aight u kno tha statz
10/15
no bitein
no re postin
no crew votes
no bull shit

verses due 30 minz after check in
im waitin 4 u 2 check in then i will

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aight im checkin in ,damn dawg that took a while,,,j/p within 1/2 hr imma drop aight...

this my check in

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Rb kno i got Punches... that will mos def have ya Ass Gaspin
Supply Karate kicks 2 ya like the kid off of The Last Dragon
DV'8... hung on my Meat. so this dame Cough'n and Gaggin
O So Disgustin how i experience more head than an Asprin
If you cant Defeat me fuck it The most Yung and Gifted Fuck it
u Mede'oKer but my Approach put me on base like Kirby Puckett
Verbal Terminal Lashins have me like Carmelo all ova ya Nugget
My Intensions ..2 Be Kicked back... in a Purple Merche'Ahlogo
DV8'Z Dame fixin me Waffles put 23 on her back like Mj in Chicago
Hey 8 keep runnin off wit ya Soup Coolers basically keep runnin ya Lips
and Watch me send u bulletz as long as Rulers turn ya into P-Cake Mix
Guarranteed that this Faggot Fem can catch em Like his whole squad Men?
No Hesitatin Here ni99a i Slip and Slide Hustle mo rocks than Tyrone Bigums

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Ima give u 10 more minz b cuz u bullshittin dont take that damn long 2 write some Bars
aint gone matter anyway
dont make me dq u bun
hurry that shit up

10 MINZ!!!

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accepted this battle~kid thinks im a punk~but not so,
youre at best top soil~imma dunk~ this kid in slow mo,

see j im the inside like beer is in the bottle~n im really drunk,
you the outside~like a label gettin peeled~tossed in the trunk,

ya crews~murder mitten~guess you advertise ya hands are cold,
this dudes a ~cowardly kitten~watch how this pussies legs fold,

this kid likes ta put Z's on,its his style"like he's something special",
watch me sneeze"more mentals"than his prtoduced by his pencil,

in his p/m he said he was down,damn i don't wanna know that,
admittedly on his knees,keep da fetish ta yourself n da "cock"fat,

honestly kid,obviously just using my name makes your verse better,
im drunk n still beat you,if half my verse was missing half the letters,

3 K.O's but~this ones mine~you've just stepped into a battle field,
ya ~mines blown~could'nt win this battle if you were sittin on a shield,

sorry man im a slow ass typer when im drinkin,yo imma dude why you thinkin imma chick yo,,2 bad i dint know that i would've played off that,anyhow you know i dint feed off your verse any,yo can we get some votes up in this herrrrreeeeee...

yea man its coo cuzz
i b tipsy 2 lol fuck ya
can we get some votes

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this was very close, but i gotta give it to dv8, he came jus a lil stronger, with a better structure and flow! id say both had equal punches but dv8 just took it.....

peace

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Punches: Troop
Flow: Troop... Dv8 didnt rhyme in some barz
Metaz: Dv8
Originality: Niether
Multis: Dv8 Tho - - - dont make all barz multiz

Final::: Troop

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136693 <- vote fairly niggaz.. peace

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Rb kno i got Punches... that will mos def have ya Ass Gaspin
Supply Karate kicks 2 ya like the kid off of The Last Dragon
7/10. good opener.
DV'8... hung on my Meat. so this dame Cough'n and Gaggin
O So Disgustin how i experience more head than an Asprin
8/10. good flow.
If you cant Defeat me fuck it The most Yung and Gifted Fuck it
u Mede'oKer but my Approach put me on base like Kirby Puckett
Verbal Terminal Lashins have me like Carmelo all ova ya Nugget
6/10. I liked the carmelo line, but the flow is chopy here
My Intensions ..2 Be Kicked back... in a Purple Merche'Ahlogo
DV8'Z Dame fixin me Waffles put 23 on her back like Mj in Chicago
6/10. it's a'ight. I like the MJ line, decent punch.
Hey 8 keep runnin off wit ya Soup Coolers basically keep runnin ya Lips
and Watch me send u bulletz as long as Rulers turn ya into P-Cake Mix
8/10. I hate having to fill in words on this but I like it. a bit stretched. good punch on the lips.
Guarranteed that this Faggot Fem can catch em Like his whole squad Men?
No Hesitatin Here ni99a i Slip and Slide Hustle mo rocks than Tyrone Bigums
5/10. stretched no punch.

40/60 overall. you could shorten it up to reduce the chopiness but otherwise a good battle verse. few ok personals.


accepted this battle~kid thinks im a punk~but not so,
youre at best top soil~imma dunk~ this kid in slow mo,
9/10. nice flow, good opener.
see j im the inside like beer is in the bottle~n im really drunk,
you the outside~like a label gettin peeled~tossed in the trunk,
9/10. good line, nice punch, nice wordplay
ya crews~murder mitten~guess you advertise ya hands are cold,
this dudes a ~cowardly kitten~watch how this pussies legs fold,
9/10. nice dude.
this kid likes ta put Z's on,its his style"like he's something special",
watch me sneeze"more mentals"than his prtoduced by his pencil,
8/10. loved the wordplay, got a little shook off the flow.
in his p/m he said he was down,damn i don't wanna know that,
admittedly on his knees,keep da fetish ta yourself n da "cock"fat,
6/10. wasn't feelin this line.
honestly kid,obviously just using my name makes your verse better,
im drunk n still beat you,if half my verse was missing half the letters,
9/10. makes ammends for your spelling mistake...nice line, and a punch to boot.
3 K.O's but~this ones mine~you've just stepped into a battle field,
ya ~mines blown~could'nt win this battle if you were sittin on a shield
7/10. decent closer, good punch.

57/70. good battle verse. I liked ya flow and great wrdplays, nice multis. no real personal.

vote: DV8

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