Met-A-4 vs. Ice Pick
 

Aiight bra. I set it up. Now all you gotta do is drop. Check in befor you go though. House rules. 10-15 lines. peace!

FINE IM HERE
CHECKED IN
after i drop my verse

you better not take longer than 30 minutes to do your verse
because mine only takes like 20 minutes

Meta4 your a handicap low poster,delayin' spits like old toasters.

The real battle begins

an insufficient boaster also;
en espanol tu 'ill' gato factos que son falso.
your just a pussy cat sippin' on cached lactose.
Ice Pick lace the text field like automatic macros.
you go to the tabernacle for faith in prayer,
i step in the joint as an unholy wordslayer.
rip ya scripts like satanical rabbit killers,
i petrify my knowledge like roman pillars.
Meta, you'll be more shook than gravity;
won't land on ya four feet-cuz i ruptured ya cavity.
mathmatically defyin' ya verbal outakes and intakes,
like clogged pipelines on honda accord brakes.
physically masticate your flimsy diaphragm,
display this shit to The Mods like executive diagrams.
delete the ram in ya mental subroutine,
partition your byte verses like guillotines.
your a progenic cat banished In rap battle society,
you can't stay off wackness like alcoholic sobriety.
anxiety is what you feel from all my bars;
i've scratched your essense like keyed cars.
i by far demolished your prospective most,
as if your best verse was my viral host.

I think i went over a few
oh well

dont take agrudge do the same and spit flames

One SOn

Aiight bra.! I guess your good, considering your comparing me to a toaster. Real lyrical genius.

First off, speak english when you say your words, you lesser than a piece of shit, you even smaller than a turd/
You think you got some good shit goin wit ya flow, when all that needs to stop, so that means you gotta go/
I'm a verbal murderer with what I spit, I'll grad a "v" then a "T", and stab you wit it like it was an ice pick/
you get a sliced dick, that means a bloody prick, and when you pee, its gonna burn when you piss/
Thats a great diss, you a "straight" miss, that means you gay, and when you rim, you eat shit/
I'll dismantle you by every limb on ya anatomy, then mouth fuck you, till my nut gives you cavaties/
My knowledge is like it came from an academy, while your head is hollow, so you get lifted like wit no gravity/
I got my heat, ready to lock and load, I'll bust at ya face and watch that shit explode/
Thats it, you done already lost ya life, I guess since you gone, I'll do an R. Kelly and take a piss on ya fuckin wife!
Cause this is how it is when you wanna fuck wit me, With ya life you paid the price, while I took that bitch for free

Uppn
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man

Good Luck with that 2+2 fuckin abc raps

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Aiight!!! Lets get some fuckin votes on here. Please. I jus wanna close this. PEACE!

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Flow: Ice Pick
Structure: Ice Pick
Personals: Met-A-4
Punches: Met-A-4
Creativity: Met-A-4
Vocab: Ice Pick
Enjoyment: Met-A-4

Vote: Met-A-4

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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not those gay ass Votes like quack dropped

Return da favor and vote on dis
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136356


Ok this battle is close
Ice Pick had a good flow and a great structure to back it up
I also caught some punchlines too
Met-4 had a good drop too his flow was good his
punchlines was good too
but ur structure was a little messed up
it was a good drop though
Im goin to have to give it to
Ice Pick

please vote on dis I need all I need is 1 more vote
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136356

aight, this is the third time i give an honest vote to ice pick, so you ow me a favor now buddy, i think pick had the flow, structure punches, but meta4 got the prsonels and creativity on you, not to mention had the opener, you got the ending and had a better rhyme sceme so ima have to go wit you aight? meta4 you gotta fix up that structure and just elevate, pick, i'll talk to you when i need the favor the returned

uppin..and vote honestly....drop links will return the favor....

uppin..and vote honestly....drop links will return the favor....

im not gunna vote cauz i couldnt stand either verse. meta4 ur structure was whack man you seriously need to work on it and your vocab too. flow wasnt that good either. ice pick, we already had a discussion bout battlin people on your level so take my advice next time. your verse wasnt totally whack but u tryin to up ur vocab left some lines not making any sense. examples:'Meta, you'll be more shook than gravity;'
(gravity DOESNT shake) and 'i petrify my knowledge like roman pillars.' (why would u do that? petrify makes shit hard and old!) anyways i changed my mind i will vote and its goin to ice pick for overall better flow.

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uppn for votes :shoot: :laugh:
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flow ice pick
structure ice pick
vocab both
word play both
personals niether
punches both
overall ice pick

Uuppn This

Bcides He Fed Off My Verse Anyways
Close This Thread

agree ^