manipulation vs raw killa
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Biting
No feeding
No re-writin verses seeing this is still our re-battle from las nite dat got closed
No dick riders
No haters

ONLY HONEST N REAL VOTES RB LETS GO MANIP LETS DO DIS

good luck

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-03-04 at 03:06 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

raw killa has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 03:07 PM.

u say i cant rhyme a verse 4 shit,yet rhymes hit yo face each time i spit,bitch da only
spit,u have is when u suck cum from dick,n at least im all round n u got fake tits,
filled wit silcone bitch,dis chick,gangsta i see nuttin but white boys in here clique/

i rhyme,perfectly on each 1 of my lines,ima manipulate dis hoe into swallowin 9's,
n im not tlkn bout da inches of my dick,but dis tek i spit blowin out of her mind,
i came back 2 take da win dat rightfully mine,i cant rhyme,bitch must b sleepin
due 2 effects of drinkin 2 many glasses of wine,sit down hoe dis my time,2 shine/

"i think your ugly..but i might hang your picture on my wall,itd scare intruders from
breaking in..whilst im out on call",so u do make booty calls,i knew u was hoe n there da answer
after all,only fight u had is when u n ya pimp,n ya bed havin a brawl,n da only rhythm u got
is when ya moans n bed frame poundin da wall,dis transvestite piss standin up in da stall,
get over urself its clear u admire me dats why my picture's hung up on ur wall/

ur fuckin wit a lyrical genius,so y dont u n ya peeps step away from my penis,
cuz ive been droppin bombs ever since i was a fetus/

i feel sry fo your parents,ya birth musta stooped the whole marriage,unlike cinderella
yo ugly ass will neva be da fairest,wit a face like dat even god is embarressed/

claimed in da beginin no beef but she dealt da gravy,n dis bitch so desperate she goin crazy,
but u best respect yo pimp bitch n pay me,or they gonna need puzzle specialist 2 perform
ur autopsy if u keep fuckin wit me,u pm'ed me like 10 times da otha day u musta liked my company/

ima continue 2 b a pain her mouth wit my dick in yo jaw,fuck dis on goin beef im killin dis
bitch 4 pissin me off,like wyclef n mary ima have her singin "sum1 plz call 911" cuz im breakin
da law,dis post n my gun was da last things she saw,i guess dat'll teach ya not 2 piss me off/

good luck n like da rules say......:
NO DICK RIDERS
NO HATERS
NO RE-WRITIN VERSES GOT ME GOOD LUCK

FUCK OFF.no re-writing verses.

in our over battle the line limit was 12 lines...which i only wrote.
because ur a fukin retard who cnt read the rules
u came up with about 30 lines.
SO....i will b extending my verse to the same line length of yours..
so drop ur verse....

also because i am normal....
the rules state unlimited line lenght...so i can post as many as i want,n no mods gonna question it because its automated

so i am warning u now.
if u dnt agree within the nxt 15mins i will decline this battle???
u understand that????.....u fukin retard?

ok...now were getting sumwhere.

ill let u add on 2 wut u already had but no totally re-writin shit deal.ayt bout da shit from las nite but u betta not b a cheatin winna n try 2 keep dat win if u real i suggest u tell administrators 2 kill dat win til dis battle is over 4 tru honest wins n ya should of told me when u was done las nite....hence pm'd me so ur fault not mine
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^^^thankyou 4 understanding wot i am saying.
i will now chk in.

MaNiPuLaTiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 03:17 PM.

bitch u got a lot of nerve tlkn bout sum1 u dont kno shit ive been through more fucked up shit then u can imagine n u can continue writin from ur original verse until its equal in length 2 mine n i mean it no fuckin dick riders,no haters,n certainly no crew member votes like i said i saw how u got ur las vote in our first battle from riff raff no cheatin bitch deal

fuck off.................

i only joined riff raff`s crew(destined2rhyme) yesterday.
the other battle we had was b4 that
id neva spoke 2 tha guy b4

dawg..do u realise every time u come out with a stupid,unthoughtout comment
i am gonnaq rip itback on you????........u should b more carefull dawg..honestly..

ive seen ur verse..n as usual your structure sucks,n it dnt rhyme.
your crazy.u cnt win.period.

ur fuckin blind cunt if u say my fuckin verse doesnt rhyme u hatuin sake of fish bitch u straight askin 2 b stalked n murdered for da shit u tlk hoe n dont think im playin
my structure was way betta than las time 2 slut so we'll see u fuckin pussy as least i got enough 2 fuckin continue rappin u continue bitchin n actin

murder me then....................ha.hahahahahahaha

n jus so u people of rv kno me n manipulation deaded our beef so follow da rules n no hate,dick riders n crew vote thank you n manipulation thank u n good luck holla back mami peace n 1 luv

i beat this guy twice..hes wack
i always got im on his back
u cnt beat me thatys the way it goes
so i beat u..dnt even botha to show.

lmao

ha.ok here i go.............

this bitch wanna go again...not happy with the k.o i hit with in da first..
fixed that wack structure yet?..damn that shit really belongs in a hearse!..
dawg you couldnt see two straight lines if you woz on a train track..
bitch, you stretchin them worse than william wallace...on tha rack!..
laugh at all your dickriders ...how u beat this guy thats DAJOKAH...lmfao
your styles got more rotting ingredients than a bottle of coke-a...!
only chance u gotta b on top of me is havin ur name in this thread..
coz wit ur ugly ass it sure aint gon b in bed, n as for ur skill..ha!..nuff said
didnt hve to come hard to beat you..consider u the pray n im tha mantis..
now turn around quik n leave..u lookin more lost than tha "city of atlantis!"..



i couldnt b bothered adding more to it raw.

good luck 2 both baby girl it nuttin but love now c'mon people uppin dis shit peep it.....
NO DICK RIDAZ,HATAZ W/E JUS STRAIGHT HONEST OPINION'S N VOTES holla back at me next time u on msn mami peace^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Voted For: raw killa

Flow: MaNiPuLaTiOn
STrcuture: MaNiPuLaTiOn
Punches: raw killa
Personalz: raw killa
Metas: raw killa
Enkoyment: raw killa
VOTE: raw killa

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hmmmmmmmmmm.

uppin.....................................

Voted For: raw killa

ummm...well..she spit 4 lines, he spit...well he spit a lot, so obviously unless ur a hata...raw won this battle

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Voted For: raw killa

raw killa got u man........ this aint even hard........ manip didnt even take this shit seriously, he sed only "honest votes" but u didnt give us an honest verse........ i dont even think i should vote on this, i think they should juss redo it cuz raw brought it, and i dont think manip saw it comin....... manip i know u better then this, i saw one of ur battles and it was a lot better...... anyways all love........... im still uppin for votes, juss like this battle, the guy i battle wasnt even makin sense or tryin...........hit me up

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...465978&posted=1

thanx 4 da votes n opinons people c'mon uppin dis battle good luck mami u knoo its all love now peace manip holla back people peace out 1 luv uppin dis shit^^^^^^^^^^

Voted For: raw killa

A fuckin blowout. Raw had dis shit... His flow was way better.Structure was way better,look at manipulation's. Personalz...raw had it. Itz like youngin didnt try to win. Word play, damn raw took dat shit. Manipulation had dat 2nd grade shit. It said 6 min barz. I seen better from you dog anyway keep elevatin.
v/rawkillah

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Voted For: raw killa

Raw Killa Took This Hands Down..

Reason Be Is Manip Must Have Thought He Was Gonna No Show And He Didn't...But Anyway Yes, Raw Took This With A Real Verse...Although It Wasnt That Great...

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ok lil kay n dis las guy i can understand theyre votes bein dq'd but daquake at least made a chart of wut he/she felt had it sronger in wut places...but w/e i hatin dis-qualify 3 fuckin votes i swear u moderators must hate competition or sumtin...oh well still got love 4 ya maunip i aint mad u mami jus da hataz on dis site....oh well people keep votin n explain'em damn i tired of votes bein dq'd for lack of explaination oh well uppin dis bitch c'mon give us ur feedback n honest votes...no dick riders...haters...yotta yotta like da rules say rv got me...holla back thanx 4 da love so far good luck baby girl holla

upp,...................
cumon get them votes in 4 raw.
he won this.......

Voted For: raw killa

yo mani wat was up wit that dawg? u supposed to battle wat was that?,

but ne way

Structure-Raw
Flo-Raw
Punches-Raw
Vocab-Raw,
shit man evrythin to raw mani dint evn try
uh

v/Raw killa

Voted For: raw killa

Raw killah got this easily. first of all, the minimum is 6 lines so her verse is DQed anyway, plus the rhymes in it were mediocre anyway with no real punch.. i give this to raw killah mostly because of effort and because he had everything that she lacked.. punches, wordplay, etc.. so raw killah you get my vote..

return favor with a drop in mine will u? thanx..

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uppin to close this.

sorry yall 4 the wackness.
i dint think hed show....

oh well...........
uppin 1 more vote

Overall a good battle. I was feelin both dropz. I say raw had it though.Manipulation had a better structure and i was feelin his flow a lil more. But raw had dem nice punchez. They hit harda an he had betta an more personalz than you.Metas was bout tha same but tha vote goes to Raw Killa he jus came harda wit it.

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Voted For: raw killa

man u hurt him bad i belive lol wtf is 4 line gonna do????