5 bars = 10 lines
due: 6pm
dont matter if u check-in

good luck

6pm......damn nigga u need dat much time 2 get ur shit together

just drop and i will drop asap.......
cool........

no feedin either nigga
dont try to get damn slick

i see ya soon to be all ass out like my avator pic
this loss gonna hurt more then getting cought between the elevator door with ya dick
u acted hard and wanted this battle u dumb-man
but u couldnt spit fat if u implated PUN-glance in ya lung span
u got heart but i'll hannibal ya style kid
cause i'll put out ya FIRE out N arms in da sea like squids *fire-arms*
its gonna be harder sleep'in on me then a spike bed
this win more difficult then havein amputated legs lost in a mountin-hike-shed
so for you'r sake i hope u WIDE-AWAKE-WILSON
cuz im about to stop ya whole mototive like blown-pistons

bang bang.... good night

Ok lets go

My rhymes hot nuffin u could eva intesify
Ur a snitch against ur man you'll prolly testify
Ur rhymes weak against me there is no effect
Light u up with red dots "sorry" dem are not hickies on ur neck
I dont care if u hustle or not or what block u claim
Da obituary column is where they will find ur name
Effects soft hearted-he gets emotional and mushie
so I send niggas 2 get a piece of em like he food or pussy
Im not a game Im a gangsta I'll smack u with da 5th
Catch u stopped at a light and snatch u out ur whip
He's not gangsta, noooo he's not gangsta at all
I treat em like a hang nail-just clippn him off
Effect attracted 2 some dick like some cotton 2 moth

holla at da KiD

Aiight dats da battle right there peeps.

But we uppin for votes

A winner is needed

Intensify Effect--- Punches Were Ok, You Had Some Metaz, And Alright Wordplay, Structure Could Have Been Better, And More Original Lines Could Have Been Better Too.... Overal Ok Verse...

GunzGalore- A Little To Gansta For A Battle Verse, Hang Nail Was Ya Best Line And Not Really A Punch... Structure Was Better Tan Intensify But Would Have Worked Nice With Good Punches... Overal Ok But Not As Good As I-E

Punches- I e
Flow- Gunz
Multis- Niether
Wordplay- I e
Structure- Gunz
Metaz- I e
Originality- Gunz
Personals- Niether


Final Vote----- Intensify Effect

Return Favor With Honest Vote'....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137169

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yo mayn, tha guy b-4 me thot gunz verse wuz a little 2 gangsta, but thats wut i like, both had good flow n structure. i liked tha part about them not bein hickies on ya neck, that wuz dope. so ima vote fo gunzgalore. werd

vote= gunzgalore, werd

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R.I.P. EAZY-E

Int- yo lines were stretched out and shit makin' it harder to get tha flow wit it and shit...yo rhymes were good and shit..but yo structure...work on that...

Gunz- yo structure was good wit tha flow...which was also good...yo vocab was ok...but all 2gether u merk'd this kid...

v/ GuNz

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Alright, neither drops were very good, both need to elevate...guns takes this with better structure, better flow, and harder punches...intensify...you barely through any punches and the ones you did throw, did not connect, elevate brah

Vote/GunzGalore...return the favor against DJulien in the sig

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Thanxx for all da support peeps
Still uppin for votes

Come on Peeps
gives us some votes
We still uppin
check this....http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137351

Oh man. This ones easy. Gunz got it.
This battle is self explanatory
I aint gotta say nuffin, its been said in da verses