Aiight bra. I set it up. Now all you gotta do is drop. Check in befor you go though. House rules. 10-15 lines. peace!

FINE IM HERE
CHECKED IN
after i drop my verse

you better not take longer than 30 minutes to do your verse
because mine only takes like 20 minutes

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Meta4 your a handicap low poster,delayin' spits like old toasters.

The real battle begins

an insufficient boaster also;
en espanol tu 'ill' gato factos que son falso.
your just a pussy cat sippin' on cached lactose.
Ice Pick lace the text field like automatic macros.
you go to the tabernacle for faith in prayer,
i step in the joint as an unholy wordslayer.
rip ya scripts like satanical rabbit killers,
i petrify my knowledge like roman pillars.
Meta, you'll be more shook than gravity;
won't land on ya four feet-cuz i ruptured ya cavity.
mathmatically defyin' ya verbal outakes and intakes,
like clogged pipelines on honda accord brakes.
physically masticate your flimsy diaphragm,
display this shit to The Mods like executive diagrams.
delete the ram in ya mental subroutine,
partition your byte verses like guillotines.
your a progenic cat banished In rap battle society,
you can't stay off wackness like alcoholic sobriety.
anxiety is what you feel from all my bars;
i've scratched your essense like keyed cars.
i by far demolished your prospective most,
as if your best verse was my viral host.

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I think i went over a few
oh well

dont take agrudge do the same and spit flames

One SOn

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Aiight bra.! I guess your good, considering your comparing me to a toaster. Real lyrical genius.

First off, speak english when you say your words, you lesser than a piece of shit, you even smaller than a turd/
You think you got some good shit goin wit ya flow, when all that needs to stop, so that means you gotta go/
I'm a verbal murderer with what I spit, I'll grad a "v" then a "T", and stab you wit it like it was an ice pick/
you get a sliced dick, that means a bloody prick, and when you pee, its gonna burn when you piss/
Thats a great diss, you a "straight" miss, that means you gay, and when you rim, you eat shit/
I'll dismantle you by every limb on ya anatomy, then mouth fuck you, till my nut gives you cavaties/
My knowledge is like it came from an academy, while your head is hollow, so you get lifted like wit no gravity/
I got my heat, ready to lock and load, I'll bust at ya face and watch that shit explode/
Thats it, you done already lost ya life, I guess since you gone, I'll do an R. Kelly and take a piss on ya fuckin wife!
Cause this is how it is when you wanna fuck wit me, With ya life you paid the price, while I took that bitch for free

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Good Luck with that 2+2 fuckin abc raps

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Aiight!!! Lets get some fuckin votes on here. Please. I jus wanna close this. PEACE!

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Flow: Ice Pick
Structure: Ice Pick
Personals: Met-A-4
Punches: Met-A-4
Creativity: Met-A-4
Vocab: Ice Pick
Enjoyment: Met-A-4

Vote: Met-A-4

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