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J_Trooper 5 83.33%
AutoMATIK™ 1 16.67%
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Old 07-23-04, 01:39 AM   #1
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J_Trooper vs. AutoMATIK™*The Standoff*

IP: D135 D6AF

10/15
no bitein
no repostin
no bull

verses due 30 min after check in

once u check in i will then its On
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Old 07-23-04, 01:44 AM   #2
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Old 07-23-04, 01:48 AM   #3
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Old 07-23-04, 02:30 AM   #4
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Its Auto'matik for me 2 state Neva will you burn me
All i need is mY Vest ,Burner and my District Attorney

Undastand im freshly newly arrived off them blocks
5 pen years for carryin glocks longer than Dreadlocks


Look im the Hottest Rook in the Muth-a-fuckin Book
Translation you AutoMatik' Lee Bound to get Shook

Look Trooper dressed down in Teflon if theres ever a Problem
Undivided Attention when i come in Up in that ass like a Tampon

Gettin Flexed is nuthin its Regular But im Darein ya
I carry Pounds bigger than Tha Rack off of Pamela

Not even Miami can Compete wit my Heat
2 Shots at ass have u pop lockin like Beat Street

Would Advise u to bring it 2 my guyz if u are Unevenly Strapped
Dont Wanna experience 24 bullet'z as long as ah Nica-teen patch

Disprespect Suspision will get Daugter gettin snatched fom Father
Fluently on the Blok wit Automatik's movein more hoes than a Gardner
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Old 07-23-04, 02:39 AM   #5
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Edited Verse*****

Would Advise u to bring it 2 my guyz if u are Unevenly Strapped
Dont Wanna experience 24 bullet'z as Wide as ah Nica-teen patch
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Old 07-23-04, 03:02 AM   #6
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ok. different style ...

yo, I Stay-Spittin…“Leave Savage Scratched” Like A Playstation-Skipping
These Fakes’ll-Lay-Sickened, This Battles A “Gift, I Got It Under Wraps” Like Christmas Day-Ribbons!! (-1-)
Cat’s-Stuck-In-A-Tree!!!, Like Air, Cuz Your Absolutely Nothing-To-See
I’ll Leave You Impaired, Tucked-In-Ya-Sheets, Have You “Running From Bars” Like Convicts Just Fuckin-Released!!! (-2-)
i'll muder this savage bastard with quick punches to the genitas,im the general bitch
fuck this battle for all it's worth and take his birth like a criminal bitch (-3-)
Im Posting His *Last Battle* So I Can Really*Dub-Destruction!!!*
J_Trooper, Your *Not Useful* Like *Scrub-Abductions* (-4)
I Got This *Booked* Like *Recent Michael Jackson-Head-Lines*.. Stop Blastin-Dead-Rhymes!!! Your Style? You *Owe Me* I'm *Passin-Thread-Fines*...(-5)

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Old 07-23-04, 03:09 AM   #7
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Old 07-23-04, 03:37 AM   #8
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..uppin
 
Old 07-23-04, 10:08 AM   #9
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Old 07-23-04, 12:05 PM   #10
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oooo,shit,nice battle,trooper,nice verse,came hard wiv some nice punchlines,structure was perfect,good vocab aswell

auto,another good verse,good punches,but dont think they hit as hard,structure cud av been better,tough one to decide i swear,but ama give it to trooper.

my vote-trooper

return the favour please!!

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136507
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Old 07-23-04, 12:08 PM   #11
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are you serious? ...
 
Old 07-23-04, 12:24 PM   #12
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ok:
Trooper:you had good flow and structure, this time around you seem to have portrayed your punches and verse stronger here, you have gotten better, good job, overall you had the harder verse here towards your opponent.......keep it up
Auto:I liked your openening bar, it came off hard, but the verse seemed to have fallen off by the time i got to the end, overall verse was decent but u should work on structure and flow, no hate just constructive criticism, you had som enice multies tho,
work on personals both, but good job overall..........
VOTE:TROOPER
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Old 07-23-04, 12:56 PM   #13
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Old 07-23-04, 01:09 PM   #14
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i have a question... automatik.... why u say savage alot...

IP: 23CC 11AC


ok. different style ...

Quote:
yo, I Stay-Spittin…“Leave Savage Scratched” Like A Playstation-Skipping
These Fakes’ll-Lay-Sickened, This Battles A “Gift, I Got It Under Wraps” Like Christmas Day-Ribbons!! (-1-)
Cat’s-Stuck-In-A-Tree!!!, Like Air, Cuz Your Absolutely Nothing-To-See
I’ll Leave You Impaired, Tucked-In-Ya-Sheets, Have You “Running From Bars” Like Convicts Just Fuckin-Released!!! (-2-)
i'll muder this savage bastard with quick punches to the genitas,im the general bitch
fuck this battle for all it's worth and take his birth like a criminal bitch (-3-)
Im Posting His *Last Battle* So I Can Really*Dub-Destruction!!!*
J_Trooper, Your *Not Useful* Like *Scrub-Abductions* (-4)
I Got This *Booked* Like *Recent Michael Jackson-Head-Lines*.. Stop Blastin-Dead-Rhymes!!! Your Style? You *Owe Me* I'm *Passin-Thread-Fines*...(-5)
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Old 07-23-04, 01:13 PM   #15
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Anyway

Punches: Tie Becuz Autoz Were played, aswell as J, but not asmuch as autoz
Flow: Troop
Metaz: Niether
Wordplay: Auto
Originality: Troop
Structure: Troop
Multis: Niether


Final Vote -`- Troop

Commentz---- alotta played conceptz in this battle but none the less troop was more original... had better flow and structure.... tied punches cuz both were played but some decent....

peep my battle n vote fair..---
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...322#post1430322
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