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08-02-04, 09:14 PM | #1 | |||||
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Leroy Lyric vs The Kid P-Dizzle
IP: 0ABC 464B
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10 - 15 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting CheCcin In. Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-02-04 at 09:44 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. This Battle Is Now Closed
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08-02-04, 09:14 PM | #2 | ||||||
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Leroy Lyric has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 09:14 PM.
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08-02-04, 09:30 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
The Kid P-Dizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-02-04 09:30 PM.
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08-02-04, 09:52 PM | #4 | ||||
In ya area.
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
Do not post your verse here. You must use the form in the first post
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08-02-04, 10:01 PM | #5 | |||
In ya area.
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
They call me the Kid, yet my rhymes far from adolescent/
Don't be jealous of my youth 'cuz you got molested/ You tested and you failed, your chest'll get impaled/ 'Cuz I'm sharp, fuck bitches while you sexin' wit' a male/ Even if hell is where you sailed you're not hot as me/ Like uncontrolled intersections, you're not stoppin' me/ But probally, if you wanted all of me, I'll stretch you out/ Like your ass in your prison cell sodomy/ It's gotta be me, I'll strip you of your title like a nudist colony/ 'Cuz your raps are pussy, you dick, you can't body me/ If you callin' me, out, I got one word/ Of warning, fuck wit' Dizzle you'll get peeled like a sunburn!/ There's my shit - 12 bars, short n' sweet. What you got for me? |
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08-02-04, 11:14 PM | #6 | |||||
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IP: C1DA C961
Lets Get To It.
. . . Burn and Bury your corpse, Accepting this, you asking to get yo ass kicked...’ Kid ‘u get smoked’ so bad I got crack heads getting ‘stoned’ from yo ashes!! Leave your bones in baskets, Bringing ‘Blades’ to this battle like Wesley. you ‘suck’ impulsively like ‘thirsty kids’ on a mommas nipple when she ‘Breast Feeds’ I bump you with bangers, got you lost in my text’ like you got Humped By Strangers!! Beat you until ‘Jesus’ questioning your issue, like you were throwing Punches at Mangers!! Lets change it up... I’ FLIP THOUGHTS, bang brains until you leak portions and I’m eligible to GRIP QUARTS... And you stay in ‘Deep Shit’ like You stay up peoples asses with Shovels & PITCH FORKS I Bring The Pain, So Kid I’m Bound to ‘MISTAKE YOU BOY’...Put a SHAKE IN YOUR VOICE... Only time you “Flames & ‘Flare(Flair) is when I label your text ‘NATURE BOY!!’. lmao!! Finisher... I’ll make you ‘HISTORY’, people see our battle and claim you ‘WORST THEN WRITTEN!! Even at BIRTH YOU BITCHING!, Cause you stay ‘cut short’ like MIDGETS going through CIRCUMCISION!! 12 Bars, and it’s done... M.U.R.K.E.D!! |
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08-02-04, 11:37 PM | #7 | ||||
In ya area.
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IP: 39C2 8F9E
murked? yeah, right. Uppin' for votes people, don't be shy.
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If you consider 4/20 a holiday, you probably smoke more crack than weed.
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08-02-04, 11:37 PM | #8 | |||||
~CharT ToppA~
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
Voted For: Leroy Lyric
structure:KID punches: actually none were good but KID"s was better flow: KID wordplay: Leroy metas: Leroy multis: KID vote/KID Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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08-02-04, 11:38 PM | #9 | |||||
~CharT ToppA~
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IP: 9EF2 7F0D
yo i voted wrong.... get da mods 2 delete my vote cuz kid took dis
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08-02-04, 11:39 PM | #10 | |||||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 7BE2 A0A1
Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle
yo dis shit was close, structure- Kid Vocab-Kid Punches-tie Flow -Lyric |
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08-03-04, 06:24 AM | #11 | ||||||
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This was feedback posted for The Kid P-Dizzle
IP: 5671 DBDD
ok kid good struture and flow but you need to work on punches and disses.leroy good punches and your vocab and wordplay killed him and your ending was hot.leroy wins hands down with a better verse
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08-03-04, 09:09 AM | #12 | |||||
©Lyrical Masterpiece©
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IP: 6356 8AC3
Voted For: Leroy Lyric
P-Dizzle They call me the Kid, yet my rhymes far from adolescent Don't be jealous of my youth 'cuz you got molested ~No punches...self glorification 5/10 You tested and you failed, your chest'll get impaled 'Cuz I'm sharp, fuck bitches while you sexin' wit' a male ~Gay concept def played 5/10 Even if hell is where you sailed you're not hot as me Like uncontrolled intersections, you're not stoppin' me ~Self glorification, no punch 5/10 But probally, if you wanted all of me, I'll stretch you out Like your ass in your prison cell sodomy ~Gay concept again..played 5/10 It's gotta be me, I'll strip you of your title like a nudist colony 'Cuz your raps are pussy, you dick, you can't body me ~Your only attempted punch 6/10 If you callin' me, out, I got one word Of warning, fuck wit' Dizzle you'll get peeled like a sunburn! ~weak...no punch 5/10 Leroy Burn and Bury your corpse, Accepting this, you asking to get yo ass kicked...’ Kid ‘u get smoked’ so bad I got crack heads getting ‘stoned’ from yo ashes!! ~Decent punch, okay wordplay 7/10 Leave your bones in baskets, Bringing ‘Blades’ to this battle like Wesley. you ‘suck’ impulsively like ‘thirsty kids’ on a mommas nipple when she ‘Breast Feeds’ ~Good punch n nice wordplay 7/10 I bump you with bangers, got you lost in my text’ like you got Humped By Strangers!! Beat you until ‘Jesus’ questioning your issue, like you were throwing Punches at Mangers!! ~Decent, not as good as your first two bars 6.5/10 I’ FLIP THOUGHTS, bang brains until you leak portions and I’m eligible to GRIP QUARTS... And you stay in ‘Deep Shit’ like You stay up peoples asses with Shovels & PITCH FORKS ~Okay multis...coulda been a better punch 7/10 I Bring The Pain, So Kid I’m Bound to ‘MISTAKE YOU BOY’...Put a SHAKE IN YOUR VOICE... Only time you “Flames & ‘Flare(Flair) is when I label your text ‘NATURE BOY!!’ ~Okay wordplay with a decent punch 7.5/10 I’ll make you ‘HISTORY’, people see our battle and claim you ‘WORST THEN WRITTEN!! Even at BIRTH YOU BITCHING!, Cause you stay ‘cut short’ like MIDGETS going through CIRCUMCISION!! ~haha Nice wordplay and a good punch 8/10 The Kid P-Dizzle= 31/60 Leroy Lyric= 43/60 Vote:Leroy Lyric Reason:Coming with harder punches, better wordplay, and good multis
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08-03-04, 09:11 AM | #13 | |||||
©Lyrical Masterpiece©
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IP: 6356 8AC3
Some of you playas need to learn how to vote...need to learn what Multis are..because Kid had none lol, thinkin a d/r?
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08-03-04, 10:08 AM | #14 | |||||
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IP: 3240 794D
Werd, I Aint Even Stressin Them Wack Shit, Uppin ^^
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08-03-04, 10:11 AM | #15 | |||||
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IP: 4550 84E0
aint even tryin to sway, but you did merk him...he'll either get a few pity votes, or a few d/r tho, thats how it always goes
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