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Mr.Washington 08-02-04 04:55 AM

L.I. Diss.....dont sleep.
 
Anything I spits hot like the strike of a match...
only a few words and I already light up the track
I'm never bout relationships, I like the quick hit...
my lips kiss........more bitches lips than lip-stick
Im'a pimp kid.... you know I roll wit my feather in hat...
and your rhymes suck, there not even clever at that!
Never to bat.... lets just say this herb rides the pine...
or ur just lookin for Rascal's shadow ta hide behind
Lie in time.... but eventually you'll find out ur not a dope,
ur ass is in jeopardy.......like ur in jail and u drop the soap
clot ur hope..... i'll beat u netime anyhow so stop this joke
stick to text & topical, cuz in audio I'll just rock ur throat
gosh he spoke, all'a ur lingo is beat & its apparent that....
....you dont have to be good nemore....just to be arrogant
battle? you clearly lossed, spit nuthin but a mangy babble
had trouble wit ya words......like a bad game'a scrabble
CS?..... nothin.... my flow is murky like Village cedar....
n pepsi almost endorsed me...cuz'a how I kill this liter
Beatin me is a trip, it has journey like standards....
I leave you on a stretcher or gourney from damage
Can't wait to say it.... no choice but to bruise son....
better get elevated.......or hoist faggot choose one!
I'll treat u like Li'l flip....cuz this games been over awhile
..he actually thinks spittin bout 4leaf clovers in style!
Kid your not the herb i mention.... if i say pass the stuff.....
dope? please little bitch your lucky ur the grass I cut!!
Wash is quick.......so it's easy for me ta surpass u yup
and ur not good....
.............................so dont let this site gas you up!!

if the link dont work, just check our battle in elevated.

~Lady Fiya~ 08-02-04 05:10 AM

lmfao, omfgoodness.. i have no words to say.. *speechless* lol

ha ha u crazy.. L.I. gonna come back with sumthin'.. ( i would think ) but anyways, nice..

G_$peed 08-02-04 06:30 AM

coo and good ha you should check my open mics and battle wit ruffridah.
peace

Mr.Washington 08-02-04 03:58 PM

^ yea thanks for the feedback....
you fuckers sleep too much. uppn.

DV8 08-02-04 04:32 PM

THATS SOME TIGHT SHIT...link did'nt work but i'll check it out...damn..i think ya gonna have a battle on your hands nice shit wash....

raw killa 08-02-04 04:36 PM

i hear ya homie niggaz in dis site sleepin either dat or dey ego's gased up da size of our solar system 1 of da 2 peep my crew's song troubled minds holla back keep postin n stay up peace

Abraxas 08-02-04 05:40 PM

thats some tite shit man nice diss you should have actually put it up on front lines dissing him

nice flow and structure and the disses were nice

you got a crew

join ours

try out for lyrical virus

BrOTheRP.A.R.A. 08-02-04 06:36 PM

that was so pimped im speechless

Mr.Washington 08-02-04 06:48 PM

lol.....

intensify effect 08-02-04 07:05 PM

u dont need to really try out for LYRICAL ABUSE u got a spot if u want it....

the diss was sick, line for line was sick, the creativeness was hot and i felt ya anger dogs sometimes u gotta let these niggas know who not to fuck with or just put them in they place and it seems from what i read someone BEEN SONNED as soulles would say... hahaha....

nice shit....

9.7 outta 10

LYRICAL ABUSE got a spot for u remember that....

so holla back at me thru pm aight or on here aight one...

Guranteed 08-02-04 08:35 PM

that was good cause niggas think they tight jus cause they got a 7-1 battle record but in the real world of rap that aint gonna fly so big ups for keepin it real cause rap is basiclly about the "Open Mic's" so good job, peep this open mic
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138302

DON 08-02-04 08:49 PM

where are the punches?.......

MsBoOtYpHaT4U69 08-02-04 09:00 PM

Feelin it fa real no doubt papi!

FlowIntelligent. 08-02-04 09:03 PM

dope shit i was feelin the multies and wordplay some punches were kinda weak tho but overall dope piece

L.I. 08-02-04 09:15 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=139252
What yall think i wouldnt come back? lmao

Mr.Washington 08-03-04 04:44 AM

lol.... up.....

FLooZe 08-03-04 02:41 PM

This was pretty good to say the least.Good punches with ok structure.Your flow was pretty nice,but you had too much self-ups in there.Focus on dissing him more than saying how good you are.I'm just givin' you tips so dont consider me hatin' or beefin'.Tight drop overall.


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