GunzGalore vs intensify effect
 

5 bars = 10 lines
due: 6pm
dont matter if u check-in

good luck

6pm......damn nigga u need dat much time 2 get ur shit together

just drop and i will drop asap.......
cool........

no feedin either nigga
dont try to get damn slick

i see ya soon to be all ass out like my avator pic
this loss gonna hurt more then getting cought between the elevator door with ya dick
u acted hard and wanted this battle u dumb-man
but u couldnt spit fat if u implated PUN-glance in ya lung span
u got heart but i'll hannibal ya style kid
cause i'll put out ya FIRE out N arms in da sea like squids *fire-arms*
its gonna be harder sleep'in on me then a spike bed
this win more difficult then havein amputated legs lost in a mountin-hike-shed
so for you'r sake i hope u WIDE-AWAKE-WILSON
cuz im about to stop ya whole mototive like blown-pistons

bang bang.... good night

Ok lets go

My rhymes hot nuffin u could eva intesify
Ur a snitch against ur man you'll prolly testify
Ur rhymes weak against me there is no effect
Light u up with red dots "sorry" dem are not hickies on ur neck
I dont care if u hustle or not or what block u claim
Da obituary column is where they will find ur name
Effects soft hearted-he gets emotional and mushie
so I send niggas 2 get a piece of em like he food or pussy
Im not a game Im a gangsta I'll smack u with da 5th
Catch u stopped at a light and snatch u out ur whip
He's not gangsta, noooo he's not gangsta at all
I treat em like a hang nail-just clippn him off
Effect attracted 2 some dick like some cotton 2 moth

holla at da KiD

Aiight dats da battle right there peeps.

But we uppin for votes

A winner is needed

Intensify Effect--- Punches Were Ok, You Had Some Metaz, And Alright Wordplay, Structure Could Have Been Better, And More Original Lines Could Have Been Better Too.... Overal Ok Verse...

GunzGalore- A Little To Gansta For A Battle Verse, Hang Nail Was Ya Best Line And Not Really A Punch... Structure Was Better Tan Intensify But Would Have Worked Nice With Good Punches... Overal Ok But Not As Good As I-E

Punches- I e
Flow- Gunz
Multis- Niether
Wordplay- I e
Structure- Gunz
Metaz- I e
Originality- Gunz
Personals- Niether


Final Vote----- Intensify Effect

Return Favor With Honest Vote'....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137169

yo mayn, tha guy b-4 me thot gunz verse wuz a little 2 gangsta, but thats wut i like, both had good flow n structure. i liked tha part about them not bein hickies on ya neck, that wuz dope. so ima vote fo gunzgalore. werd

vote= gunzgalore, werd

Int- yo lines were stretched out and shit makin' it harder to get tha flow wit it and shit...yo rhymes were good and shit..but yo structure...work on that...

Gunz- yo structure was good wit tha flow...which was also good...yo vocab was ok...but all 2gether u merk'd this kid...

v/ GuNz

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Alright, neither drops were very good, both need to elevate...guns takes this with better structure, better flow, and harder punches...intensify...you barely through any punches and the ones you did throw, did not connect, elevate brah

Vote/GunzGalore...return the favor against DJulien in the sig

Thanxx for all da support peeps
Still uppin for votes

Come on Peeps
gives us some votes
We still uppin
check this....http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137351

Oh man. This ones easy. Gunz got it.
This battle is self explanatory
I aint gotta say nuffin, its been said in da verses

Oh man. This ones easy. Gunz got it.
This battle is self explanatory
I aint gotta say nuffin, its been said in da verses

Return da favor
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136313

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Intensify got this... better form and alot of funz shit just wasn't good, no offense

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Both dropz was aiight but i gotta give dis joint 2 gunz cuz he had a good flow and a better structure.His punchez was jus a little better than effect. propz to both
v/gunz
(vote me vs. ibraheem or me vs. amayze)

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i give diss battle 2 IE
he had way more punches
i didn't really see n e in
GUNZGALORE's flowbut his
flow was better but i like da punches
IE put out so i gave him da battlr
v/IE
vote 4 deez battles
amayze vs novakane
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136749

2hard2lose
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136487

peace

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This was a nice battel awkward verse but a good battle/
Both verse coulda been better structured an all, but still/
Here is my vote and opinion on this little battle here/

Flow: Tie
Personal: None
Punches: I E
Wordplay I E
Structure: Tie
Metas: Tie
Overall: I E

Vote= I E

Overall his verse was better because of his stronger punches and wordplay/
Thas what helped him beat you Gunz, keep elevatin both of ya/

upp'in this battle been long ova due........

plez can we get some more votes to end this.......

its been a tie since tux was invented come on people......
upp'in for votes...
i will return the favor...

Gunz won this. I e's flow was too choppy, and the firearms line wouldn't have been understandable had he not explained it at the end of the line.

nigga you just won you ripped him in half big time but hes still gd keep practice nigga urll get der trus

yo gunz took this one easy....
Punches- gunz
Flow- gunz
Multis- Niether
Wordplay- I.E.
Structure- Gunz
Metaz- I e
Originality- Gunz
Personals- gunz

vote/gunz go figure

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ok gunz good start and nice personals but that hickes on the neck was used to death already and your verse fell apart from there
both flows and strutures was good but intesity your end was trash and it aint rhyme still that pun bar you spit was hot but not good enough it could have been said better.punches and vocab go to intensity winning him the battle.





give honest votes on my battles and they get returned dr and ill blacklist you

bOTH OF YALL DID REALLY WELL, INTENSITY EFFECT WAS GOOD BUT I WOULD AGREE THAT GUNS WPUNCHES AND PERSONALS WERE BETTER, GUNZGALORS STRUCTURE AND FLOW WAS BETTER THAT EFFECTS

VOTE GOES TO GUNZ FOR A BETTER VERSE OVERALL

PLEASE VOTE ON MY BATTLE
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138657

PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR

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MY BAD WRONG LINK HERE IS THE LINK
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1452658

whats up peeps
We need 2 get this battle closed ASAP
I dun hade a million votes Dq'd and this battle should of been bagg'd up

Vote and I'll return da Fav

Holl@

upp'in for honest EXPLAINED VOTES peeps dont sleep................................

come on peep whats good with some good feed back on votes????????????

upp'in for
some votes
thats long ova due.....

i will return the favor drop link..........

upp'in for
some votes
thats long ova due.....

i will return the favor drop link..........

upp'in............................................ ...

props to both battlers, good entertain ment, but here's the verdict.

ie came forth with some punches, and decent structure. His multi's were a plus as well.

gunzgalore had very noob style, not really a battle verse at all. Just saying what you'd do to him. You seem like you'd be able to freestyle but not battle, if that makes sense to you. elevation is need for you keep at it.

mines goes to ie

thanks for the vote i will vote in one of u'r battles shortly........

Was pretty close.... but I didn't like the fact that GUNZ had a few broken lines.. Both were hittin' fairly hard, both had decent flow and structure.. I think ya'll could've came a little harder in those areas.. Was hard to call, but I'ma give this one to IE... he was a little bit more consistant, and that little bit makes a huge difference in a close battle.. much respect to both of ya'll tho..

v/IE