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J_Trooper vs. AutoMATIK™*The Standoff*
10/15
no bitein no repostin no bull verses due 30 min after check in once u check in i will then its On |
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Its Auto'matik for me 2 state Neva will you burn me
All i need is mY Vest ,Burner and my District Attorney Undastand im freshly newly arrived off them blocks 5 pen years for carryin glocks longer than Dreadlocks Look im the Hottest Rook in the Muth-a-fuckin Book Translation you AutoMatik' Lee Bound to get Shook Look Trooper dressed down in Teflon if theres ever a Problem Undivided Attention when i come in Up in that ass like a Tampon Gettin Flexed is nuthin its Regular But im Darein ya I carry Pounds bigger than Tha Rack off of Pamela Not even Miami can Compete wit my Heat 2 Shots at ass have u pop lockin like Beat Street Would Advise u to bring it 2 my guyz if u are Unevenly Strapped Dont Wanna experience 24 bullet'z as long as ah Nica-teen patch Disprespect Suspision will get Daugter gettin snatched fom Father Fluently on the Blok wit Automatik's movein more hoes than a Gardner |
Edited Verse*****
Would Advise u to bring it 2 my guyz if u are Unevenly Strapped Dont Wanna experience 24 bullet'z as Wide as ah Nica-teen patch |
ok. different style ...
yo, I Stay-Spittin…“Leave Savage Scratched” Like A Playstation-Skipping These Fakes’ll-Lay-Sickened, This Battles A “Gift, I Got It Under Wraps” Like Christmas Day-Ribbons!! (-1-) Cat’s-Stuck-In-A-Tree!!!, Like Air, Cuz Your Absolutely Nothing-To-See I’ll Leave You Impaired, Tucked-In-Ya-Sheets, Have You “Running From Bars” Like Convicts Just Fuckin-Released!!! (-2-) i'll muder this savage bastard with quick punches to the genitas,im the general bitch fuck this battle for all it's worth and take his birth like a criminal bitch (-3-) Im Posting His *Last Battle* So I Can Really*Dub-Destruction!!!* J_Trooper, Your *Not Useful* Like *Scrub-Abductions* (-4) I Got This *Booked* Like *Recent Michael Jackson-Head-Lines*.. Stop Blastin-Dead-Rhymes!!! Your Style? You *Owe Me* I'm *Passin-Thread-Fines*...(-5) uppin for votes |
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oooo,shit,nice battle,trooper,nice verse,came hard wiv some nice punchlines,structure was perfect,good vocab aswell
auto,another good verse,good punches,but dont think they hit as hard,structure cud av been better,tough one to decide i swear,but ama give it to trooper. my vote-trooper return the favour please!! http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136507 |
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Trooper:you had good flow and structure, this time around you seem to have portrayed your punches and verse stronger here, you have gotten better, good job, overall you had the harder verse here towards your opponent.......keep it up Auto:I liked your openening bar, it came off hard, but the verse seemed to have fallen off by the time i got to the end, overall verse was decent but u should work on structure and flow, no hate just constructive criticism, you had som enice multies tho, work on personals both, but good job overall.......... VOTE:TROOPER |
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i have a question... automatik.... why u say savage alot...
IP: 23CC 11AC ok. different style ... Quote:
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Punches: Tie Becuz Autoz Were played, aswell as J, but not asmuch as autoz Flow: Troop Metaz: Niether Wordplay: Auto Originality: Troop Structure: Troop Multis: Niether Final Vote -`- Troop Commentz---- alotta played conceptz in this battle but none the less troop was more original... had better flow and structure.... tied punches cuz both were played but some decent.... peep my battle n vote fair..--- http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...322#post1430322 |
Nice shit yallz.
Troop My Nigga!!!! That shit was leathel nigga. Matik' yours was nice to. The punch in the genitals made me grab my nuts son. lol. But keepin it real:
Structure: Matik' Metas: Matik' Punches:J-Troop Delivery:J-Troop Ending: J-Troop Beginning:J-Troop Vote=J. Nice battle hit mine up |
yo diss battle was close
good battle had sum good punches but ima have 2 go wit J cuz his punches were more direct dey hit harder so i gave it 2 him v/J-TROOPER vote 4 deez battles amayze vs 2hard2lose http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487 novakane http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749 murda-gram http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136506 forgotten flow http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031 peace |
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136297
^^ me vs. Limited Edition |
Don't know if this is too late, but I'd go with auto on this...
Yeah, J had a good structure, some good punches, and good flow, however... he also had too much self-glorification for my taste. Auto, it was a different structure, but I could flow with it well, you had better punches and great wordplay. My vote goes to auto. |
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