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pictureperfect2 vs DustyBlunted
Battle Rules:
house rules, blind spit get yours up as soon as u can 10 -12 lines Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 08-04-04 at 05:13 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
DustyBlunted has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 05:13 PM.
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pictureperfect2 has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-01-04 05:14 PM.
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Look,
My dialect demands respect, when i reflect with my war like intelect.. Always remember real THUGS don't battle on the internet.. I'll push you of a building with the mic chord around your neck.. The cops know who did it like I was the "Usual Suspect"... This battle you'll regret, better come correct,No battle i'll neglect... With my ILL lyrical content,my followers build me monuments.. On the 7 continents, In every State, In every providence... So hold the derogatory comments.... I'll put this emcee in the ground next to his rotting hero(2pac) DustyBlunted record just improved to two and zero.... |
Only one battle u aint shit, beginners luck, soon to be shown a fluke
Db ya rhymes is discusting, this aint my spit he just made me puke My bitch slapped call out was “who’s dumb enough”, fo real not fake Don’t make a mistake, vote for me, carry out this fool’s fate Not only u stupid but this bitch ugly, honestly db’s not good looking Pugly wouldn’t even be considered it as the main course in home cooking I spit fire--, sirens go off, u disordily run out the battle, exits unknowing U spit--, smoke clears people leave not from fire.. cuz your annoying Trust me db u aint on my level, how many Canadian known to rap? Only time u considered above me is while checkin out a map Check his location he’s slutty, even makes the alphabet look sleazy Sandwiching AB in his location, only sick from aids u fake ass easy-E Easy- E died from aids, and I was playin off easy meaning slutty, so with the alphabet and looking sleazy and him wantin to be like him. Hope ya get it. |
Only one battle u aint shit, beginners luck, soon to be shown a fluke
Db ya rhymes is discusting, this aint my spit he just made me puke My bitch slapped call out was “who’s dumb enough”, fo real not fake Don’t make a mistake, vote for me, carry out this fool’s fate Even newbs brush off and light up dusty blunted when they’re spitting U suck and don’t belong on this site, but at least your names’s fitting I spit fire--, sirens go off, u disordily run out the battle, exits unknowing U spit--, smoke clears people leave not from fire.. cuz your annoying Trust me db u aint on my level, how many Canadian known to rap? Only time u considered above me is while checkin out a map Check his location he’s slutty, even makes the alphabet look sleazy Sandwiching AB in his location, only sick from aids u fake ass easy-E Easy- E died from aids, and I was playin off easy meaning slutty, so with the alphabet and looking sleazy and him wantin to be like him. Hope ya get it. |
uppin, lets start with at least one vote damn
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This was feedback posted for DustyBlunted
Since Im in your crew I cant vote so Ill leave you sum feedback.You had the right idea to put a bunch of multies in your verse,firt of all,it adds to your verse.But the thing is,you had too much "self ups" in youe verse,meaning you were talking about how evil and gangstaish you are.In battles,focus more on personals dissing your opponent on contents in their profiles and their names and stuff.I liked your line where you talked about real thugs not battling on the internet,that was well thought out.Your structure was pretty average,but your flow was kinda rough at parts.Just keep on battling and elevate,you'll get there.Average drop overall,focus more on the opponent.
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Voted For: DustyBlunted
Only one battle u aint shit, beginners luck, soon to be shown a fluke Db ya rhymes is discusting, this aint my spit he just made me puke 5/10 My bitch slapped call out was “who’s dumb enough”, fo real not fake Don’t make a mistake, vote for me, carry out this fool’s fate 5/10 Even newbs brush off and light up dusty blunted when they’re spitting U suck and don’t belong on this site, but at least your names’s fitting 5/10 I spit fire--, sirens go off, u disordily run out the battle, exits unknowing U spit--, smoke clears people leave not from fire.. cuz your annoying 5/10 Trust me db u aint on my level, how many Canadian known to rap? Only time u considered above me is while checkin out a map 4/10 Check his location he’s slutty, even makes the alphabet look sleazy Sandwiching AB in his location, only sick from aids u fake ass easy-E 5/10 My dialect demands respect, when i reflect with my war like intelect.. Always remember real THUGS don't battle on the internet.. 7/10 I'll push you of a building with the mic chord around your neck.. The cops know who did it like I was the "Usual Suspect"... 8/10 This battle you'll regret, better come correct,No battle i'll neglect... With my ILL lyrical content,my followers build me monuments.. 7/10 On the 7 continents, In every State, In every providence... So hold the derogatory comments.... 6/10 came down 2 better wordplay and harder punches |
Voted For: DustyBlunted
my vote goes to him cuz he had constant vocab and he was nice wit it....he has a nice flow n everything....da other guy had a nice verse too but it wasnt as good to me as this one was Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: DustyBlunted
Dusty had harder hittin punches tho' picture perfect had a good verse the punches coulda been harder. I say Dusty but it's debateable I liked this verse return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
wow, not a single punch and one personal and this cats winning, never deny the power of d/r's
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uppin
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Voted For: pictureperfect2
Flow: pictureperfect2 Punches: pictureperfect2 Structure: pictureperfect2 Personalz: DustyBlunted Metas: pictureperfect2 Creativity: DustyBlunted Enjoyment: pictureperfect2 VOTE: pictureperfect2 y'll return the fav and vgote in this battle plz http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138618 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin
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Yo how can they be dickridin..I've been on this site for 3 days...LoL
Stop before you start spittin it... My Sister burn your freestyle... My freestyle burn your writtin shit......lol..Dont get mad because heads see your broke down ass garbage vocab...step it up son..... |
upppin
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Voted For: DustyBlunted
db had beta content beta multis tha "usual suspect"punch was good but u could have delivered it better. picture perfect was far from it no good punchs n i found the over all rap boring. i will return all honest votes. ps. takin all challengers |
Voted For: pictureperfect2
My dialect demands respect, when i reflect with my war like intelect.. Always remember real THUGS don't battle on the internet.. I'll push you of a building with the mic chord around your neck.. The cops know who did it like I was the "Usual Suspect"... This battle you'll regret, better come correct,No battle i'll neglect... With my ILL lyrical content,my followers build me monuments.. On the 7 continents, In every State, In every providence... So hold the derogatory comments.... Dusty-Not breaking it down line by line..your verse was full of multis...but no punches...sorry but multis dont win battles, punches do pictureperfect2-It had a good structure which helped with the flow of it..you may not have had multis or wordplay, but you did less self glorifyin, and more throwin punches, and you get my vote for that |
dont worry about the Dickriders picture, i'll take care of them.....and Dusty, dont act like your hot shit...you cant rap battle...you could do topicals, and you could write open mics..but you need to elevate on your battlin...THROW PUNCHES
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"Dusty-Not breaking it down line by line..your verse was full of multis...but no punches...sorry but multis dont win battles, punches do"-justify
believe that^^^ damn, please dont vote if u dont understand what battling is. punches not multis. muthafucka i aint new to this |
Voted For: pictureperfect2
Stucture - Pictureperfect Flow - Pictureperfect Punches - Pictureperfect Multies - Dusty Personals - Pictureperfect Basically pictureperfect, you took it more categories. you had better flow, and more content.. also your stucture was better, only thing is that he got you on the multie, but that's it, so i vote for you, no hate.. can you return the favor with an honest drop in my thread? thanx.. heres the link.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139131 |
Voted For: pictureperfect2
i gave this to pictureperfect because he had some more personals and a nicer flow. I liked some of the multis but you could bring it harder with the punches. Same with Dusty. Always remember real THUGS don't battle on the internet.. i guess you aint a real thug. If you could look at my battles and give an honest vote thatd be cool Me vs Robkilla http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=139783 Me vs. **flex** http://community.rapverse.com/showb...81&page=2&pp=15 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Always remember real THUGS don't battle on the internet..
i guess you aint a real thug. ya u actually said that in a battle int the internet and your dickriders thought it was a good punchline, thats just stupid......... uppin |
Voted For: DustyBlunted
I liked the way Dustys flow was everything was ok not really any personals.....But I vote for dusty Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Picture shut the fuck up....Thats right im not a thug.... imma emcee...Real thugs dont sit on there computer they are out in the streets sellin crack and shit....so who the fuck is stupid??...you....I have a real job and make more money than your fake ass thug wannabe will ever make....
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thats 5 votes for me why is this post still open?.
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cuz half of em were unexplained and the other half were d/r's ;) and i'ma have to post this link in d/r forum again for Lodowns unexplained vote
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uppin.
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Voted For: pictureperfect2
Aiight good bat the breakdown says Vocab and multis goes to dusty but towards the end u was slacking punches go to pic easy cause dus aint have none pers go to pic as well cause dus aint have none struc tie multie tie overall enjoyment pic no hate good battle hit this up wihttp://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?t=140577th honest vote |
uppin .... i return shit
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This was feedback posted for DustyBlunted
Dis battle was ok
too bad I cant vote yet but Il will get back to u when I can |
upppin
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Voted For: pictureperfect2
ok not a classic battle but a good one. db one of the main reasons you lost my vote is that ur rhymes made sense but werent right, examples:'Always remember real THUGS don't battle on the internet..' (umm ur battling on the internet) and 'The cops know who did it like I was the "Usual Suspect"...' (since im pretty sure ur tawkin bout the movie, they didnt know who did it just watch it again if u dont beleive me) anyways pic, u need a lil bit of work on the punches cuz they didnt hit as hard as they should have. no hate. hit up the battles in the sig with votes. |
Dude...real thugs dont battle on the internet...hence im not a thug and the real ones dont come online...is that hard to understand...
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Voted For: pictureperfect2
Dusty man, u lost this battle for urself in the first 2 lines......... My dialect demands respect, when i reflect with my war like intelect.. Always remember real THUGS don't battle on the internet....... U called urself a pussy in that line too......... and ur "my record improved" line is played out............. neither was great but i got pictures closer so that gave him the battle, cuz besides that neither of all did great......... Db had multies, but picture had an overall better flow (and even tho there were few) he had better punches and personals............overall ok battle.............. but dusty lost it more then picture winnin it........... no hate tho.......... peace |
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