7*0*8* vs ill bing aka U.G
 

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Check in by: 08-02-04 at 03:00 AM

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7*0*8* has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 03:02 AM.

are you ready

ill bing aka U.G has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 03:05 AM.

you battlen the the fate of hip hop if u disacary i'am emty clips in to your spot i coped you bullshit ryhms// found out you a dum blond got a half a mind// the last time you sall your dick// is when you was riden it//dropen shit like im in quwad//close's thing you get to bein black is kolad// packen pads //cuss you a bitch always on your rag//

~you can't see wins~like RV is a tunnel of fog~
~u from da same place as courage the cowardly dog~
~ you tryin 2 get wins, is like trix wit da rabbit ~
~ u want skillz, but even online u can't hack it ~
~ like the "free" posts u did u yo rap is "costless"~
~u and wack go betta den jesus and crosses ~
~ u tried yo best~ but still u loss this~
~ u so wack u can't show yo text wins and losses~
~you and UG blow and suck like vacums~
~ no lie, truly yo rap see more shit than bathrooms~

*explaination: it says he from nowhere on his profile
an so is courage the cowardly dog....*

why you on that cartoon shit// bizzar barz from the luns bit// you get off like the soft shit on downy //you think you really clowned me//

y u spit some moe lines? duz dat count as part of your verse? neway uppin 4 votes.....

a due i got a qustion why do people say uppin 4 votes

2 get there battle 2 da top of da list so ppl will vote on it which they hardly do

Voted For: 7*0*8*

7*0*8*
structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few multis...wordplay is tight...some of ur punches conected...decent personal...

ill bing aka U.G
what the fuck is up with ur structure...dont write in paragraphs yo...flow fell off due to the wackness in structure...no multis...wack wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals..

Overall
7*0*8* had the better structure...the more stable flow...more multis...better wordplay...more connecting punches...and better personals so basing off of that...7*0*8* gets my vote...

VOTE - 7*0*8*

Please return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig.

Thanx.

Voted For: 7*0*8*

yo dis goes to 708 um lil bing yo shit dint evn make sense i mean it was str8 but it kinda was offf da tempo of da battle n 708 took u, lyrically he murked ya

thanx

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Voted For: 7*0*8*

7*0*8, that Courage line was a little childish, but you made it work. Overall you had better punches, and U.G you're structure was just off. 7, you got it.
vote-7*0*8

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Voted For: 7*0*8*

not a great battle,first verse's structure was pretty terrible n with the //kinda ruined any chance of flow..vocab was'nt very good..second verse..decent structure but dint like the~other than that good punches,decent personals..nothin to special by it was enough ta get the win...keep droping..

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Voted For: 7*0*8*

Ok.. Ill bring, your structure was horrible, and made me not even wanna read it. but when I did, you didn't have any puches or good lines. Your opener was not that good, or you closer.. 708, you had nice stucture, yo flow was better and you came with some punches, so in the end yo verse was overall better.. V/708

Can you return the favor with a drop in mines? thanx..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139363