho.... DV's accepted this battle~kid thinks im a punk~but not so, youre at best top soil~imma dunk~ this kid in slow mo, Yu fucked dis line wit the irrelevance of the second line....3/10 see j im the inside like beer is in the bottle~n im really drunk, you the outside~like a label gettin peeled~tossed in the trunk, Uh...Not really feelin dis line.....4/10... ya crews~murder mitten~guess you advertise ya hands are cold, this dudes a ~cowardly kitten~watch how this pussies legs fold, Decent...7/10....i think there was unintentional wordplay..but u got the benifit of the doubt this kid likes ta put Z's on,its his style"like he's something special", watch me sneeze"more mentals"than his prtoduced by his pencil, Uh No......Wrong....Almost Whas Good..Last Line fuck'd it...5/10 in his p/m he said he was down,damn i don't wanna know that, admittedly on his knees,keep da fetish ta yourself n da "cock"fat, .....3/10 honestly kid,obviously just using my name makes your verse better, im drunk n still beat you,if half my verse was missing half the letters, YUR ONE GOOD PUNCH....8/10.... 3 K.O's but~this ones mine~you've just stepped into a battle field, ya ~mines blown~could'nt win this battle if you were sittin Ur drunk...lol...dis ain't even rhyme....2/10 31/60.....bad verse brah...ima account this to bein drunk i guess.... VOTE GOES TO J_TROOP |
Vote-J Troop for harder punches close battle even in about everythign but i liked J's punches better..good battle
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uppin 4 votes people
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I normally dont vote on text but, Im gonna have to give it to DV8. This was really close, i liked both of em. DV8's flow was better. To both of you, keep it up.
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uppin 4 votes
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trooper= ya verse was good man.........some of ya punches ive heard before....so work on that........umm ya structure was ok seein as though all of ya lines were almost the same length......but still you had a good verse
dv8= ya verse was ok........didnt come as hard as trooper did..your punches were ok but wasnt really hittin hard.......you did good with your use of multis but still i dont think that was good enough...... |
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