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intensify effect vs optimized
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drop when u can this should be my 1st win outta the 1,000 im about to get |
i'll leave u wet, this work out aint worth a sweat
sponge bob ya system, have u soakin from razor gellets you'r a basic treat, wouldnt even worn the rapboard papmer you'r style, cause you'r shit about to look like crap-more the facts store, like i compact ya style into microsoft dont strain and act hard, cause your emotion are about to go soft take a pain-killah plus liquer, it might intensify you'r effect more so dont panic or get leavft stiff like manicans in the back-store so dont look cause u just might miss and hit post reply my flow like gahnariea cause im know to burn more then just between those-thigs check-mate that outta do it |
ya testin my pen, while im molestin ya mind
put the tech to ya spine, with bullets the size im pulling out the knife with enough anger my dick willing to bang-ya trap ya in a box, stab it with my ox, N toss it down a hill cuz ya verse a flop u dont want me to travel with my 32 heat cuz im ganrenty to hit the center and leave ya underneth its like i took lesson from AOL cuz shot i'll pop up with my AIM and have u feeling violated as if u found out i've been hitting ya dame change ya name im here to change ya fame with a shot that'll leave u blown out like old nintendo games and fuck viewing the poll results as if u was stoping this cuz my effect is leathal N deadly like aids if u wanna be so positive next time ask me to battle bitch...... |
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Weak battle. Optimized took it with more original punchlines. All intensify was talkin about was how hes gonna put bullets in him. No creativity whatsoever. Optimize takes it on the structure too. His lines were even and not all over tha place like IT's. Optimized takes it with a better structure and more creativity in punches.
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this battle was weak but i liked optimize verse better even though the beggining was corny it picked up and stay alright intensity usually spits hot i dont know what happened he was off today.
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Punches-Tie
Personals-Neither Flow-Opt Structure-Opt Opener-Opt's it was more of a punch Closer-Tie Creativity-Tie Originality-Opt Overall-Optimize keep at it you 2 just need to keep elevatin...try throwin in some more wordplay and try to tighten up ur punches and create personals.....keep at it please leave an honest vote on this batle of mine: http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137383 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
ehhhh, optimized ya verse was good, and so was urs I.E.
But that last punch that IE did killed it... Not a very good battle though Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
^^^ its cool dog all i want is honest votes....
good looks thou fam... |
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i.e you got my vote holla now return the favor ok peace
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aight both of you guys wer good but i think optimized took it on punches i.e you had good creativity but i thinl optim came on top with his punches and flow aight !!!
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Weak battle but I.e last punchline just did tha battle woz weak and even in structure and punchs but I.E got it
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spit: op
pucn:op flow:op vocab: op dis was a really weak battle like the others sed, but coming to punches, he won... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
give diss battle 2 opt
head had a better flow n structure IE had sum wordplay but i wasn't feelin it really n ur ounches didn't hit so hard v/OPT vote on deez battles DRAG~ON VS ecko(crew battle) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142722 definatfully(punchline) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142312 V0cab http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=141251 Jono http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142463 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
iight this battle was kinda weak. imma go with i.e. cuz even tho his punches werent exactly as hard as opt's, i.e.'s were more thought out and more creative like the aol line and the nintendo game line. both need to elevate on punches cuz they were a lil weak and both also need to work on structure a lil bit more. most of the categories were even tho.
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Weak battle. Optimized took it with more original punchlines. All intensify was talkin about was how hes gonna put bullets in him. No creativity whatsoever. Optimize takes it on the structure too. His lines were even and not all over tha place like IT's. Optimized takes it with a better structure and more creativity in punches and shit like that.
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i'd vote for omptimized, mainly just because i hate I.E.!
he recycled in our battle when it clearly says NO RECYCLING BITCH!!!!! fuck intensify effect :thefinger .......peace........ |
^^^^ recycled what bitch??
get off my nuts..... with ya 1st grade rhymes |
BReAK DoWN
Optimized verse i'll leave u wet, this work out aint worth a sweat sponge bob ya system, have u soakin from razor gellets ok line i guess...6/10 you'r a basic treat, wouldnt even worn the rapboard papmer you'r style, cause you'r shit about to look like crap-more minore improvement...6/10 the facts store, like i compact ya style into microsoft dont strain and act hard, cause your emotion are about to go soft weak....4/10 take a pain-killah plus liquer, it might intensify you'r effect more so dont panic or get leavft stiff like manicans in the back-store nice attemp of a metaphore....5/10 so dont look cause u just might miss and hit post reply my flow like gahnariea cause im know to burn more then just between those-thigs pretty beat finisher......7/10 Overall=28/50 Intensify effect's verse im pulling out the knife with enough anger my dick willing to bang-ya trap ya in a box, stab it with my ox, N toss it down a hill cuz ya verse a flop kinda soft.......5/10 u dont want me to travel with my 32 heat cuz im ganrenty to hit the center and leave ya underneth real weak.....4/10 its like i took lesson from AOL cuz shot i'll pop up with my AIM and have u feeling violated as if u found out i've been hitting ya dame kinda corny but the AIM was ok....6/10 change ya name im here to change ya fame with a shot that'll leave u blown out like old nintendo games nice metaphore attempt 6/10 and fuck viewing the poll results as if u was stoping this cuz my effect is leathal N deadly like aids if u wanna be so positive good finisher....8/10 Overall=29/50 Vote: Intensify effect |
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Opt killed intensity...his Punches were harder than int's...tha structure & flow was good..and a nice wordplay
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lyk dey all said weak battle but opt got it with some punches all organal but aleast he had some ok puches opt got my vote but ok battle bit weak but ok
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"weak battle." why u fools sayin the same thing over and over?
Optimized verse i'll leave u wet, this work out aint worth a sweat sponge bob ya system, have u soakin from razor gellets good 6/10 you'r a basic treat, wouldnt even worn the rapboard papmer you'r style, cause you'r shit about to look like crap-more Not feelin 3/10 the facts store, like i compact ya style into microsoft dont strain and act hard, cause your emotion are about to go soft weak. 4/10 take a pain-killah plus liquer, it might intensify you'r effect more so dont panic or get leavft stiff like manicans in the back-store that was ok 5/10 so dont look cause u just might miss and hit post reply my flow like gahnariea cause im know to burn more then just between those-thigs that was not good 3/10 Intensify effect's verse im pulling out the knife with enough anger my dick willing to bang-ya trap ya in a box, stab it with my ox, N toss it down a hill cuz ya verse a flop kinda soft Um that was ok 5/10 u dont want me to travel with my 32 heat cuz im ganrenty to hit the center and leave ya underneth 4/10 its like i took lesson from AOL cuz shot i'll pop up with my AIM and have u feeling violated as if u found out i've been hitting ya dame 6/10 change ya name im here to change ya fame with a shot that'll leave u blown out like old nintendo games 8/10 some good multis and punches. and fuck viewing the poll results as if u was stoping this cuz my effect is leathal N deadly like aids if u wanna be so positive Nice... 8/10 Overall I.E has got this.. return the fav in the sig, homey. |
pretty weak battle but i was feelin optimized, cause he hit harder wiht his shit, and intensity your punches were pretty weak and iddnt hit very hard
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upp'in this yet again and again.........................
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we need 2 votes to end this holla at me....................
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i really didn't feel anything from the two but i go for intensify effect
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