10 lines
drop when u can
this should be my 1st win outta the 1,000 im about to get

i'll leave u wet, this work out aint worth a sweat
sponge bob ya system, have u soakin from razor gellets
you'r a basic treat, wouldnt even worn the rapboard
papmer you'r style, cause you'r shit about to look like crap-more
the facts store, like i compact ya style into microsoft
dont strain and act hard, cause your emotion are about to go soft
take a pain-killah plus liquer, it might intensify you'r effect more
so dont panic or get leavft stiff like manicans in the back-store
so dont look cause u just might miss and hit post reply
my flow like gahnariea cause im know to burn more then just between those-thigs

check-mate that outta do it

ya testin my pen, while im molestin ya mind
put the tech to ya spine, with bullets the size

im pulling out the knife with enough anger my dick willing to bang-ya
trap ya in a box, stab it with my ox, N toss it down a hill cuz ya verse a flop
u dont want me to travel with my 32 heat
cuz im ganrenty to hit the center and leave ya underneth
its like i took lesson from AOL cuz shot i'll pop up with my AIM
and have u feeling violated as if u found out i've been hitting ya dame
change ya name im here to change ya fame
with a shot
that'll leave u blown out like old nintendo games
and fuck viewing the poll results as if u was stoping this
cuz my effect is leathal N deadly like aids if u wanna be so positive


next time ask me to battle bitch......

upp'in for some votes please.......................

Weak battle. Optimized took it with more original punchlines. All intensify was talkin about was how hes gonna put bullets in him. No creativity whatsoever. Optimize takes it on the structure too. His lines were even and not all over tha place like IT's. Optimized takes it with a better structure and more creativity in punches.

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upp'in for more votes.............................

upp'in............................................ .....

this battle was weak but i liked optimize verse better even though the beggining was corny it picked up and stay alright intensity usually spits hot i dont know what happened he was off today.



vote in my battles -daillest vs caliph and killa vs caliph they in frontlines on page 2 or 3

Punches-Tie
Personals-Neither
Flow-Opt
Structure-Opt
Opener-Opt's it was more of a punch
Closer-Tie
Creativity-Tie
Originality-Opt
Overall-Optimize

keep at it you 2 just need to keep elevatin...try throwin in some more wordplay and try to tighten up ur punches and create personals.....keep at it

please leave an honest vote on this batle of mine:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137383

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ehhhh, optimized ya verse was good, and so was urs I.E.
But that last punch that IE did killed it... Not a very good battle though

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^^^ its cool dog all i want is honest votes....

good looks thou fam...

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i.e you got my vote holla now return the favor ok peace

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aight both of you guys wer good but i think optimized took it on punches i.e you had good creativity but i thinl optim came on top with his punches and flow aight !!!

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