MaNiPuLaTiOn vs triple_n
 

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6 -14 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

blind spit


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MaNiPuLaTiOn has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 02:22 PM.

Triple_N has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 02:28 PM.

Her state gave her court order to only come out at night
Thats why she see's in for red cuz they dem the street lights
Your hideously ugly, u should stop and read the signs
Even if u were a traffic ticket u still wouldn't be fine
This battle's a waste, like incorrect math u've been erased
Do u post in wet cement? cuz ya elevation's stuck in 1 place
You've obviously lost, the whole forum is in stipulation
Sorry ma', this time u can't use cleavage for manipulation
Your weakest in newbie-crew, ya smile resembles a asscrack
Ya look's so stank, scooby-doo wouldn't eat ya snack
Ya shitty spits Destin 2 Reek the whole forum
Why u think u get no votes, stinch makes us purposely ignore'em
Ya rec's an illusion like ya heavily made up face in pic
Its an extact copy of ya occupation, just a trick

i cause u strife..u dont rap like that "was your life"..
cudnt b called sick,twisting tha knife in ya beaten wife..
as you grasp the mic u start ta choke,like hair ta throat..
you drowning, u sinking, like titanic..ice berg ta boat..
your structure easy to knock down than m.f.i flat-packs..
couldnt lay two straight lines..if this was train tracks..
claim master of punchlines..spits couldnt cause shoe-shines..
only time cause a stink..is wen u cleaning up ya shit lines..
your brain so simple..u had ta multiply ya name 3 times..
couldnt read between my lines..if u was vertabrai ta spines..
you write like you mike tyson..u jus dribblin from the eye
u should retire, u 2 old..should b wit kids playin eye-spy..

yo
 

triple..........how u get that link in your post????

i cnt seem to do it no more coz i used to insert hyperlink
but that aint an option in the post box????

if u clear your mailbox I'll pm you info on how to insert links cuz I ain't telling the whole board

^^^^^^aight
 

aight thanx man....its clear..................................

Voted For: Triple_N

hmm... i think triple got this, due to the personals and how he was rippin at her pic (nice boobs :D)... he was goin at her lol... id say id rather read some personals (good ones), then read metas... she had alot of metas that were straight, but i dont think she matched him this battle... pretty decent battle tho..

This was feedback posted for MaNiPuLaTiOn
 

That was an ok drop,nothing really stood out to me.I see you had some personals.Didn't have no multies besides in the first bar.Stucture was good and wordplay was cool.Punches were ok.

^My bad 4 that,I didn't know it did like that.

Triple_N had a nice verse.Structure was good and the punches were hitting much harder than Manipulation.

Vote=Triple_N

Voted For: Triple_N

Triple N Killed This One With Ease Ill have To Say

Open..

Her state gave her court order to only come out at night
Thats why she see's in for red cuz they dem the street lights

Pretty Good 9/10

cause u strife..u dont rap like that "was your life"..
cudnt b called sick,twisting tha knife in ya beaten wife..

Kinda Wack 7/10

Closer

Ya rec's an illusion like ya heavily made up face in pic
Its an extact copy of ya occupation, just a trick

Enough To Beat Him..8.6/10

you write like you mike tyson..u jus dribblin from the eye
u should retire, u 2 old..should b wit kids playin eye-spy..

Played 4/10

Winner Triple N

yo star u voted wrong...dats why it didn't poll.....

^Yo my bad.Its my first time using the new system.

uppin.............yeh triple u killed me.
gud verse..i jus cudnt find any personals against ya.
thanx for tha info
peace

though polifick.
u cnt say the mike tyson shit woz played.
the dribblin from tha eye i woz referin to only happened yesterday!!(against williams)

couldt lay 2 straight lines if this was train tracks she either spit that before or stole it i know i read it manipulation is dq ed

^^^^^^^^^piss off....stop hate votin on ma battles.
n stop stirring shit.wot u pissed off coz u cnt beat me yaself.
u wanna start shit,then fuck u ,i`ll fukin show u.

Voted For: Triple_N

welll...T_N came strong......hard punchs...........nice metas................pretty good all round verse...sum personals too

Manip-I aint weak like other so I dont d/r chicks but........ya verse ...didnt have any hard hittin or connecting punches.........ok metaphours.......some lines a lil played though....


v/N

Voted For: Triple_N

yo i didn't feel a single punch in manipulation's verse and the shit was mad elementary. and i didn't feel much in triple n's but one.......
Your hideously ugly, u should stop and read the signs
Even if u were a traffic ticket u still wouldn't be fine
.......
good wordplay, i thought of this exact line basically, so i gotta respect it.

yo drop an HONEST vote on this my battle please........HELP STOP THE DICKRIDING

Voted For: Triple_N

MANIPULATION BEST LINES
couldnt lay two straight lines..if this was train tracks..
claim master of punchlines..spits couldnt cause shoe-shines..
only time cause a stink..is wen u cleaning up ya shit lines..
your brain so simple..u had ta multiply ya name 3 times..


TRIPLE N BEST LINES
Even if u were a traffic ticket u still wouldn't be fine
Do u post in wet cement? cuz ya elevation's stuck in 1 place
Sorry ma', this time u can't use cleavage for manipulation
Your weakest in newbie-crew, ya smile resembles a asscrack
Ya rec's an illusion like ya heavily made up face in pic
Its an extact copy of ya occupation, just a trick

I THOUGHT TRIPLE WAS MORE CREATIVE...I WAS FEELIN HIS LINES MORE,ALTHOUGH I THOUGHT THE SCOOBY DOO ONE WAS GAY.....BUT OTHER THAN THAT,I THINK HE TOOK THIS....

VOTE TRIPLE