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amayze 07-28-04 12:41 PM

ice pick vs amayze
 
Battle Rules:

10-14
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 07-31-04 at 12:41 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Ice Pick 07-28-04 12:44 PM

HUH

what the fuck is this

Im checkin in now and you better drop your verse 20 minutes after i drop mine

System 07-28-04 12:48 PM

Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 12:48 PM.

amayze 07-28-04 12:54 PM

gottq krew, wish u do...
don't nobody wanna b~STUPID.UGLY.GOOSE~

wut da fuck is wrong wit u
is dat ~FRIED PORK~ gettin 2 u

~BOSTON~ bake bean betta continue 2 dream
u 24 u should kno ~S.U.G~will neva b a real team

ya names ICEPICK...cuz neva was a hot pick...
couldn't b bigger dan me n da game...if i was as tall as a hobbit

so stop like it...like a car at a red light
u ICE cold...n couldn't b hot if u was struck by sunlight

dat ain't rite...but its true dats y u turnin blue
or is it da fact dat ima necbrace...in diss game n im chockin u

amayze 07-28-04 01:01 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by amayze
gottq krew, wish u do...
don't nobody wanna b a~STUPID.UGLY.GOOSE~

wut da fuck is wrong wit u
is dat ~FRIED PORK~ gettin 2 u

~BOSTON~ bake bean betta continue 2 dream
u 24 u should kno ~S.U.G~will neva b a real team

ya names ICEPICK...cuz neva was a hot pick...
couldn't b bigger dan me n da game...if i was as tall as a hobbit

so stop it like ...like a car at a red light
u ICE cold...n couldn't b hot if u was struck by sunlight

dat ain't rite...but its true dats y u turnin blue
or is it da fact dat ima necbrace...in diss game n im chockin u


he from BOSTON
HE TRYIN start a krew called S.U.G
he gotta thread called FRIED PORK

System 07-28-04 01:14 PM

amayze has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 01:14 PM.

Ice Pick 07-28-04 01:15 PM

Still matic yeah right your a wack addict,
I Flip the script and dicks are for chicks ya silly rabbit

Bsketball son ya you good at dribbling balls,
You got ya coaches 9 pressed deep in ya jaws

Nas ether please your flow aint even worth it
I seen a couple of your last battles and their fuckin worthless.

Time to flip the flow

Your speech is negative, you never hit and you rhyme wack,
Trying to up the Anti so much will cause an Ante-Climax,

Necks get abused, ima take my keyboard and rape you with it
Started, late to finish, can't Take It Off with Naked lyrics!

Fool's ripped, This Battles Like Your Virginity...I'll Never Lose It!
Like bringing retards to Hands On class...i bet your Feeling Stupid

Ice Pick 07-28-04 01:16 PM

S.U.G

is my realcrew in real life

i dont need no fuckin internet crews

Nice to see you posted befor i did

Good lookin

Ice Pick 07-28-04 01:17 PM

Still matic yeah right your a wack addict,
I Flip the script and dicks are for chicks ya silly rabbit

Bsketball son ya you good at dribbling balls,
You got ya coaches 9 inches pressed deep in ya jaws

Nas ether please your flow aint even worth it
I seen a couple of your last battles and their fuckin worthless.

Time to flip the flow

Your speech is negative, you never hit and you rhyme wack,
Trying to up the Anti so much will cause an Ante-Climax,

Necks get abused, ima take my keyboard and rape you with it
Started, late to finish, can't Take It Off with Naked lyrics!

Fool's ripped, This Battles Like Your Virginity...I'll Never Lose It!
Like bringing retards to Hands On class...i bet your Feeling Stupid

amayze 07-28-04 01:18 PM

yo lets get sum votes
n vote 4 deez other
batlles 4 me please
amayze vs novakane
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136749

2hard2lose
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136487

thanx

Ice Pick 07-28-04 02:09 PM

UppN for votes
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Ice Pick 07-28-04 06:04 PM

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Magic5 07-28-04 06:15 PM

Voted For: Ice Pick

Battle Verse 1
structure isnt very consistent...flow fell off due to the lack of consistency...no multis...wordplay was simple...a few, at best, of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Battle Verse 2
structure is good...flow is on target...u had nice multis...pretty good wordplay...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had good personals...Battle Verse 2 had the better structure...the more stable flow...more metas...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...Battle Verse 2 gets my vote...

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against Kizza...thanx...

Magic5 07-28-04 06:17 PM

I dont see my sig, so im assuming you cant either.

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=137919

Please return the favor on that battle^^

Thanx.

Ice Pick 07-29-04 09:31 AM

zStill matic, Nas etehr
Basketball

all personals from his profile,

so iare you sure you were reading right

Big Bad Wolf 07-29-04 10:47 AM

Voted For: Ice Pick

Yeah i felt dat Ice Pick came way harder. Dis battle was a fuckin blow out. Amayze dog that had 2 be your weakest shit ever. I couldnt flow wit yourz at all dog.
Flow- Ice Pick...couldnt really flow wit amayze's drop no hate but work on da flow son
Structure- Ice pick had it cuz hiz shit was all together (amayz yours was a little out a wak)
Wordplay_ Ice Pick...(amayze wat iz a hot pick) Ice jus had better vocab
Opener_ Ice pick (amayze wtf? Stupid Ugly Goose) I was feelin dat trix rabbit line

over all im votin for Ice cuz he jus came harder over all

vote honestly on dis battle

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138063

amayze 07-29-04 11:17 AM

thanx 4 da honest vote
big mayb i need 2 cum a lil
harder next time 4 u 2 feel it

Ice Pick 07-29-04 06:37 PM

Uupn For Some
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amayze 07-30-04 04:50 PM

thanx 4 ya honest votes
u guys can u please vote
4 deez other battles
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137991

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=136487

peace

Ice Pick 07-31-04 09:42 AM

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Ice Pick 08-01-04 10:53 AM

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Abraxas 08-01-04 11:37 AM

Voted For: Ice Pick

i'D GOTTA SAY THAT ICE PICK GOT THIS BATTLE COS HE HAD BETTER PUNCHES AND HIS STRUCTURE AND FLOW WAS OK
AMAYSE WAS WEAK AND WACK THERE WAS SOME GOOD LINES BUT NOT AS GOOD
VOTE GOES TO ICE PICK FOR A BETTER VERSE

PLEASE VOTE ON THIS BATTLE TO RETURN THE FAVOR
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=1452658

Ice Pick 08-01-04 02:14 PM

Upnn For Votes
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Ice Pick 08-01-04 07:18 PM

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M&rk 08-01-04 07:52 PM

Voted For: Ice Pick

yo amayze ya stuctures all fucked up u need to fix that quick. both of ya'll need to hook up some personals in ya battles fo real doe, i dont know if i read one.

but ............ i got give it to ice pic for some disses wit wordplay
Your speech is negative, you never hit and you rhyme wack,
Trying to up the Anti so much will cause an Ante-Climax,

Necks get abused, ima take my keyboard and rape you with it
Started, late to finish, can't Take It Off with Naked lyrics!

Fool's ripped, This Battles Like Your Virginity...I'll Never Lose It!

vote-ice pick

M&rk 08-01-04 07:55 PM

oh return the favor and hit this battle of mine up vs. dustyblunted
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138937

G_$peed 08-02-04 03:14 AM

Voted For: Ice Pick

ice pick cuz his flow was good and he was harder.
vote ice pick

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