yung duke vs intensify effect
 

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Yung Duke has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 04:10 PM.

intensify effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-28-04 04:15 PM.

i'll twist N compress this "forgetten-duke" skills, cuz hes "yung-flow" disgusted me
and im not just gonna beat'em, i'll OWN-HIM like a fight for custody

u'r work wouldnt have a sent of green if u was a fan of the packers
its sad, peep told u to flip a line but end up writting it backwards

why u think u'r always dope? when voters peep ya verse with blank-stares?
plus yung probley thinks "tac-tics" is when a clock needs repairs

dont ever think forgetten or yung is a contender
cuz i'll leave ya hang'in higher higher then erkuls nuts in hes suspender

which one are u dag might as-well put both of ya names in a blender
cuz u so supied u'll probley get forgetten to be u'r verse lender

dont ever think u'r any good under any circumstance
just cuz u write under advance dont mean ya verse will enhances BITCH

Dont ever call me a biter, unless you ready to get left in patches,
guess I'm number 13, out of ya 12 already open matches,
now come on, this dissin niggaz better than you shit is gettin old,
especially when just speakin my name can get you ko'd,
and you gone diss the kid, when my name you dont deserve to speak,
ya opponents votes is gettin dq'd and they still gettin the clean sweep,
ya name even describe this battle, cause my verse is "intense" and yours is frail,
now that's the cause, and the "effect" is your goi home wit an L,
I'll have him cryin to a judge, talkin bout Yung Duke just raped me,
only time you get steady votes, is if the way they got there was shaky,
and me and you aint on the same level, our names should be kept on different sectors,
now once again a biter? only thing I took a bite out of was ya record...
~Yung Duke~

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Voted For: Yung Duke

Battle Verse 1
structure is pretty good...flow is good for the most part...no multis...wordplay is pretty weak...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Battle Verse 2
structure is also pretty good...flow is good...no multis...wordplay was ok...some of ur punches connected...personals were decent...

Overall
both had a good structure...both had a good flow...both had decent wordplay...neither had multis...Battle Verse 2 had more connecting punches...as well as better personals...so basing off of that...Battle Verse 2 gets my vote..

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Voted For: Yung Duke

nice personals nice my vote was cuz of this battle http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982

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^^^ now u really think that wont get dq'd. come on people

upp'in this battle,

come on dont sleep on my verse people.....

uppin

uppin, and aint nobody sleepin on it, it just sucks

Voted For: intensify effect

Intens- Flow Was Good, Punches Hit, Structure Was Decent, And Some Lines Were Original, Others Not So....

Yung Duke- Flow Was Ok, Punches Were So So...Structure Wasnt Bad...But You Had A Personal Here And There.....

Punches- Inten
Personals- Yung
Flow- Tie
Multis- Niether
Wordplay- Inten
Metaphor- Niether
Vocab- Inten
Structure- Tie
Originality- Yung

Final Vote- Inten
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Voted For: intensify effect

ima have to give this battle to intensity that urkel line jus ended the battle rigth there. His punches were better to
Yung duke had a hot finisher too, this battlew as pretty close but the V goes to Intensity
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137874
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intensify effect
i'll twist N compress this "forgetten-duke" skills, cuz hes "yung-flow" disgusted me
and im not just gonna beat'em, i'll OWN-HIM like a fight for custody
Blah doesn't make sense
u'r work wouldnt have a sent of green if u was a fan of the packers
its sad, peep told u to flip a line but end up writting it backwards
Ok idea, blahza lines, worded wrong
why u think u'r always dope? when voters peep ya verse with blank-stares?
plus yung probley thinks "tac-tics" is when a clock needs repairs
blah
dont ever think forgetten or yung is a contender
cuz i'll leave ya hang'in higher higher then erkuls nuts in hes suspender
'higher higher'?ha, no
which one are u dag might as-well put both of ya names in a blender
cuz u so supied u'll probley get forgetten to be u'r verse lender
your so stupid you can't even spell STUPID!
dont ever think u'r any good under any circumstance
just cuz u write under advance dont mean ya verse will enhances BITCH
Blah blah

Some decent ideas, fell off towards the end.Content was blah, wordplay was so so, no real decent set up to help your punches.& your vocab is horrible, learn how to spell before you go calling someone stupid, supied... geez

Yung Duke
Dont ever call me a biter, unless you ready to get left in patches,
guess I'm number 13, out of ya 12 already open matches,
Filler
now come on, this dissin niggaz better than you shit is gettin old,
especially when just speakin my name can get you ko'd,
blah
and you gone diss the kid, when my name you dont deserve to speak,
ya opponents votes is gettin dq'd and they still gettin the clean sweep,
filler times 2
ya name even describe this battle, cause my verse is "intense" and yours is frail,
now that's the cause, and the "effect" is your goi home wit an L,
not creative w/ the L flip, I've seen many & thats wack
I'll have him cryin to a judge, talkin bout Yung Duke just raped me,
only time you get steady votes, is if the way they got there was shaky,
blah
and me and you aint on the same level, our names should be kept on different sectors,
now once again a biter? only thing I took a bite out of was ya record...
OK... for a guy like you

No meta's or wordplay, flow was unco, seemed more like a 'I Hate You' letter then a actual battle verse

V/Intense;Cause he had a battle verse

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Ha, can't poll my vote... oh well someone misses out

Uppin for REAL votes

Voted For: Yung Duke

Yo dis was pretty close but i gotta give it to yung cuz he jus had better shit. His Punchez hit harder( out of tha few yall had. Flow and structure was better(jus look at it). Out of originality an wordplay i think Intinsify had it but errthing else goes 2 yung.

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uppin. and you lucky I didnt set it up. I wouldve made it so only vets people could vote

^^ shut up clown....

upp'in this battle........

Voted For: intensify effect

you won jus sayin betta tings get me

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Voted For: intensify effect

i liked this drop alot,it was good i woud've like ta see a closer syllable count on your short lines but ya vocab was way better..i think this way of written really works in your favour..this was alot better than what i've previously seen from ya....favorite line was"custody line"in da whole battle..
da other verse was ok but lacked in strong punches n content...i ain't a d/r but i give credit were credits due...pc
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upp'in for more votes fellas, THANKS again everyone for voting.....

i will return the favor of a vote just drop the link......

Voted For: Yung Duke

i vote for young duke bette flow i like flow ight nigga peace

This was feedback posted for intensify effect
 

flows were even as well as struture both had good personals but yung got over a little better with his.intesity had stronger punches and a few better bars and yung killed his ending better and got him too good with the personals so i gotta give him my vote still it was a good battle.




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Voted For: intensify effect

intensifyed effect cuz he had punchlines and betta flow

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Voted For: Yung Duke

hot closing and ending fa sho..
best lines:
I'll have him cryin to a judge, talkin bout Yung Duke just raped me,
only time you get steady votes, is if the way they got there was shaky,
^besides the opener and closer.. u won this hands down so.. ur my vote..

aight then holla..
~wun~

Voted For: Yung Duke

overall yung had the stronger verse... and he killed it with the closer....nice ending... had a few personals in there ... wasn't feeling the shaky line or the opener but everything else was at least decent....

intensify had a good opener but then started going downhill after that... the tac-tics line was iffy... urkel line was funny... last two bars were bad... blah... a good battle none-the-less... pretty evenly matched.... but i gave it to yung

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